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@Roughdragon1

Sorry for taking so long to get to you, and I am afraid you are going to have to wait a little longer to get a proper review. However I saw one quick thing reading through Vikkar's fighting style. You keep referring to turns. What do you mean by that?
@DracoLunarisI see no issue with it personally.
@A Lowly WretchNah it's cool, I just wasn't sure if it would kick in before or after the attack with that wording.
@PirouetteA woobie is a character you feel sorry for. That you want to hug. Examples would be the Elric brothers from FMA (They lost their mother and most of their bodies at a young age and only survived by their alchemist knowledge), Peter Parker (His orgin story revolves around letting his greed and pettyness keeping him from stopping the man that would kill Uncle Ben), and Samurai Jack (His home was conquered at young age and he has spent his life toiling to stop Aku).

You'll notice a lot of these are related toa tragic backstory. TV Tropes can list many other examples to.
@Roughdragon1

Heh yes, its more shonen action series in its plotting. Only a most cursory knowledge of Fighting Game mechanics is needed. I even discourage naming hard numbers or overtly 'gamey' aspects. Feel free to ask around. I can even explain some of the major fightng game archetypes to you if needed.
@stoneString

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Otherwise, another zoner! Nice. I do like the mental image of this arrogantly nerdy guy pimping around as a nomad simply because he can. I dolike the bullet storm aspects of his attack style, and how all out it goes in that aspect. The idea of him throwing a woobly is amazing to me, especially if he decides to go Nuclear with Oppenheimer's.

He's got the green light from me.
@A Lowly Wretch

One quick question on his armor ability.

Upon taking damage Al's ki will harden around the area harmed, turning his flesh and bone into reactive armor


Does this mean that the initial blow will still land with full effect, or did you intend this to be how he has high defense?
@dragonmancer@Valor

Fafnir and Malus get the okay from me. If Savo and Kai have approoved them too, welcome aboard.
@Pirouette@Pirouette

Oh goodie, a poison based character. Time is this character's friend it seems, a bunch of debuffs that lead up to a final attack. But it is neat to see it is in fact harmful to her, and that she needs to be judicious early on to get the full range of powers. You've already addressed the main issue the other GM's have had, with Death and Decay's permanency, which is good. So long as the damage isn't permanent, at least to PC's, we're good. I also like the idea of it being a good weapon against Mori too, since as written it does seem it would affect her too. I like this moveset and fighting style. Take her down quick or you're in a world of pain.

I like the backstory , with the combo of tech and magic. I can certainly see some great sympathetic moments for her, and as Kai said, she is a bit of a woobie. She's got my stamp of approval.
@dragonmancer
Hey hey! Nice to see you back. Looks like you're going to have more mythic buddies around :P
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