Rune_Alchemist

The Comatose Kingdom

I know there's no rush, but I'd like to get it all down in some permanent form sooner rather than later.

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Ehe~
sorry about that. I've just been kind of busy lately between college and work. Now on top of that i'm trying to get into the field I'm actually going to college for. Which is Law Enforcement, if you're curious.

It's going slowly, at least me getting any thoughts down on paper is. I've got a pretty good grasp of it in my head, but whenever I go to try to put my thoughts onto paper or type them up, I just hit blanks. I've just been very...unmotivated. I think its stress/me not getting enough sleep. I've gotten the general outline of the iCheck done, but its rather...uninspiring. It needs more before I put it up.

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Closet Nerd said
Well before...~snip~

...please tell me.

TL;DR :P

I kid, I kid, I read all of it~

...but I'm at a loss for words right now. Buys working on my own RP project, so I'm kinda...unmotivated right now xD
I'll try to get an actual reply up later xD

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Toaw said
I think it would be more hilarious if she was more like herself, being completely confused about where she was, and slowly becoming engrossed in the world, without really becoming apart of it.

I think that would be more believable as well.

Heroes and Rockets | A Pokemon RP

"Oh you grew up here? Well...uhm, the city has it's charm." She replied in response to Danny, obviously not thinking that highly of his origins."Non non, Lori and Seph can handle themselves." She continued, while giving Lori a pat on the head. Realistically speaking though, she knew it was a rather bad match up. Her psychic type moves would have little effect on Twin, and Lori and Seph didn't know any moves that would have a real good effect on it. Rattata knew bite, she had learned that from watching it battle earlier. In all, it would be a rather difficult battle she believed. Of course, half the battle was having confidence and putting on a good poker face. That was something she was rather good at doing. "Shall we get started then?" she said with a small glance to Twin. "Twin looks rather eager."

Lori simply stared at the other pokemon in the same way it stared at everything, but it was easy to tell she was excited to finally get into a fight. One of Lori's ears always twitched slightly whenever it was excited. It was easy to miss, and she didn't even think Lori knew she did it. Seph chirped, sounding slightly hesitant to fight. Seph didn't like fighting much, most likely due to the small pokemons past with getting bullied. She gave it a smile and ruffled his feathers though. "Lori and Seph look like they want to get started too."

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Gray, had just finished off his numerous plates of food. How a man as skinny as him eat so much and not gain any weight had always been a mystery to everyone, especially the other trainers. At least he had nearly boundless energy to show for it. Kali had finished eating as well, and had woken up by now and was in a much better mood. The Zubat Was now hanging upside down on his jacket. She wasn't asleep, she was merely observing the other trainers. She would like to try and battle again herself, she wasn't the type to like loosing.

"Yeah, that seems like a good idea!" Gray said to Eddy. "I didn't get to fully explore yesterday with everyone. Calder could use a bit of training and i know Kali is itching to fight something."

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Wormgod said
@Rune: Thanks! And I actually like her uppity-ness. She's gonna get hit with life out on the open road, having to *GASP* camp outside and eat frozen meals! *evil plotting face*ys.

I KNOW. I was planning on this happening anyways xD
She's going to hate this, at least to begin with, I knows it.

Wormgod said Yes, we ARE accepting! :D Members are allowed two characters, one "nice normal trainer" and one "Team Rocket trainer." No gender ratio, so feel free to make two girls or two guys.

I hope this means I can still have Gray as a good guy if I make Cerise one xP
If not, I understand but with the slight imbalance we have right now xD

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Closet Nerd said
Well I fell behind just a bit didn't I? Rune: Ashlyn is a good character so she's accepted. I'm going to have to have MC realize she has a crush on her subconsciously if we're going to explore that in the RP, which I fully intend to even if you don't want to. But because of that it might be a bit subtle at first during the RP, you think you can pull that off?

Fine with me~
I'm certain I can do that~

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Xaltwind said
Since supposedly the story borrows influences from multiple fantasy-settings, not just Alice in Wonderland and Tolkien's works, I think having some crazy, steampunk-thingymadoodads is just fine. ^^

Thingymabobs and thingymadoodads are my favorite things! :D

Toaw said
That would be something wouldn't it? Well if Closet Nerds plans don't get totally ruined from the idea, or likes the concept to much to ignore than I think my ship basically being that transporter I guess wouldn't be that bad of an idea. I was more or less thinking of tears in 'space in time' kind of thing, but your idea works too. As for the steam punk I like the idea (even though my opinion means nothing T_T)

Well, maybe my thingymadoodad could make a tear in space possible, but due to whatever circumstances, we need a giant ship to pass through it, because reasons.

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And the pirate ship of your character is like some multi-dimensional transporter thing!
that, or Connie could build you one and attach it to the ship :D
if it doesn't blow up

Honestly though, I was a bit hesitant about giving Connie a whole 'steampunk' feel. I'm honestly not too familiar with wonderland type things xD

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~Fantasy Side~

Name: Connie Elwyn
Appearance:
Connie is a young girl, around the age of sixteen, maybe just turning seventeen. She's a bit short for her age, something you really shouldn't mention unless you want to get a wrench to the face. She has messy curly red hair, with green eyes and slim build. She wears her work suit most of the time, and rarely ever takes it off. Her goggles are merely use to protect her eyes when she's working, and totally not for poor eyesight. Nope, not at all.

