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@Nevix Oh, don't fret in case you were! I do some diligent research before joining stuff so I had recently looked up weight-height chart for the military. That's why I bring it up and all.
Height:5’ 11”

Weight:134 lbs

I'm definitely nit-picking here but as I was checking the other characters this jumped out at me...

Collie is 5'6", a female, and weighs seven pounds less than Cal, 5'11", and a male. 134 lbs is an unhealthy weight and the US military does restrict entry if a person weighs too much or to little. I would recommend changing it to ~175 lbs at least for that height.

Not trying to tell you what to do in your own RP but just trying to help. :/
Corporal Columbine "Collie" Craster



Height: 5'6"
Weight: 127 lbs.
Age: 22 Years

Gear:
Primary: Short-range rifle with semi-auto, burst, and full auto modes.

Secondary: Standard Issue Archimedes PDP Mark II
Knife: Standard Issue Archimedes “Serpent” Combat Knife Mark III


EHCS:


Personality: Collie is best summed by saying she has a rough exterior but on the inside, she is soft and vulnerable. Circumstance and her present situation has demanded she grew tough and every since joining the military she has steeled herself to a lot of things. First impressions will feel like she is cold and maybe a bit harsh, preferring to maintain a professional doctor-patient relationship, but she is pretty quick to open up if she feels comfortable with someone as she yearns for real relationships with people. Secretly, she often gets lost in old romance novels.

For the most part, she can be counted upon to stitch someone up in an open fire fight and will not hesitate in tense situations, though her temperament under distress will cause her to be quite short and pushy with others. It is usually after battle, especially after losing a comrade under her watch, that she bears her burden but only behind closed doors. She is afraid of being 'discounted' or an outsider due to her being a female and will do her very best to appear tough and 'one of the guys'.

Bio: Collie's father was a military man, but her mother was just a house wife. Together, they bore four children: three boys and the youngest, one girl. As the boys grew up, they all aspired and took after their father while the girl, Collie ended up taking after her mother, despite the abundance of men in the house. Collie's father was a "desk" officer at this point and they ended up transferring from base to base with even a few occasions of leaving one base while under fire, but such is the life in Interum. So for the most part, the Craster's were pretty normal all things considered...

As the boys grew older, they all eagerly shipped off for the military at eighteen. Tragically, the two oldest brothers ended up dying while during separate tours of battle. Collie's slightly older brother, Mark, is still living and surprisingly, still serving in the military as a gunnery chief for an armored battalion. When Collie turned eighteen, she did not eagerly ship off for the military and instead pursued academics, heading off to college to study medicine. Her ambition was to be a family physician but right as she just getting started in her studies, she got drafted in the Interum military, but such is the life in Interum...

The only courtesy Collie got was the military at least recognize her desire for medicine and since they needed combat medics, they plugged her into the basic for that discipline. She came out of basic and was immediately thrown into combat. The first year was hell and the softer Collie, who took after her mother, could barely stomach it all. She managed, though, probably thanks to something on her father's side.

Fast forward about a year and half and Collie is pretty comfortable right now. She might hate it, sure, but she knows what to expect. Well, it was around this time that she was transferred to a unit that had a CO, who Collie could describe as "The Biggest Dickhead the nation of Interum had ever seen". Under this CO, Collie felt mistrusted, abused, threatened, and so on. Whatever went wrong was on her, it seemed. She hated that man and begged to be transferred out, but was always denied. Well, during a tour under this CO, said CO ended up wounded with what a few eyewitnesses claimed as a pretty light non-fatal type of hit. Collie ran over to treat the man and she claimed, that he continued his spiteful talk, even smacked her for an accidental poke. Eyewitnesses claim not to have seen it, but it happened and Collie claimed it added a lot of unnecessary stress. The CO ended up dying from that seemingly light wound and Collie was left with her hands red.

There was a whole process of court-martials and hearings and so on. Did Collie mean to kill the CO, who surprisingly was on everyone else's good side, or did she just end up messing up under duress? The court never ended up deciding but they still had to do something so they shipped Collie off to the Interum-Tellosia border to shove the problem 'under the rug' so to speak.

Other: If Collie likes you, she'll let you in on her 'medical reserves' stash. She has chewing tobacco, candy, and even alcohol that she would kindly 'lose' for you.
@Nevix ~Thank you!
@Pirouette I really don't want to do spot reservations, but it is NOT first come first serve. I'm basing it off whoever gives me the best CS. If your CS is as good as your writing is (based on the one RP I've been in with you), you should have no issue getting the spot. I RETRACT MY STATEMENT. I'll go ahead and reserve the spot. I trust in your abilites.


Thank you!

Remind me, where did we meet?
I'm attending class all day and have a doctors appointment after so pretty please, can I reserve that spot? I promise the first thing I'll do is the write up for this.
Got something in mind for a medic.
Well that's annoying. Back to nothing again.
So tonight I'll definitely be writing up my character again.

I was thinking, maybe his introduction is one that brings reinforcements? I did intend on him being more of a leader type than a warrior.

Also, are you opposed if I write up a second character. This one would be more hands on and since so far this has been all battles, I figured it would be fine if I switched off from time to time. Both of my characters would be linked but I suppose you would see that when I write them.
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