The Grey Dust

The Duel Tower: The first year students. (A Yu-Gi-Oh! Duel Academy Roleplay.) [Axed]

Very well then, here's a possible proposed replacement.

Name: Spellbook of Resonance
Spell type: Normal
Effect: Target 2 Spellcaster-Type monster you control with different levels, reveal 1 "Spellbook" Spell Card in your hand; Apply these effects, in sequence, depending on the number of difference between the levels of those targets. You can only activate 1 "Spellbook of Resonance" per turn.
● 1: Select one Target: increase or decrease its level By 1.
● 3: Select one Target: Neither player can Special Summon a Monster with a level lower than its level until the end of your next turn.
● 5: Select one Target: Neither player can Special Summon a Monster with a level higher than its level until the end of your next turn.
● 7: Select both Targets: destroy them.

The Duel Tower: The first year students. (A Yu-Gi-Oh! Duel Academy Roleplay.) [Axed]

With Edits Made:

Should I make another Spellbook card to replace Chance?

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Name: Spellbook of Hope
Spell type: Quickplay
Effect: If your opponent controls a monster and you control no monsters, while you have no cards in your hand, and your Life Points are lower than your opponent's Life Points: Banish all monsters from your graveyard; Apply these effects, in sequence, depending on the number of "Spellbook" Spell Cards in your graveyard with different names. You can only activate 1 "Spellbook of Hope" per turn.
● 1: Add 1 "Spellbook" Spell Card from your graveyard to your Hand.
● 2: Add 1 Spellcaster-type Monster from your deck to your Hand.
● 3: Draw 1 Card.
● 4: Gain 100 Life Points for each Spell Card in your graveyard.
● 5: Return Spell/Trap Card(s) your opponent controls to the hand, up to the number of cards in your hand.
● 6: Banish 1 Face-up Monster your opponent controls.
● 7: Special Summon 1 of your Banished Monsters.

Name: Spellbook of Equilibrium
Spell type: Quickplay
Effect: Target 1 Spellcaster-Type monster on the field and activate 1 of these effects;
● This turn, only that monster can attack and can attack all monsters your opponent controls once each.
● This turn, It cannot be destroyed by battle.

Name: The Staff of Prophecy
Level/rank: 1
Attribute: Fire
Monster Type(s): Spellcaster
Effect: This card's ATK and DEF are equal to its Level x 100. During each of your Standby Phases, increase the Level of this card by 1 (max 12). If you control another Spellcaster-Type monster with a different Level than this card; this card's Level becomes the Level of that monster, then you can return 1 Spellbook Spell card or 1 Spellcaster-Type monster whose Level is less than this card to your hand. You cannot add cards from the Deck to your hand except by drawing them then turn you activate this effect. You can only use this effect of "The Staff of Prophecy" once per turn.
ATK/DEF ?/?

Name: The Ring of Prophecy
Level/rank: 1
Attribute: Earth
Monster Type(s): Spellcaster
Effect: This card's ATK and DEF are equal to its Level x 200. During each of your Standby Phases, increase the Level of this card by 1 (max 12). If you control another Spellcaster-Type monster with a different Level than this card; this card's Level becomes the Level of that monster, then you can draw 1 card. During the End Phase of the turn you activate this effect, discard all the cards in your hand: if you cannot, take 1000 damage. You can only use this effect of "The Ring of Prophecy" once per turn.
ATK/DEF ?/?

Name: The Vessel of Prophecy
Level/rank: 1
Attribute: Water
Monster Type(s): Spellcaster
Effect: This card's ATK and DEF are equal to its Level x 300. During each of your Standby Phases, increase the Level of this card by 1 (max 12). If you control another Spellcaster-Type monster with a different Level than this card; this card's Level becomes the Level of that monster, then you then you can Special Summon from your Deck 1 Spellcaster-Type monster whose Level is less than this card. You cannot Special Summon monsters for the rest of this turn. You can only use this effect of "The Ring of Prophecy" once per turn.
ATK/DEF ?/?

Name: The Blade of Prophecy
Level/rank: 1
Attribute: Air
Monster Type(s): Spellcaster
Effect: This card's ATK and DEF are equal to its Level x 400. During each of your Standby Phases, increase the Level of this card by 1 (max 12). If you control another Spellcaster-Type monster with a different Level than this card; this card's Level becomes the Level of that monster, then you can destroy 1 face-up monster on the field whose level is less than this card. You cannot conduct your Battle Phase the turn you activate this effect. You can only use this effect of "The Blade of Prophecy" once per turn.
ATK/DEF ?/?