Personality: Connie is the self-proclaimed smartest girl on the planet. While this fact may be disputed, the fact remains, she is smart any way you look at it. She's a quick learner at most tasks, and understands the laws of the world quite easily and picks up on most things quite often. She fancies herself an inventor, and loves tinkering with new things. Most of her inventions tend to go...haywire though, and in some way or another tend to not work. This can leave her a bit depressed at times, and sometimes goes into a creative slump. She does love travelling though, and experiencing new things, and has traveled quite a bit for someone of her age. Despite her somewhat arrogant front, she's friendly and can be a great friend to anyone who needs it. Just don't mention her height and you'll get along fine.

She has a dream of one day making a completely functioning automaton, like the ones in her villages old legends.

Physicality: (Pros and Cons regarding physical attributes)
Pros:
Quick learner
Intelligent
resourceful
Cons:
Isn't physically strong
Can't run for long
Is a bit arrogant and prideful.
(Eh, not really physical things, but physical stuff isn't her strong suit xD)

Bio: Connie is an explorer from a far off land, who came to this place to find a new home after a misunderstanding forced her to leave her previous home. She has been travelling for awhile, though only recently set off on her own. She was travelling with a caravan, until she grew bored. So, she set up a shop where she makes and sells specialty items and other inventions. Well, tries too. So far, she has been...less than successful. She tries to create something new, and it usually ends up exploding and any money she gets goes into repairs, damages, and getting more stock for her store. She sells a few things to make a profit, then the process repeats leaving her in quite the predicament, recently.

Misc:

~Real Side~

Name: Ashlyn Lawrence
Age: 16
Appearance: Meh. Couldn't find a picture I liked, so here's my attempt at writing a description.
Ashlyn is a bit short for her age, has pale skin with quite a few freckles and long red hair usually tied back into a ponytail. She has green eyes and wears a pair of glasses due to being somewhat near-sighted, though she hates wearing them. She normally wears a simple T-shirt with some jeans and sneakers. Wears a purple jacket in the winter sometimes. She used to get upset/angry when someone mentioned her height, though now she's more mature about it, at least on the surface.

Personality: Ashlyns' personality mainly stems from the fact she has always been rather frail, physically speaking, and somewhat clumsy ever since she was a child. She was always causing small accidents and always ending up hurting herself from the smallest things. She has grown out of the clumsiness, mostly, as she's grown but she's still lacking in the physical area.

What she lacks in physical strength and appearance, she makes up for it in her personality. Ashlyn tries to keep a serious and professional attitude, She is strong willed, ambitious, and incredibly intelligent especially for someone of her age. She never takes no for an answer, and always goes after what she wants. She is skilled with computers, coding, and aspires to one day be the leader in robotics and computer design. Her dream? Create a suit of some sort that allows weaker people be able to pull off amazing feats of strength and stamina. It may sound like science fiction to most, and she may have played too many video games and watched too many sci-fi movies and shows, but she does not care. She has a long way to go before she's there, but she is unafraid of accomplishing this daunting task. She can be a bit of a know-it all at times, and can be somewhat arrogant without realizing it.

Of course, this confident outgoing personality of hers is really just a front for her insecurities. The main of which, is her sexuality. She has begin to find herself attracted to people of the same sex. Growing up in a house that has openly expressed...dislike, for such people, has made her rather uneasy about this topic. Even more so, is that she has found herself having feelings for the protagonist. This is made even more uncomfortable by the fact they have been friends for awhile now. She also is unsure about her own future, and constantly has to fight with the fact that she believes actually accomplishing her goals are quite slim - a fact she rarely confides in anyone, no one but the protagonist knows about her concerns about her life goals

She does have an almost insatiable love for space and sci-fi things. She has always been fascinated by the stars and the unknown, and would give anything to explore the stars. She only lets the close friends of hers see this side of her though, and doesn't get all nerdy and geeky that often, as it somewhat embarrasses her.

Physicality: Thin, not unhealthily so, but much more so than others usually. She's not unfit or unhealthy, in fact she tries to stay in somewhat good shape. She's not too strong physically speaking, but she makes up for it with her intelligence and resourcefulness.

Bio: Ashlyn, or simply Ash, as her close friends call her, was born on a cold winter morning during December. She was never one of the 'popular kids'. In elementary, she always preferred to read, rather than play or talk with the other children. The shyness stemmed from her fearing of messing up, or just afraid that she wouldn't make a good impression. For the most part, she spent the early part of her childhood alone, either with her books or the occasional outing with her parents.

This changed, a few years later shortly before she met (Insert protagonist name here). She was watching some old sci-fi movies and was fascinated by them. Soon, she became interested in all things scientific, namely computers. She still didn't go out of her way to meet new people, but she wasn't shy anymore. She was just too busy with her own things to have time for other people.

Until she met the Protagonist at the age of 13. They were assigned to work on a school science project together. Ashlyn did most of the work, though, simply because she refused to let the Protagonist even touch the thing. Not because she thought the protagonist was stupid, or lacked the required skills, it was simply because she thought she could do a better job by herself. If it wasn't for the protagonist though, she would never have finished the project. After this, the two became best friends. Since then, the two have remained close.

Despite being more or less, best friends, Ashlyn started to develop feelings for the Protagonist shortly before the cancer appeared. This, was a shock to her, as much as it would be to anyone else once she realized it. She had never been that interested in romantic relations at all. If anything, she was scared. Her parents had openly expressed their dislike for such people, and while she never had seen a problem with them, she never imagined she could possibly like people of the same sex. Unfortunately, a month or so before the Cancer was announced and she fell into a Coma, Ashlyn began to avoid the protagonist, and make excuses to not see her. This, obviously, hurt their relationship quite a bit.

After the cancer was announced, she was devastated. Now, she wishes she would have said something before about her feelings. She may never get to now.

Misc:

Done and Done.
I was going for a more...eh, steampunk feel for her fantasy side. Is that alright?

I can finally get to work on that little project of mine now that I'm done with everything else :D