My only problem with it is that Angels and all the other things related have to do with Justice Arcana. Mine XD So the name Angel would be a bit. . .
<Snipped quote by Pyromania99>
Thought it was pretty good. Shinku: Defender of Justice!
@Karl KadaverIt occurs to me I should probably add a "species" entry in the dossiers for clarification's sake, since I can't really tell if Charlie's supposed to be a Raptor Harpy or not.
If she is, then her personality should definitely display a few of that subspecies' more prominent traits like aggression and a sense of pride, as well as increased intelligence (by harpy standards, anyway :P). If she's not, then her boobs are way too big (not that I'm opposed to that ;3). While Raptor Harpies are taller, more muscular, and more well-developed and mature-looking in general on account of having more meat and protein in their diet, most other harpy species tend to stick to the thin, lithe jailbait look on account of needing hollow bones and as little musculature as possible to maintain flight (whereas Raptor Harpies circumvent this problem by being swole as fuck compared to other harpies to account for the added weight of breasts, muscles, and a more developed skeletal system).
Sorry for being a pain about this! I do like Charlie just as much as Ashe, though I kinda am wondering what role she plays in the team (although I'm guessing sniper, which would be fun since she seems to be much more energetic than your usual "cold sniper" stereotype). Also,
>tube-top with "Let's Eat!!!" written on it
@Pyromania99Accepted! Feel free to post her in the character sheets section. Also, that picture seems oddly familiar somehow. Mind if I ask where it's from?
May I perhaps see both?
Also, if you're looking for darker/more ominous, violent and intimidating harpy subspecies, Raptor Harpies would probably fill your niche (they even have various owl-like features, kinda like how you said Ashe does). Unless of course you already knew all that and chose Black Harpy anyway, in which case please excuse me if it sounded like I disapprove of your choice.
Also, how's that tanuki coming, Pyromania? Have either of you found anyone else who may be interested in joining?
<Snipped quote by Karl Kadaver>
Hmmmm... I'm honestly gonna have to give this one some thought, since I'm not entirely sure why MON would hire a former hit woman and then give her a deadly weapon and little to no supervision. I'm not saying yes or no either way, but just in case I do decide against it, maybe you should think of another backstory? Just in case you need something to fall back on :)
<Snipped quote by Pyromania99>
Please tell me that if it's a she, she won't have the trademark titanic tanuki testicular tuckerbag >_>
Also, a tanuki isn't exactly something that'd make people recoil in fear (but that all depends on your standards I guess). I just don't want a Monmusume RP to be full your more "traditional" extraspecies when the manga itself goes out of its way to avoid your more bog-standard stuff like tanuki, kitsune and cat-girls to focus on the more exotic and interesting extraspecies like lamias and arachne.
Again, this isn't me saying no. In fact I'd prefer it if you made the sheet first so I can take a look at it before passing any judgment on whether or not I'll allow tanuki. If you wow me, I won't have any problems with it~