The Duel Tower: The first year students. (A Yu-Gi-Oh! Duel Academy Roleplay.) [Axed]

Change the last effect of hope to "Special Summon one of your Banished Monsters"

Spellbook of Chance is refused.

Change The Staff of Prophecy's graveyard to hand effect to "Add one Spellbook Spell card or once Spellcaster-type monster with a lower level than this card"

Add the effect to Ring that if you can not discard that turn, you take 800 points of damage.

Change Blade's effect to destroy instead of Banish.

If we can agree to those changes, you're good to go with them.

@Ammokkx

excellent then.

The Duel Tower: The first year students. (A Yu-Gi-Oh! Duel Academy Roleplay.) [Axed]

Hello, interested in joining your YGO RP.
Thinking about using Spellbooks or 6 Sams (my actual decks irl)

Below are 7 custom Cards created to expand the Spellbook/Prophecy series.
Please tell me what you think about the balancing.

Name: Spellbook of Hope
Spell type: Quickplay
Effect: If your opponent controls a monster and you control no monsters, while you have no cards in your hand, and your Life Points are lower than your opponent's Life Points: Banish all monsters from your graveyard; Apply these effects, in sequence, depending on the number of "Spellbook" Spell Cards in your graveyard with different names. You can only activate 1 "Spellbook of Hope" per turn.
● 1: Add 1 "Spellbook" Spell Card from your graveyard to your Hand.
● 2: Add 1 Spellcaster-type Monster from your deck to your Hand.
● 3: Draw 1 Card.
● 4: Gain 100 Life Points for each Spell Card in your graveyard.
● 5: Return Spell/Trap Card(s) your opponent controls to the hand, up to the number of cards in your hand.
● 6: Banish 1 Face-up Monster your opponent controls.
● 7: Special Summon 1 Banished Monster.

Name: Spellbook of Equilibrium
Spell type: Quickplay
Effect: Target 1 Spellcaster-Type monster on the field and activate 1 of these effects;
● This turn, only that monster can attack and can attack all monsters your opponent controls once each.
● This turn, It cannot be destroyed by battle.

Name: Spellbook of Chance
Spell type: Normal
Effect: If you control a Spellcaster-Type monster: Tribute 1 monster your opponent Controls; Special Summon 1 monster in either player's Graveyard to your opponent's side of the field. You can only activate 1 "Spellbook of Chance" per turn.

Name: The Staff of Prophecy
Level/rank: 1
Attribute: Fire
Monster Type(s): Spellcaster
Effect: This card's ATK and DEF are equal to its Level x 100. During each of your Standby Phases, increase the Level of this card by 1 (max 12). If you control another Spellcaster-Type monster with a different Level than this card; this card's Level becomes the Level of that monster, then you can return 1 card from your graveyard to your hand. You cannot add cards from the Deck to your hand except by drawing them then turn you activate this effect. You can only use this effect of "The Staff of Prophecy" once per turn.
ATK/DEF ?/?

Name: The Ring of Prophecy
Level/rank: 1
Attribute: Earth
Monster Type(s): Spellcaster
Effect: This card's ATK and DEF are equal to its Level x 200. During each of your Standby Phases, increase the Level of this card by 1 (max 12). If you control another Spellcaster-Type monster with a different Level than this card; this card's Level becomes the Level of that monster, then you can draw 1 card. During the End Phase of the turn you activate this effect, discard all the cards in your hand. You can only use this effect of "The Ring of Prophecy" once per turn.
ATK/DEF ?/?

Name: The Vessel of Prophecy
Level/rank: 1
Attribute: Water
Monster Type(s): Spellcaster
Effect: This card's ATK and DEF are equal to its Level x 300. During each of your Standby Phases, increase the Level of this card by 1 (max 12). If you control another Spellcaster-Type monster with a different Level than this card; this card's Level becomes the Level of that monster, then you then you can Special Summon from your Deck 1 Spellcaster-Type monster whose Level is less than this card. You cannot Special Summon monsters for the rest of this turn. You can only use this effect of "The Vessel of Prophecy" once per turn.
ATK/DEF ?/?

