@HushedWhispers
Just wondering on two things regard the Family of Ostwall.
1. From what I've read, the patriarch of is a ruthless warrior. Would it be fair to assume that the rest of the family is or has knowledge of combat/fighting as well?
2. How old is the princess be, or would that be up to the writer? I was hoping to go for an older teenager/ young adult age of maybe 18-20 or so.
@Nevix
I just glanced over, and thought maybe I can help.
For starters, you can remove the fullstop from the [.hr]
I also noticed that you have a couple of codes that are not closed or are in excess in the personality section that is also contributing to the formatting break.
Hm, they could. Everything is entirely up to you when it comes to making your character even their age. I am not one that says your character has to be like this or that but I will say that it is not natural for a Queen or Princess to fight and get their hands dirty. LOL.
Update; To everyone that has turned in a character, give me a moment to review over them and such, please. Thanks.