Rockette

Reunited For The Summer

Preview is your friend for sure, it usually shows were the break is at through your formatting, well sometimes, my advice would be to separate your tags into categories [be careful not to use too many, it'll break too], if it helps you to keep track of which is which, it becomes tedious work if you have a lot to work with, but it could assist in practice until you're more comfortable with your formatting. Otherwise you just have to remember to keep your tags aligned like: [sub][color][h3] content [/h3][/color][/sub] < - sub tags on the outside, colour next, and then your header, it's basically whatever order your tags are before your edited content, make sure it's basically reversed after your content so that it matches up like so. That's what it means by misaligned. Otherwise, practice practice practice. Another spiff of advice is to basically look at the Raw of a sheet and go from there if you need a basis to go from.

The Spirits Within: Oakridge Chronicles

Fantastic! And we're playing this out in flashback series, correct?

Reunited For The Summer

Funny thing being that I'm not completely satisfied with it but I decided to let it remain where it is, unless I change it again. Heh.

Anyways, I'll be dragging Jer's ass out of bed, poor thing, once I'm off from work and able to write properly.

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Reunited For The Summer

Oh man, I might just have to drag Jer's ass out of bed. Seven in the morning, he's dead to the world.

Reunited For The Summer

I'm fine and dandy for starting whenever you guys wish, I'll be finishing relationship details today so I'm sending out the remainder of the messages whilst I have time now.

The Spirits Within: Oakridge Chronicles

@FantasyChic - Me and DJ are working on things with the Reactor, I would love to include you in our discussion and such that we're doing. Maybe it'll help with getting back in touch with Serenity?

Now the question remains, what causes Mags to retreat?

Considering her current state, she's near the point in where attempting to calm her down will be utterly pointless. I'll say in this, the only way to bring Mags to her senses, and to leave, is to make the connection that she was once apart of Oakridge, that she's a Guardian and bring her to remember what she once was - sort of bringing enough clarity to her mind that she forces herself to retreat less she kills them. The only other opportunity to calm her down or shock her into retreat would be to bring up Monika, but there's not enough evidence to make the connection that this is Monika's mother at the point in time. Not without a name and some such.

So Subira, being the diplomat, brings the Guardians to calm down and her words effect Magdalena who experiences a brief struggle of her consciousness mind and spirits and leaves in a terrible fit and rage and the Guardians carry on from there to do whatever they desire with the Eidolon?

Reunited For The Summer

I believe I have a few more relationship details to hack, or simply allow impressions to fall where they may, but I'll get to blossoming further relations when I'm able unless other ideas are plausible - either way. Busy work weekend ahead but I'll have time tomorrow for sure.

[ ♕ ] - c o l l i d e. // smoke & gasoline.

That's pretty much my life outside from work, there's little social action unless I go out to a random breakfast or I'm invited out for the my days off. Usually it's the former, however. I'll be sure to make it happen that you receive beer, a universal tv remote and the most comfortable couch imaginable.

I can't be positive that's what she told me, it literally slips my mind every moment I try to recollect on it. But, I support her decision, my family is steeped in military.

It'll be a conflicting development, he's responsible for bringing them together and realizes, too late, his mistake. To ruin everything, to slip behind the scenes at every opportunity, to try and manipulate Alexia away from Cadian - he's the bad guy, he'll hurt you, use you. You can't trust him. All the while slowly going insane with the loss. It'll make him desperate, which is all the more dangerous and makes him an incredible threat. As you say, stranded in the alley with his enemy at gunpoint, doing everything he can to keep Alexia, even if she were to hate him for taking Cadian away.

Wonderful character, I can't wait to see him action now, and can't wait for your post!

The Spirits Within: Oakridge Chronicles

@Prisk - That's wonderful, I'm still debating on what happened to Mags, it could leave to many possible scenarios. She suddenly vanishes once again, with the possibility that she revives and comes back at a later conclusion. That would work well with my subplots concepts with Monika, confronting her mother and the basis of her own issues.