Name: The Blade of Prophecy
Level/rank: 1
Attribute: Air
Monster Type(s): Spellcaster
Effect: This card's ATK and DEF are equal to its Level x 400. During each of your Standby Phases, increase the Level of this card by 1 (max 12). If you control another Spellcaster-Type monster with a different Level than this card; this card's Level becomes the Level of that monster, then you can banish 1 face-up monster on the field whose level is less than this card. You cannot conduct your Battle Phase the turn you activate this effect. You can only use this effect of "The Blade of Prophecy" once per turn.
ATK/DEF ?/?

As you can tell, Hope is designed to be a "Destiny Draw" card and the 4 Prophecy cards are supposed to stand in for the minor arcana and help XYZ summon the XYZ monster of the Archetype (which hardly see play) easier.

[Dead Thread]

Name: Thomas Rhymer
Title: The Truthspeaker, LightBringer, Dawnrider

Patron God: Belenos, Beli Mawr
Patron’s Domain: The Sun

Aspect of Patron’s Domain: Healing

Appearance:

Hider

General Apparel: Linen Undershirt, Inner tunic with long tight sleeves, An outer tunic with a leather belt and a sleeveless surcoat.
Armor/Weapons/Equipment: Thomas carries a Falchion and a greatshield. Chainmail, leather overcoat.
Magical/Divine Abilities: Thomas can cast a fire spell on his equipment, cloaking sword and shield in radiant light. He also has minor healing abilities, (broken bones, heavy bleeding etc. Nothing like curing the blind or anything)

Personality: Stoic, reserved. Lawful Good.
Likes: Poetry, God, Fighting with Honor
Dislikes: Injustice, Liars, Thieves
Fears: Thomas fears a death without meaning.
Aspirations: To carry Beli Mawr's light to the darkest corners of the known realms.

Relationships:
Allies: Erstwhile,his horse.
Enemies: Those that lurk in the dark.
Loyalties: To the innocent and poor. To Belanos and his disciples.


History: Thomas was plucked by nobility from obscurity, trained as a squire until he was 15. He briefly chose the priesthood, but returned to the way of the warrior after looters destroyed his Church and murdered the priests. He has roamed the lands for 12 years searching out evil. Belanos has watched Thomas since he was a boy, having been born on an auspicious day.

@Rhymer

Accepted. Welcome to Hell, take a cigar if you like, you won't ever need a light where we're going...

[Dead Thread]

Character Profile

Name: Talændrel Zorvak
Title(s): The Collector

Patron God: Solstyr , The Betrayer
Patron’s Domain: Treasury

Aspect of Patron’s Domain: Soul Collecting

Appearance: Athletic build. Dark grey hair & eyes. Stands at 178cm tall and weighs 79kg. Rough face, shaved. Once you look at his eyes, without the need of him using any ability, you feel your power draining and desperation/paranoia taking over you.
General Apparel: Wears a jacket, jeans, hooded cape, gloves, boots.
Armor/Weapons/Equipment:
* Multiple knives each imbued with a "tamed" and trusted soul able to change direction after you throw them, come back to you or fight "on their own".
* Metal wires, can change to spirit form, used to shred opponent, connect them straight to their body in order for limited movement manipulation, and for different means. While in spirit form it can connect straight to his soul gaining complete control over his actions without the target even knowing.
** Trusted dagger always alongside him never leaving his presence **
Magical/Divine Abilities:
* Soul drainage/enchantment- Can absorb any thing's soul into his own body absorbing all it's knowledge/memories/experience in life and can enchant souls to items.
* Can open portal to personal realm created for storage of everything he so desires including himself. The realm occupies the same space as the other world. Can be used to traverse unpassable terrain or silently sneak on someone.
* Divine Judgment- By putting one hand over your forehead and looking into your eyes, his gaze piercing through your fleshy self and into the depths of your soul, he can confirm the darkness/light in you. Even the slightest stain of corruption present in your soul will make you unworthy of existence in his eyes.

Personality: Extreme hate for every human being. Every soul that he has absorbed until now, every sin that they committed and every twisted thought that ever came through their mind, being a major sin at its own, has made Thalændrel realise that there is no hope for the human race. Always serious, has never "smiled" since that fated day. Silent and thoughtful nature.

Likes: Collectible rare items, knowledge in any form and pure souls.
Dislikes: Humans. Gods and Titans alike because they all led to the making of humanity.
Fears: That the human race will never cease to exist.
Aspirations: Becoming GOD. To smite every single impure being in this world and all that he has power over.

