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In a Land of Fairy Tales and a Place of Magic

Awe! :( I'm sorry to hear that dear.... I hope you feel better soon! If you want to just chat tonight that's fine by me. ^.^ or if you want to just go veg I completely understand!

In a Land of Fairy Tales and a Place of Magic

I was thinking swapping characters, but changing characters all together works as well. ^.^

You don't feel like yourself? What's wrong?

In a Land of Fairy Tales and a Place of Magic

I'm really not sure what advice I can give... When I play my males I try to think of how a guy would act. And when I do my bad boys I have to figure out why they are the way they are before I can get their personality. I use personality traits of guys that I know, males for tv and males from books to influence my writing. I don't think that really helps. I don't know how I do my guys really. :(

While I like Ariel, I cannot say I am in love with her. I do not much care for the way she has turned out to be while, quiet and almost needy... It was not what I had pictured for her but it's the way she turned out some how. I want to changed her personality but I'm not sure how.

I'd say let's let things be until we figure out how we want to direct hook and Ariel. I have an idea but it's kind of silly and troublesome. We could just start Hook and Ariel over, maybe even swap character...

In a Land of Fairy Tales and a Place of Magic

We do have a lot going for Ariel and Hook in the future. Probably more than we have for Belle and Rumpel at this point. However, it is the present moment that I am more concerned with. They are on the fast track to going out to eat. if I am remembering currently. I am not saying that I do not want them to get to know each other, or that going out to eat it bad, I am saying it is kind of boring.

Let's also put it this way; I am really, really excited to write Rumpel's story. I think about what I want to say, and the possible directions it can go in this next post and I can't wait to reply. However, I feel kind of... eh? when I think of replying with Ariel.

Does that make sense or am I just rattling on? I am sharing my honest thoughts, not trying to be annoying or anything. I just think that Hook and Ariel need a little present moment spicing up.

Not sure if it would help or hinder, but I did make it really obvious that Ariel is a mermaid as well. If you want Hook to realize it now, you can. I do not want to have to force you to make Hook look dump just to add drama in later. ^.^

In a Land of Fairy Tales and a Place of Magic

I want them to get to know each other too, but I just don't want them to become boring. If you know what I mean.

I think we would enjoy their story and interaction more if it was a bit more strained, action field and dark.

It's here that I get more into liking the darker side of story telling. I get bored when things are going smoothly and happy and lovey dovey. I'm much more a fan of strained, dangerous, forbidden, ect.

In a Land of Fairy Tales and a Place of Magic

They are very strong! But I think that is what will make them a good couple. ^.^

Possibly. Do we need to start thinking of something to throw at hook and Ariel?

In a Land of Fairy Tales and a Place of Magic

I'm in the centeral time zone. :)

I don't know. But my boyfriend is gonna look at it this weekend.

I think seeing them warm up to each other will be fun! I can't wait. ^.^. Have you notice we always talk about Rumpel and belle and not really about hook and Ariel? Lol

In a Land of Fairy Tales and a Place of Magic

I was wondering how far apart our time zones were! Lol

My computer isn't doing so good. :-/ I guess I over used it yesterday playing a game and now it hardly functions. :( it's struggling just to connect to the internet and pulling up web pages.

I don't, she might have more to bargin with later once he starts growing soft towards her. ;)

In a Land of Fairy Tales and a Place of Magic

It was about midnight here when I passed out, I think. It's almost one in the afternoon. ^.^

Oh no! What's wrong with your computer??

I could see him making a deal! He is always making deals. Lol

In a Land of Fairy Tales and a Place of Magic

Yay!!!

I so fell asleep on you last night, I'm sorry. :-/

It's not cheesy! There has to be one thing she wants. ^.^ and after a while Rumpel might go get it for her. Maybe just to shut her up about it. Lol