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<Snipped quote by Ubermensch>

I mean't that while using the bipedal stance as the main profile pic, but you do what fits you man. Like I said, he's all good to go.

@NorthernKraken

Gonna say this now - Nessie is definitely underpowered in her base form.

Most of the monsters that had been submitted so far are about the typical size compared to other kaiju from the Godzilla, Gamera, Ultraman, etc series. Now, while I don't mind smaller kaiju messing around with the humans - mostly as minions to large "hiveminds" or later on as allies once arc 1 is finished - this creature would probably be anchored in Loch Ness and be unable to move outside of it. Hence she wouldn't be really able to move around with the cast and ultimately be of much use.

So you're going to have to one of two things:

The first is buffing her abilities. You can take several liberties to have her be able to walk on land with more developed legs or something, or even grant her some additional abilities/reasons as of her benevolency and to at least fight a bit. Making her bigger is also heavily advised.

Or two, keep her the way she is, emphasize on the traits that could make her useful to the humans, and make another kaiju situated to the plot at hand. Who knows if Nessie will get her time to shine either later in the arc or in a future one.

Either way, you're going to have to pick one or the other in order to have Nessie be viable in the titan "meta".


I was thinking she might be 😅 I kinda have a bit of a tendency to make underpowered characters (I know - weird problem lol). Do you think if I just gave her more powerful, more long-range abilities I could keep her confined to Loch Ness? I quite like the idea of her being stuck there just chillin' till the humans come and are like 'WAIT! I RECKON NESSIE'S REAL!'
Okay! So here's Nessie =) Lmk what needs changing :) Will get to work on my human in the meantime :D






Village of Traffyn Fenwd - Forest Path

@ZAVAZggg


The mud, which had started to snake up Vitius’s crossed legs, leak and pool in the natural folds of his trousers, stilled. The trees creaked, a nearby spruce squeaking with effort of halting the attack it had been about to launch. Bark rippled with tension, but for now, swayed only with the wind.

A moment passed. Somewhere distant, a small animal, possibly a fox or rabbit, shrieked, before being cut off suddenly. Something rustled in the dark, tousled undergrowth that lined the path to the village.

From above, a creaking sound. Familiar, in a way that almost could have been mistaken for another attack. It wasn’t though. Instead, a single branch from near the top of a nearby tree seemed be growing, stretching out and down toward where Vitius sat. As it grew closer, it became clear that, from the end, a small lump was suspended. Closer still, and the lump became human shaped - short and squat, hanging from the branch like a bat, gnarled toes curled deftly over the structure.

Mere metres away, but still it didn’t stop getting closer, the shape of an elderly woman clearly visible. A body wrapped in swathes of stained grey rags, long tattered hair that dripped down, swept through the mud and trapped the sticky black substance in it’s knots. What was visible of her grey-ish skin was loose about her bones, and crevasces of wrinkles slid across her form in such a way that it would have been unsurprising had the whole lot just slaked free like lime in the rain.

She stared at Vitius, eyes wide, white and glowing in the dark. The slit of her mouth parted, slowly, crookedly, forming the words.

An ear shattering screech.






Village of Traffyn Fenwd - Beds For Ewe!


@MsMorningstar@Damo021


Kate’s lip curled as she watched Nyssa walk away. Who the fuck did she think she was? The rapidly developing migraine pinched at her left temple, but she resisted the urge to rub it. She’d be damned if she was going to show weakness in front the icy woman currently walking away, yellow hood stained brown by the rapidly falling rain.

Instead, she let her attention slide to Colin. Her brother. Who she hadn’t seen in five fucking years, but was now standing next to the other member of their group, brow furrowed and face ghostly as he eyed Kate, mere metres away. Metres. Her heart stuttered, but she force her face straight. How long had he been right there, under her nose with the hoods? She talked to Caira what? Every week? She couldn’t be sure, but she must’ve mentioned him, right? After… after everything, it was hard to picture him just...living, having a life, without her, without Angus, without-

The pain in her head spiked, and she rapidly switched her focus back to the task at hand. Jaw set, she stalked over to the shaken (not to mention sullen and moody) looking figure of her brother, and grabbed a-hold of his arm, before hissing in his ear, “You and me are gonna have a talk-”

She was interrupted by him viciously tugging his arm free of her grip, “Gerrof!” he spat, scowling. Kate paid the expression no notice however, her eyes had fallon upon his sleeve, which had hitched up at the movement, or more specifically, the tendril of knotted scar tissue that now crept out from beneath it.

Of course. Fuck. She must’ve hurt him.

