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I didn't make it to be cool. I was making a non-superpowered character who just happened to be good at shooting. Sorry that my formatting isn't up to your standards but if it's that much of a bother that you need to be rude about it and actually say that you think Rocket Raccoon is cooler than my character then I'd prefer to just not be in this roleplay.

Bye.


Honestly, I didn't mean to come off as rude. I don't mean to offend you - or anyone, for that matter - I just have a rather...acerbic way of going about things. Most of the time people shake it off but occasionally I do strike a nerve.

I apologise. But I will be making more jokes, though.


Personally, I have reservations over the skillset of your character, although his age lessens the blow somewhat, and also how Jackdaw obviously this is Batman born-again. We're not against characters in this RP eventually taking up the mantles of fallen legends - but personally I'm not sure I want it to be this obvious. However, it's a complete sheet, and also probably my favourite so far (and Wraith has expressed his love as well), so pending input from my colleagues on his power-level, and whether we're comfortable with near-expy characters, consider this an official Roman Approval.



Unfinished


Ew, formatting. Can anyone say "wall of text"?

But for some less superficial concerns, this is another 'good shot/skilled cqc combatant', with additional powersets. Someone who can make cool stuff from junk doesn't need to be a good shot or a martial artist, they just need the salvaged equipment of a deathcruiser to turn into a mini-nuke launcher that blows up a hammer imbued with a world-stone so that his teammate can grab it and harness the power of friendship and bitching one-liners to use purple to blow up Lee Pace.

What I'm saying is, Rocket Raccoon is cooler than this character right now.



So my main concern is how your character is probably the most powerful one on the roster right now but you mention how he's not even reached 'untapped levels' of power. Which is worrying when so far his power is 'create fire that burns literally everything' and he has dragon breath and fireballs that, and I quote, "come at minimal cost". So cool off.

Also that magi had fire first so maybe another powerset entirely? Because right now I'd straight up reject yours for either reason.

The adventure has continued! Is it obvious I'm doing this in the sun with a lot of beer?
@Nightrunner and @TheMusketMan, post a character sheet when you've actually got an idea. Empty skeletons (you guys didn't even try and come up with a freaking name, or fill out your notes - not even character-dependent) are not appreciated. They're ugly and space-wasting.



It's well-written, it appeals to me because you cheated and used something that references Fallout, and it's a cool concept. However, it's also ridiculously overpowered, especially when we're explicitly looking for low-tier or under-developed meta's, and it's contradictory to in-universe 'laws' that have already been set out. A meta of Jackdaw's level would be turned over to Lex or Savage or any major leader immediately, not brought up within an independent merc outfit, and after 'going rogue', definitely would not have lived through Deathtroopers to wake up in jail. You wouldn't have woken up.

Recommendations are to reduce your powerset (better-than-average human, perfect shot, or skilled cqc combatant, not all three) and to bring your character's history in line with the established in-universe laws.



Frankly I find this character bizzare because it's a sloth but you've endeared yourself to Wraith and a character being 'weird' is not a good enough reason to reject it, so for now this is doing well. I'll review it again when it's complete, however.



This is another case of 'the new regime wouldn't take the chance'. Not only does he stick out because of his red skin, he's also a descendant of Trigon, a supremely powerful being, and one whose children have caused considerable trouble in the past (cough cough RAVEN). Again, we're looking for non-obvious and low-tier/undeveloped meta's and magi's. This is neither.

Quoting takes hefty chunks from your character limit, so this adventure will continue in another post...
| Name: |
Piper. No last name.


| Alias: |
Currently uses 'Flechette' to protect her identity.


| Age: |
17


| Appearance: |
(No Anime/Manga Pictures, everything else is fair game. Please include a written description to elaborate upon your picture. Also I should note that a costume is probably not your smartest idea as you'd be put down almost immediately.)


| Abilities/Skills: |
Piper possesses low-level ferrokinesis - the manipulation of metal. This ability manifests through a mutated gene that causes two important extra functions within her body: the excessive production of iron by her bone marrow, and the formulation of a bizarre compound within her blood that binds with this iron. These two functions in tandem allow Piper to create small shards and splinters of moldable metal within her blood, that she can then eject from her skin. Right now, this allows Piper two skills: throwing small dart-like splinters from her arms and hands, and pushing small shards through the surface of her skin to grant herself sharp, metal barbs.

As these shards leave Piper's skin, they leave small wounds; perhaps as a result, Piper has an unconscious defense mechanism against the damage she does to herself. As her metal passes through her skin, a minute quantity breaks off from the shard and is left behind in the sub-dermal layer, which then spreads across the small puncture and blocks bacteria from the outside, and blood from the inside, until Piper's own immune system kicks in moments later to begin healing the wound. However, this protection does nothing against outside aggression, as it requires the remnants of her own metal to react to the wound left behind.

Eventually, Piper will be able to create and eject larger shards of metal, and force them into shapes she is currently incapable of - hooks, blades, daggers - and even form it around her own fists to allow her harder hits - with a lot of time and some intense practice, she'll also be able to spread it throughout her body on a sub-dermal layer, making her incredibly durable.


| Backstory: |
(Who are you? Where did you come from and how did you get thrown in prison.)


| Sample Post: |
(Be sure to show off your character's personality here and maybe some of their abilities. If you need an idea for this post, why not cover the day you were imprisoned.)


| Notes: |
-My favourite beverage is Kirin Ichiban, a delicious Japanese lager.
I've got a character concept in mind to that effect: Basically just a low level crook who, during all the chaos, basically grabbed all the shit he could from Arkham's storage and made tracks. A suit made out of pieces of other super suits: Patchwork.


Is that during or after Joker bombed the city with an amateur nuke...fifty years ago?

Edit: GM or not, Nightrunner has put forth some more formal problems with such an idea.
Healthy bit of interest. Good to see.
Work very in-progress. It takes me far too long to write characters.

SO has anyone heard from @Roman, he seems to be absent.


if you hadn't mentioned me I might never have remembered.

Sorry about my absence, but as it turns out I'm having less and less time to post to roleplays and I'm trying to restrict my commitments. Sorry it's taken me so long, but I'm formally backing out of this game.
I've migrated well and truly to Iwaku, but sometimes something springs up in this place and I slink back.

Potentially. I have an existing character in this universe I'd like to use, but the sudden paths open for Double-Time are rather interesting, assuming some cooperation.
Who is Double Deuce? Because I'm tempted to use one of two of my previously existing characters and that name opens up interesting avenues...
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