Relationships: Deceased
Allies: Thousands and one - all the souls that he has collected and managed to control beside his Patron GOD.
Enemies: Humanity and everything that lead to it's creation.
Loyalties: None

History: His history is one of loss, hardships and revelation. As he will never admit to having a history before he achieved revelation, meaning he was given powers by Solstyr. Being the only one favored by this GOD he was given tremendous powers as no other God had ever bestowed upon a mere mortal. Many heroes and champions fighting for their own God were already known before and were practically legends by their own accomplishments, then their Gods took notice granting them power to raise them even higher, to make them real legends immortal through history. But in Talændrel's case he was no one, helped by none and betrayed by all. At a point in his early life he finally truly understood the nature of humans and of this world we live in. It was as a sudden rush of realization took over him elevating his inner self and releasing a huge burden. The shackles that bound his soul to this mortal realm were undone, thus gaining the attention of several deities but accepting only the one that had experienced the same things as he had...

He used the powers that he was given to rid all those who were stained with the seed of corruption from this realm or put them to better use as his main source of power. By now he had accumulated thousands of souls, having mastered their power, he would proceed to go after legendary rogue spirits that were said to have stayed on this realm as souls holding domain over several specific historical places, usually where large armies clashed or where treacheries took place. These souls were the most powerful, having stayed in their spectral form in this world for ages. The more souls Zorvak absorbed the more he felt his power grow. He was practically immortal by his current power alone, but that wasn't enough to even make a slight change in this world so he would do whatever he could to achieve ascension.

@Bishop

Jeans? In the Middle Earth? Seriously?

Accepted. Although I noticed your powers are rather... Interesting shall we say? I wonder what will happen in Hell to this particular Demigod who collects souls and thinks it is his place to keep all those souls? Or does he think he can use his soul powers in Hell against the very laws of Hell?

[Dead Thread]

Still interested!

character application

Name: Adrian Balcer
Title(s): The golden cavalier

Patron God: The winged general , sigil is a golden eagle holding a lance and shield
Patron’s Domain: Warfare

Aspect of Patron’s Domain: Cavalry

Appearance:Adrian is a strong man of well-toned musculature. He stands at 1 meter 75 and weighs in at 90 kilograms of muscle and bad temper. He has black hair and green eyes. The eyes flare up with a golden glow when Adrain exerts his supernatural power.
General Apparel:Always dressed in uniform, Adrian's ensemble consists of a segmented platemail breastplate emblazoned with the sigil of the winged general, Relatively standard greaves and sabots, and A decorated helmet that quite resembles the beak of a bird of prey.
Armor/Weapons/Equipment:Adrian is encased in the aforementioned armor, along with a shield in his left arm.. When it comes to weapons, he primarily wields a winged lance gifted to him by his patron. The lance is a weapon of great power, when it is brought to bear on an enemy, sparks of lightning envelop the head. It is however, still a weapon unfit for close-quarters combat. For this purpose, Adrian also has a cavalry saber of comparable quality.
Magical/Divine Abilities:At Adrian's beckon, he can summon a phantasmal horse of golden light. This horse is not a living entity of its own, but simply a manifestation of Adrain's power. It is for all intents and purposes a trained warhorse otherwise. It shows absolute loyalty to its summoner and has strength and endurance to rival even the hardiest and strongest breeds of mortal horses.

Personality:Adrian is a boisterous and confident individual. He believes himself to be a peerless cavalier and one of the best warriors of the world. This worldview is unsurprising given little has ever happened to challenge the notion. He sees the world as a place filled with corruption and injustice, to be crushed under the hooves of his horse for the cause of good. He himself is of course an incorruptible warrior and defender of the innocent.

Likes:Justice, respect, adoration and honorable combat.
Dislikes: Cowardice, injustice , people that give in to despair.
Fears: The idea of enemies that cannot fall to the sword
Aspirations:To become an unstoppable force of good, destined to drive evil from the world forever.

Relationships: None that would be relevant to the task at hand
Allies:His patron. Also the great warriors of the steppes, who consider him the avatar of the golden general. Not that it will matter down in hell.
Enemies: As a demigod, he stands opposed to the pearled one, god of deserts and fire, and patron to the peoples that tore down an old empire. It was Adrian who led the charge that broke the desert hordes spine forever, and he has never been forgiven for it.
Loyalties:Adrian has a strict adherence to hierarchy and will often try to form a rudimentary one when he's out of his element.He expects obedience from those 'below' him, but will bow to those he considers his superior. As he is a warrior without peers, one could see how this could become a problem.

History: Adrian began his life as the son of a peasant farmer. Life was simple, days passed in a routine. Every autumn the lords came for their rightful part of the harvest, every winter they would remain with more than enough to survive with.

