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I mean at least it's almost 100% acceptable. Just some tiny adjustments.
>he


Also your character looks okay, but dangerously close to being of the Devil.

That's actually because of the fighting and partying. I notice characters of Justice tend to try and avoid fights if they can (based on characters appearing in the games), but if they must, they'll do it, usually with little hesitation. They're very resolve-driven people.

The partying can stay just don't party too crazy, but the fighting needs to change to suit the arcana.

Once that's done your character is fine anyway.

Also if you want me to design your Persona you're free to ask me, just PM me and we'll talk. I offer this to everyone who joins, plus their Ultimates.

I also feel you can find a better Persona than Angel. I think someone like Joan of Arc would suit your character for instance.
>he


For future reference, if the RP status says "Apply", post your character to OOC for acceptance, don't post straight to Character.

Most people bring out the pitchforks when that happens... Like now.
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I literally ask myself this question everyday @ 4:20 ayyy blaze it.

Wubba lubba dub dub.


Oh he's already fitting in.


Looks good to me.

Picture would be great though, but you can do that later. Feel free to put it in.
I hate myself for this but...

I forgot to add a Theme Song field for the character sheet.

That ought to be fixed now though.
Just put an over <insert number>, or something for age.

Also those attacks look good, so they're free to go in.
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Yeah yeah that's what I meant, either have her demon-type form as a style, or a DT. Okay, the changes to Mary are complete. This should be the final draft.
Hopefully.
You can review her again back at where I posted her in the OOC. Thanks.


Looks fine, just one last thing, and it's making a specific field/dot point for Devil Trigger to make it clearer, once that's done it should be ready to update.

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Oh? So he was locked in just the demon world, eh? Since I'm not familar with Mundus, I wasn't sure how he operated or how he ruled over the demons, and wasn't sure if he was the type that would tolerate people working under him to work for/ or potentially change allegiances.

Not super-serious, eh? Whew, explains it.
LOL


Mundus should be fine as long as your first allegiance is to him. Generally right now he's looking to ways to get out of the demon world and into the human realm, so that's something to do if you have great loyalty to him.
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So she works as a Mundus General? Since that was what I was going for.
Wasn't sure if I did it correctly or not.

Aye, was planning to add some in, just wanted to see what you thought of the rest of it before I added some in there.

I'm surprised the acceptance was unanimous, was expecting worse. LOL


Mundus while locked away in the demon world... Is locked away in just the demon world, meaning he still has pretty free reign over all of the demon world, he's just currently locked out from the rest of the world. It's really weird.

You can still go work for Queen Sheba as a part timer though. Demons have been allowed to do as they wish mostly.

And this RP wasn't made super seriously, so acceptance bars aren't very high. We're mostly here for fun.
DT is a general super form kind of thing, how to put it, it does indeed make your styles stronger because generally you just became stronger, so more accurately, your Huntress style becomes faster, and Beasthood style becomes stronger during DT, it's already assumed you can switch between the two styles on the fly, so you don't really need to have both styles gain the traits of the other, because you can use both fairly freely.

As for Vileblood... Actually, why not make that your Devil Trigger? You take a somewhat demonic form, heightened defenses and such, but can still use your weapon. That said, seeing as your character is still largely human, your form actually won't change very much, you'll still look quite human, maybe with glowing eyes and growing some scales or fur depending on the attribute of your demonic powers.

Otherwise Flip-Off looks fine, and so does Demon's Omen and Chomp!
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