The memory came unbidden, loosed free in a way it hadn’t been in years. The house, bright and hot and not really a house anymore. Colin’s skin, ashen as he lay, shivvering on the rain-slick grass. Angus’s arms tight around her body as she struggled, fought, screamed for him to just ‘let me fucking go Angus, or I swear I’ll-’ she pushed the memory away. Turned her back to Colin so he wouldn’t see the tears pricking hot behind her eyes.

She was the strong one. That didn’t change just because of a few years of separation. She savoured the feeling of the woman’s soft flesh giving beneath her hand, the sight of the red from her bust lip. Kate smiled. Didn’t matter what the woman said, she’d shown her what was what. She doubted she’d be messing with Colin again, at least not whilst Kate had any say in the matter.

She headed into the warmth of the tavern, ready to get down to the business of figuring out how they were gonna help Meg’s sister out of whatever mess she’d managed to get herself into this time.



In Consent 5 yrs ago Forum: Casual Roleplay
feel like this weirdness deserves a bump 😅
Quick question - but can I play the Loch Ness monster?
Huzzah! Now to reacquaint myself with the character I haven't looked at it in like, 2 weeks 😅
Is it too late to show interest? If not, interested!
@SleepingSilence I think the way you're defining villainy is awfully narrow. A villain is, essentially, someone who undertakes villainous actions. Getting in a car and driving whilst under the influence is at the very least illegal, and for good reason. The dad broke the law, that was a decision he made, regardless of the reasoning behind it. That doesn't make him a 'bad' person, but it does make him a person who did a bad thing.

When you start to think of villains as being irredeemably evil, with no positive qualities, nothing that would engender sympathy, then quite simply, you have a very boring character.

And that idea is... really not the story I wanted to tell, or, y'know I wouldve told that story. The whole purpose was to show how somebody's opinions can change, and how perspectives can be warped by age and circumstances. This is something that was explicitly allowed for in the prompt.

Feel free to write from the perspective of an outsider observing the main cast's actions. Explain what the average person might think about seeing someone they held so highly fall so low.


Ultimately, it was about perspective, and the impact this has on whether someone is a hero or not. The dad didn't 'sink into alcoholism'he always had issues with alcohol, Jenny's perspective just shifted in light of what happened. She's probably the only character in the story's universe who viewed him as a hero to begin with, hence why it is vitally important the story be told from her perspective, however angsty.

My story was far from perfect, and there are many things I would change were I to do further drafts - some of which you've touched on, and I do appreciate the discussion.

I do feel like you're judging people overly harshly for interpeting the prompt even slightly differently to you - which I think if everyone had done it how you wanted them to, we'd have an awful lot of very same-y entries, and I for one appreciated the diversity of takes on the theme, yours included.
So like...what the helk did any of that have to do with a fallen hero? Or somebody doing wrong because they think it’s right? This feels like a story that doesn’t even remotely match the prompt in question…

It wasn’t a bad personal reflection story...but she isn’t a hero, nor the villain who thinks she's a hero. The father was her fallen hero, but he’s not a secret bad guy. She’s whiny and angst-filled, but her father died. She didn’t do anything wrong. The mother complex isn’t relevant to the story. Most of it really isn’t tied to the story which is seems to be a story about mourning a personal loss. So...I’m afraid I don’t see the connection.


So, I appreciate the in depth critique in like, a really big way, and the time you took to look over everyone's work, but I do think you've misunderstood my, err, entire concept a little, so I figured I'd do a little explaining in order to clarify the relation to the prompt.

So yeah, her father is the fallen hero in this case. Throughout a lot of her childhood, he was the 'good parent' (where the mother complex comes in), and now that she's older he helped her a lot with more practical stuff, like rent and food money. But, he also had issues with alcohol, and was generally irresponsible - something that Jenny didn't really notice due to being a kid. This is hinted at in the section at the pub, and where she's reflecting on the differences between her father and her mother.

She didn't see these flaws because, y'know he was her dad and she thought he was great, until he killed someone in a drunk driving incident (the guy who's funeral she rather voyeuristically tags along to). Which idk seems pretty 'villainous' to me? It's about mourning a personal loss, yes, but it's also about that realisation that even the most important and influential figures in our lives are, ultimately, human beings, and capable of doing really awful things and causing profound tragedy. And not just on the large scale - but in the small scale - that feeling at the end that he let her down, too, just by not being there, when she'd always thought he would be.

Edit: Also thought it would be worth mentioning, but I did actually run the idea of a child realising their parent isn't the hero they once thought past Frizan, and whilst it did morph slightly since then, I was essentially given the go ahead.
@Berlin@nightmare medx Do you guys have the discord link? In any case - discord.gg/t6MHVBp
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