Terminal

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@Doc Doctor, I will go ahead and clarify that the windows for the limousine are not bulletproof, the .88 should easily be able to pass through the chauffeur's head, and you can go ahead and auto the two Vector thugs. The doors are also unlocked.

I give you permission to edit your post accordingly. Given that you clearly put some effort into the second and third paragraphs, you might find it preferable to make minor conclusory edits plus an additional paragraph detailing the results rather than tossing the whole thing out (though this is just a suggestion).

In the future, feel free to ask in advance for details like that so we can prevent a buildup of too many chained presumptions (although if you are running up against the deadline and I am offline, it is fine to post what you have and I can give permission to edit after the fact).

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And shoot, I completely forgot to mix in all the tense errors.

Oh well. I guess you get that for free this time.

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Post is up.

You will note that none of you have been tagged.

This means you may choose to do nothing before my next post in approximately two days - though you are invited to do whatever you deem fit, of course.

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The spars exchang of word amongst the a passenger wa interrupted by the sound of the a chauffeur rapping on th glass partition with one of he a hand, lowering it a moment later to speak to all of them.
"Be ready for anything people, the fix i in." He said with a backward glanc, flashing a worried smil their way as h gestured with a finger through the front a windshield. Clearly visibl walking down th middl of the a intersection wer four individual - the first two wer worn-looking men wearing rusted and tattered a chainmail over baggy a jogging clothe, both carrying what the discerning ey would hav identified as a Vector submachin gun. They both looked anxiou and held their arms poorly, indicating they wer unfamiliar with th a weapon. The third individual looked to be a knight in a full plat armor carrying a modern compound crossbow, who were currently in th proces of calmly sliding a fat, cylinder-tipped bolt into th a tiller' slid. Finally, the fourth a person wer simply a tall teenager wearing a high-school uniform of some sort, complet with logo - who had run out ahead of the other thre and deployed a tripod-mounted, spiked rod in the middl of the a street. A moment later h ros and ran off, heading away from whatever wa about to happen.
The audible hum from th a levitating spher above the a intersection had notably amplified, and with a dull roar it unleashed a searing, jagged lanc of a electricity at the thre a blackguard advancing toward the a limousin - only to bend and arc directly into the a tripod mounted spik instead.
Looking out from th a limousin in other direction would reveal what th previously bustling a street wer now completely vacant, save for a few harried-looking a pedestrian who looked to be hurrying rapidly in th opposite direction of th a scen.

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Perfect, that accounts for everyone.

The next post - with modifications - will be up shortly.

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@Holmishire, @Bright_Ops, approximately 12 hours remain for you to post.

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<Snipped quote by Terminal>

Incidentally (and it's no big deal), I mentioned -- poorly -- in the bio that Luca's mobility is all organic, which was meant to imply he's got all-natural musculature. "Actuators" in this case wouldn't really apply..... could we, Idunno, call for some sort of edit on that, to negate, oh, I don't know, some similar offense by no one in particular on the team?

#IgotUfam

@mdk

I interpreted it to mean that his relative strength and range of motion are limited to organic constraints, but noted. Editing.

*EDIT: Done. Changed 'actuator control' to 'motor control.'

Funny how analogue etymology works.

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Speaking of which,

According to the timestamp, 24 hours remain until the first time limit from the first post expires for the remaining posters.

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@Terminal

After everyone has posted, do we wait for one from you or just keep rolling?

@Doc Doctor

I am personally waiting until everyone has posted once or until we run up against my own deadline. Feel free to do whatever you like until then.

In the future, I may respond immediately or wait - it depends on context.

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@Terminal

... ... ... It was a double-space. I noted that I had two spaces between two words. I couldn't handle there being two spaces. Did it say anything in the rules that I couldn't edit? ... aaaaaaaaaauuuuuuuuuuugggggggghhhhhhhhh...

@PlatinumSkink

No, no, it's entirely within the rules. But consider:

If you make edits before I see them, I cannot add any errors you remove to the contextual reality. So I will find other ways to complicate your life. For each edit you make, expect something terrible to happen.

The upside being: If you survive, you will know it and no longer have to worry about that particular edit. I will not punish you more than once per edit.