NuttsnBolts

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Don't spend too much time on it. Lol!

Ill see if there's any suggestions I can make as well when I get home this evening.

Let's B!tch. I feel it's a healthy release for our roleplay annoyances 2.0

@Rin I think people like it because you bought up a good point and it's that many people do not know how to swear properly. They do it to sound edgy but don't think of how it'll improve the post, or help convey the scene. Not only that but they'll write up a good voice line, only to then not write the character into the proper emotion/action or get upset when it's taken the wrong way.

Sounds stupid to say this, but good swearing is an art and just randomly dropping fucking swear words into random fucken lines looses it's fucken impact when it's fucken overused. xD

Let's B!tch. I feel it's a healthy release for our roleplay annoyances 2.0

Even IRL, I think that profanity works best with precision. If you practically use it as punctuation, it loses any impact it would have, but when you barely ever do so it makes it that much more noticable and instantly attention grabbing when you do.

@Rin

I'm Australian. I grew up in West Sydney. So when it comes to swearing I'm used to it in general conversation so I don't happen to always notice it, however in a roleplay tend to notice it often and I, myself, have to stop occasionally and think, "What's the 'correct' way to say that again?"

Example:
Boring as batshit = Dull
Bugger that = Forget it
Fucken muppet = Complete idiot
How are ya, ya cunt! = Hello Friend
Fuckin’ aye = Yes

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I would have gone for a cannon, but hey, if you want a 'mini' gin than that's your choice.

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Madison Cole

The squad sat there as their captain gave them a debriefing form their their relatively successful mission. If there was any concerns about the outcomes it was that Joe was sent off to the medical ward for a general check to see how much radiation he absorbed into his body, if any at all.

Madison sat there at the table listening intently to the speech and the proposal of buying possible upgrades, something that she was quite looking forward to. Out of the corner of her eye she could see Percy and noted that he had a different kinda look to him. He seem a little less worrying and she assumed it must have been from what Duncan and him talked about before the departure. Still, her lack of trust in people meant that she was still quite happy to keep her distance from the others, but at least she didn't feel like she was watching out for some creep.

The meeting ended with the Captain declaring everyone "Dismissed." and Madison left the Briefing room with the others, heading back to the barracks and finally towards her room. As she walked by each of the doors and glanced briefly at the plaques for her name, she eventually arrived at the door with the "Madison Cole" Tag. She reached into her pocket, fumbling around for a moment, and pulled out her key before entering the dwelling.

"I might do a quick order now before heading off for something to eat," she thought to herself, as she switched on the screen to the shopping console and sat down to look at some of the available options.

"YOU'VE GOT TO BE KIDDING ME!!!!!" she screamed out in shock, letting her jaw drop from seeing the range of items she was looking at, "I want it! I want it all! But the captain is gonna kill me if I get all this! Maybe one, I might be able to get one. She's not gonna know is she? Maybe she'll understand..." Closing her eyes slightly she tapped the screen to which it proudly displayed the confirmation message.

"Item Purchased"

"Welp... Too late now... " she spoke proudly to herself before moving on to the list of weapons upgrades available for the Mad-e.

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What about a boarding school? (Maybe she comes to the base soon cause she's on holidays?)

Something to note, if we wanna add some extra armaments, do you want us to list the char sheet changes here for approval? Pretty sure no one is gonna add Nuclear Launchers or BFGs, but it just seems right to get the approval first before adding in gear.

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Operation: "Best Foot Forwards" Status.
[]Failed
[]Ripped from the jaws of defeat
[]Good run
[]Great run
[✔]TYRANNOSAURUS #REKT

Good job everyone, I hope we all had a great time! Probably a bit short and a bit easy, but I do hope everyone enjoyed it. Any critique for tweaking the future missions I have planned, anybody?

@LHG100

I'm liking it, and it's a well designed RP. Never really had one that focused more on collabs (just as long as they aren't relied on, but that's a minor point), and as a GM not having a set character does allow you to have more control over the game. So a lil thank you. :)

Ideas, tweaks and such? Have you thought about expanding the story? Not like a massive global scale, but with an enemy character that will return in a later mission, maybe with a possible rivalvy with a particular person?

Also, we could set up the missions like chapters in a novel? (Eg: Chapter 1: The Fairbanks Investigation) We can then link it in the OOC 1st post like an index or quest log. Dunno what everyone else thinks, but it seems like a logical approach.

(I'm happy to be told things are terrible ideas as well, so don't ever feel like not telling me otherwise either)

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Make sure to check out the Percy/Duncan conversation Paris edited into one of her previous posts.

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Meanwhile inside the Mad-E

@Mcmolly

Truth is on the way to battle, Madi was playing Persona 4 Dancing all night on the screen in front. Joys of being a passenger.