And then, as is often the case, things changed. In this case, the change was the coming of war. This was Adrain's fifteenth year. It seemed like nothing but yet another distant event until the autumn came again. This time the part of the harvest taken was quite a bit larger. “for the good of the country.” They said. The winter was harsh and ruthless that year. With stubborn hardiness, Adrian and his family survived. They were not particularly angry. After all, only a fool would argue against how these things always went. In that same vein, they also did not complain when the army came back in the summer, demanding Adrian pack his belongings and throw himself into the merciless machine of war. He had been raised a proud countryman, so there were little complaints. He said goodbye to his parents, who looked at him leave with pride... And perhaps also a bit of worry, but was such not to be expected of concerned and wholesome parents?

War was an unkind master to Adrian. The mellow routine of country life was a sharp contrast of the iron-hard discipline in the army. No longer did he wake up to the sound of birds singing. No longer could he loiter in the fields when his work was done. Those things had been replaced with signal horns and barracks respectively. Still, the discipline forged him from an easygoing country kid to a disciplined soldier. Always orderly walking in lockstep along his comrades.

Of course, as a peasant, he was far from worthy of riding the mighty steeds that the Royal cavalry used. Nevertheless, he was always impressed to see them in action. The way in which they scattered the enemy as a single unit. Somehow, he survived a full year of war as a simple foot soldier. And it was on the eve of the last battle of the year that his destiny came calling.

It was but a spur of the moment. The general was thrownout of the saddle by an opportunistic enemy, and Adrian was close enough to intercede. As a footstool's, all he was armed with was a spear and his training. Despite this, he threw himself between his superior and the enemy cavalry. Call it skill, call it luck, but despite his inferior equipment and unfavorable position, he managed to drive his spear through the cavalier leading the charge.

It was like a sea parting. The sight of their commander getting impaled by a mere commoner sowed the seeds of doubt amongst the sand-people. And the quick counterattack only served to further sow panic amongst their ranks. Adrian's act of spontaneous heroism had earned him both the attention and the respect of the top commanders. And so they granted his one wish. To serve as a cavalryman.

Of course, there was some opposition to the idea of a commoner riding in the cavalry, but few complained. After all, no one wanted to be that one guy who complained about the hero that had saved the day.

Winter came, and the war ground to a halt. It was a time of training, of regrouping, and of reunions with family dearly missed. At first, they did not recognize the proud mounted man clad in armor. But then they realized this man was their son, hardened in the crucible of war.

Though he could only see them for a week, it was a week of rejoicing. Of simple happiness, and of excited tales of the prestige and power he had earned by his hard work alone. He reveled in the pride his parents showed, and why should he not. He had gone above and beyond the call of duty to the country.

At the week's end. Adrian whispered a goodbye to his home for a second time and dutifully returned to the field of battle. His comrades in arms were already waiting for him. The first engagement with the enemy was marked by a favorable wind in the back. The day ended on what would be a year of fortune and victory.

Adrian's part in this year of conquest was large. He had grown to become respected by his peers and his superiors. Always leading the charge, always boldly breaking through where no normal man would even consider attacking. Even though he was of lowborn blood, heralds and bards sung of his exploits all the same.

Now, wars in this time were often short affairs, not often taking longer than a year or two. Despite this, the enemy did not want to give up the rich lands they were being driven from without a fight. A last stand was made The sultan himself had come to bolster his troops morale.

When the horns of battle sounded, Adrian's purpose became clear more than ever. He spurred his horse onwards into a charge. He leveled his lance to striking height and drove it through the ranks of infantry, through the cavalry that he had clashed with so often, and finally through the heart of the sultan himself.

His leading the charge had profoundly broken the sand-people. In mass, they abandoned their position. They ran for their lives even as they were scythed down by the dozen by Adrian and his comrades. Nevermore would they have to fear the menace from the desert.

And it was victorious and resplendent that they marched into the city they had come to liberate. The people sang praises to the victorious army. After all, they had been as slaves to the oppressors from the desert, and now they would be free. Leading the victory parade was Adrian himself, Helmeted and stoic, he silently basked in the glory.

The evening was long and loud. The victorious men partied the night away, drunk as much on their victory as they were on the fine wines of the city. Adrian partook in the celebrations, but rather humbly so for one of his rank. He had not forgotten about his humble origins. At least not at this time.

