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Not sure how Jin would fit in there, unless they plant her as part of the waitstaff. She has no idea how to be fancy, you might as well as her to speak French.
SinfulSkills said
I will say that I think that Qdkowboy really should consider redoing his post interact with yours; but he was on his phone and phones, like I said, suck. No matter the size and 'smart phones' are anything but smart!


Truth. I'm surprised that he posted from the phone at all! I can't be bothered to type anything more than a few sentences with my phone. Between my big fingers and the autocorrect, it takes me ages to get down what I want.
SinfulSkills said
So I have a couple questions about your post. Would you mind if I PMed you?


Not at all! I welcome the help, my writing has been really lacking lately.
SinfulSkills said
I can understand the confusion reading the post, just a suggestion if you wish to write a response to what he wrote.I think that would help build the story between the two of them, maybe he could take the injured Jin to Tuck.-smiles-If you would like any suggestions for progress I'd be happy to help; I love helping people grow as writers, especially if they're willing to return the favor!-beams-Or if I'm being too aggressive you could say "Shut up Melly" and I'd understand and not be offended.-laughs-


*puzzled* But Jin hit the guy with the gun pointed at John across the face... with a rather large wrench. His post... and my post... can't exist in the same universe. So... *completely lost on how to continue* Help?
Kijani settled in the booth as well, wondering if it was coincidence that their server was Asian, or if you had to be to work at this place. "Spring water, please." She answered automatically when asked for a drink. When she saw the confused look cross the girl's face, she realized the mistake. Was there even spring water in a place like this? She would likely get some metallic tasting liquid from the faucet. "...so..." Kijani played with a dreadlock, winding it around her finger. "Now what?"
SinfulSkills said
(caught that he posted a while ago but I do know reading is hard on a phone) I understand the pain it is to be on a phone and try to role play.-smiles-Don't worry Dizzy, I'm sure he'd message back if he had power saying he did catch your awesome post.-nods-If I may make a suggestion, you could have Jin yell to John about someone about to jump him or shoot him; just an idea for communication between the characters.-smiles-


Hm. That's true. I just didn't really get a good idea of what John looked like, so I had to gloss over it pretty bad. I'll do better in future, hopefully.
Qdkowboy said
I'm On my phone I'll finish the drug terms when I get home. I was going to tell them the coke and weed can continue outside schools but we take 20 percent off the top to give back and no more meth and herion. Oh and crack. Fuck crack. John is persuasive but do y'all agreem


You seem to have completely ignored my post...
I'm in. Could toss a few characters in the mix.
Kijani followed him, rather pleased like he'd helped her out of his vehicle. Rather gentlemanly of him. "Buffet King. I don't think I've ever heard of it." She opened the door, and the scent of grease hit her nose before anything else. It was not really unpleasant. It still smelled like food, just... cheap food. Even so, her empty stomach grumbled. "Oh... I guess I'm hungrier than I thought. What are the prices, Taylor?" She managed to get a look at the buffet line. "Fried rice, eggrolls, chicken wings, chow mein..." She turned to him, confused. "A Chinese buffet? All the way out here?"
Oh, geez... Take it slow, Dext. The internet will be here tomorrow. Lots of rest and lots of fluids. -_- You should probably be in bed right now.
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