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    1. Sarcelle Renard 10 yrs ago
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@Leslie Hall It'll be up by tonight. I apologize for the hold up, I just haven't had time to sit down and finish it (on my phone right now).
@AtomicNut Oh lord, I can just picture it now.

Adrian: Mother... I'm beginning to suspect that these "perfect matches" you keep presenting to me are being brought here against their will.
Lucrecia: W-whatever would give you such a silly idea my dear son?
Adrian: Oh, I don't know. Maybe the fact that the last one kept screaming, "Please don't hurt me, I'll do anything!"
I don't think I have ever seen a love potion plot end well for the user. Not to mention, Adrian really wouldn't approve of such a method, as he wouldn't enjoy somebody loving him for any reason other than how amazing he is in his head.
@AAB Oh Adrian, you are likely doomed to be a romantically inept bachelor for all eternity.
@Indra No worries, I totally understand how you feel. I'm also doing a complete rework on the magic section, so you may as well hold off on your review anyway.
@Crimson Raven Of course. I have no intention of making an auto-dodging, invincible god of a character, as nothing kills an RP faster than a Gary Stu.
@Crimson Raven On the contrary, that was the exact kind of criticism I was looking for. You brought up a lot of points that I didn't even begin to consider and made me realize that even for an S class mage the power is probably too good. I will also make sure to go in and specify exactly what kind of equipment he has, but believe me when I say that I was not going to pull any cheeky meta game nonsense, especially since I specified that he can't Requip mid-fight. I'll wait until I hear from a GM first, but I'll likely change the portals to something a bit more tame like Teleportation.

Thanks for taking the time to read through it.
@Leslie Hall, @Denny, and @Indra

Alright alright, after so much waffling I could have opened a 24 hour waffle shop, I am finally done with my CS. I'm not all that sure about its quality, as I've never gone for S class level characters before, so by all means tear me a new one if it isn't up to snuff (especially regarding my custom magic).

Any who, here he is:



Hm, I'm kinda tempted make a second character. From the looks of it, we could always use another caravan traveler.
@KiwiBaer And that's not even mentioning the part where you have to deal with Adrian as a mentor. You have my condolences.
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