That morning, Adrian went to marvel at the wonders of the city he had helped liberate. For some reason, he felt himself called to the great temple in the center of the city. Clerics and priests were hard at work casting away the heretical symbols of the sand-people's heathen god. The great domed temple would soon be restored in its old glory.

He found himself in the middle of the temple when the priests unfurled a great and impressive tapestry. A gust of wind catched it and stretched it to its full length. Something vast and mighty could be felt in the temple. The sun stood high in the sky, and the rays of light shining through the stained-glass windows all converged in the middle of the temple. Everyone else felt what was happening too. Everyone kneeled, like a soldier showing respect to their superior. Though Adrian did not fall completely to the ground. He knew in his heart... His valor and determination had made him as an equal.

It was that day the golden general of the steppe peoples bequeathed a spark of his power on a follower most favored by him.

@Natsucooldude

Accepted, Welcome to Hell, please fill out a nametag and sit tight while we wait for the rest of the guests to show up.

Abandon All Hope: An Old-fashioned Dungeon Crawl.

roleplayerguild.com/topics/89035-aband..

It's up.

I thought I posted my character...whoops! Don't check me on my historical accuracy-it's more for a feel of the character than anything. Here it is>

Thomas Rhymer

Name: Thomas Rhymer
Title(s): The Truthspeaker, LightBringer, Dawnrider

Patron God: Belenos, Beli Mawr
Patron’s Domain: The Sun

Aspect of Patron’s Domain: Light, Fire and Healing

Appearance:
General Apparel: Linen Undershirt, Inner tunic with long tight sleeves, An outer tunic with a leather belt and a sleeveless surcoat.
Armor/Weapons/Equipment:Thomas carries a Falchion and a greatshield. Chainmail, leather overcoat.
Magical/Divine Abilities: Thomas can cast a fire spell on his equipment, cloaking sword and shield in radiant light. He also has minor healing abilities, (broken bones, heavy bleeding etc. Nothing like curing the blind or anything)

Personality: Stoic, reserved. Lawful Good.
Likes: Poetry, God, Fighting with Honor
Dislikes: Injustice, Liars, Thieves
Fears: Thomas fears a death without meaning
Aspirations: To carry Beli Mawr's light to the darkest corners.

Relationships: Married, wife dec.
Allies: Erstwhile, his horse.
Enemies: Guy of Lusignan, Former King in Jerusalem
Loyalties: Loyal to the King of England, King Richard III


History: Born, 1187, Thomas Rhymer was raised as a squire in England, became a knight and joined the second crusade. He fought in the holy land for 15 years before setting out to return home...

@Rhymer

Good, although Aspects are usually limited to One area/topic. I'd suggest compiling them into either one "Clump" such as the aspect of "Radiance" symbolizing the warmth and light the sun provides (and thus indirectly some touchy-feely healing) as an official Aspect. Also the history seems a bit brief for a warhero-demigod. Although I will allow it as long as you change the actual countries to some fantasy nation as the world isn't quite "Earth" per say but a fantasy "Middle Earth" realm which is an amalgam of the PC histories.

[Dead Thread]

I believe we have enough to begin the drafting of the world.
If there are any questions please ask them here.
Else, depending on the turnout, the first IC GM post shall begin Next Monday Night.

Abandon All Hope: An Old-fashioned Dungeon Crawl.

I'm very very interested..don't tell me there's no more room. @The Grey Dust
I never correct other people's post in IC or OC but yours was just written so good that the little mistakes stood out as an eyesore. And my english vocabulary is still forming so I just wanted to ask something.
+ At the "5-th layer of hell paragraph" 5-th line from the top "middle the layer"
+ At the "5-th layer of hell paragraph" 5-th line from the bottom "for the fighters in the never die"
+ And what does "tainted metal waters end" mean?

@Bishop

The First two were glaringly obvious typos now that I've read it again, editing your own writing is difficult especially when you just wrote it. That being said, the the last point means exactly that: Tainted Metal Waters. The waters are Tainted, and the the kenning of Metal Waters suggests there is almost an equal distribution of water to metal.

There is still room depending on how many people show up, ideally a group of 9 is manageable for a dungeon crawl like this.

Also, for everyone else as well, the actual thread is up, and I'll continue to flesh out the first page with a synopsis post, lore and whatnot. The first GM post shall be approximately Next Monday and lay the scene. Essentially the Demigods are being sent on their quest, either that or they all meet up at a bar and decide to all become gods because bars are the best places to start adventures, or prisons. :)