Turboshitter

Mystery World // Misery World~ (Overlord RP) [High casual/Low advanced]

*sighs* Okay, I'm going to look at some of these profiles, but guild info is gonna have to wait. I don't know why but I just feel fucking exhausted. Sorry guys.

Mystery World // Misery World~ (Overlord RP) [High casual/Low advanced]

@Turboshitter So I'm curious about something. Shouldn't your equipment change your stats? Or at least let their be the base stats, and then the bonuses be in another column alongside them, then the grand total? That way one knows what it decreases to when certain ailment spells or skills are in play? I don't know... Just something I thought of because of the whole being a MMORPG & D&D player.

@Gilgex

Whew! Ummmm... well, the stats sheet is just your average, unmodified stats. Since this isn't a heavily numbers oriented game, you can just say "this item increases this stat" and that'll do just fine. No need to constantly alter the stat sheet.

Also, today I sort of took off as a relaxation day because I finished my fourth and final interview of the week. Now today I'm going to work on catching up on all the things I shirked off yesterday, and hopefully the guild info and accepting more character sheets will be some of those things ^^'

Mystery World // Misery World~ (Overlord RP) [High casual/Low advanced]

Took me bloody forever to get her done... JEEEBUS it took me forever. Eagerly awaiting constructive criticism

Lady♥Pastry

The face, and hair are the only things that are the same, for my character. Clothing completely different!


Name(s):Lady♥Pastry. LadyP, LP
Gender:Female
Height: 1M,77cm
Weight:154 lb
Race:Elf
Title: The Cockamamie Entertainer
Custom Job:

• Joker: This class merges the show stopping theatrics and magic of a magician. With the the agility, and devious nature of the Harlequin. The Joker is truly a wild card of the performing, deadly arts. Sure to bring a good time to any party.

Residence: Fort Deadship
Alignment:Chaotic Neutral
Sense of Justice: -10?
Racial level: N/A
Job level:100
Joker: 20
Rogue: 15
Mage: 15
Monk: 10
BeastMaster: 10 Lady♥Pastry's Pet
Other: 30

Stats:

• HP: 80
• MP: 80
• PHY. ATK: 90
• PHY. DEF: 25
• AGILITY: 120
• MAG. ATK: 90
• MAG. DEF: 30
• RESIST: 70
• SPECIAL: 70
• Total: 655

Spells:

• Trick Room: Creates a space that inverts a person's senses making up down, and left right.
• Dancing blades: makes ghost blades appear to help defend, and attack
• Ribbon snare: A selected area glows, and any inside are ensnared by ribbons.
• Royal Flush: Throws out 5 cards from 10, jack, queen, king, and ace. These cards explode into columns of pure destructive energy. The first one being 1 meter in diameter grows by one meter onward to finally 5 meters in diameter.
• Symphonic Spheres: balls of light appear playing any set of songs either downloaded into personal banks, or the songs of the game. The sound waves disorient opponents, and compel their bodies to dance. Preventing them from attacking.
• Displacement: Attacks miss 50% of the time
• Invisibility sphere: Makes everyone within 3m invisible
• Reflection Wall: creates a square mirror that sucks in an attack then shoots it back, or away.
• Diamond Skin: Increases physical, and Magical defenses
• Giant’s strength: Increases physical attack strength
• Tiger’s claws: Increases the sharpness of weapons
• Poison Gas: Releases a cloud of paralytic poison
• Blinding Confetti: Pretty self explanatory a huge puff of glitter confetti is rains down blinding those in a 50cm area. Save of course for the caster.
• Message
• Teleportation

Skills:

Action

• Quick Draw: Can draw fast, and switch weapons just as fast
• Harlequin's Dance: Moves with incredible agility to easily dance around an opponent’s attacks. While making predicting attacks near impossible.
• Flurry of blows: a monk may strike with a massive flurry of blows at the expense of accuracy.
• Ki Strike: Infuses Ki into her weapons for the purpose of dealing damage to cut through damage reduction, and Hardness.
• Wholeness of Body: Can heal a number of hit points equal to twice monk level.
• Crippling strike: A rogue with this ability can sneak attack opponents with such precision that her blows weaken and hamper them.
• Defensive Roll: The rogue can roll with a potentially lethal blow to take less damage from it than they otherwise would.
• Escape Artist

Passive

• Strength of One: Master and pet add together their physical strength stats
• Fortitude of One: Master and pet add together their HP stats
• Agility of One: Master and pet add together their Agility stats
• Will of One : Master and pet add together their MP stats
• Balance: You can walk on a precarious surface at half agility
• Purity of blood]: immunity to all diseases and poisons except for supernatural, and magical.
• Improved Evasion
• Diamond Soul: A monk gains spell resistance to her current monk level +10
• Slow Fall: A monk within an arm’s reach of a wall can use it to slow their descent.
• Slippery Mind: This ability represents the rogue’s ability to wiggle free of magical effects that would otherwise compel them.
• Trap Sense: A rogue gains an intuitive sense that alerts her to danger from traps.
• Weapon Mastery: Slashing/piercing
• Weapon Mastery: Throwing knives

Over Rank Magics

• Over Rank Alternative: Quivering Palm: A monk can set up vibrations within the body of another creature that can thereafter be fatal.
• Over Rank Magic: 54 man shuffle: A deck of 54 appears when thrown out creates doppelgangers that assume the casters form. While the real caster turns invisible. They set off a small explosion ranging from: Blinding Confetti, ribbons to ensnare, or explode.
• Over Rank Alternative: Laughing Marionette: Movements become more fluid, and physical attacks become destructive. Like a puppet on a set of strings they’re able to switch direction while in midair instantaneously, and their movements unpredictable. As if they’ve become another person entirely.
• Over Rank Magic: Phantasmal Killer: Fearsome illusion kills target

Equipment:

• Harlequin mask: Divine item.
  ~ Increases agility stat by x2 & immune to unholy damage
• Magicians Suit: Legendary Item
  ~ A Red morning coat with golden buttons, and black lapels; over a black silk corset. Red capri suit pants with a black belt. A small velvet red top hat worn facing and tilting to the right.
  ~ Greatly increases defenses, resistance, and MP. It's cloth armor meaning no agility decreases or penalties apply.
• Ring of Vitality: Relic item
  ~ HP stat +50
• Mystics Gloves: World item
  ~ increases magical attack +100, Mana points +100, and decreases casting time in half
• Boots of the cat: Relic item
  ~ Agility Stat +50
• Duplicating Kunai: Legendary Item
  ~ Throwing daggers that as the name suggests duplicates infinite times. When thrown multiply into a total of three.
• Ebony and Ivory: Divine Item
  ~ They are twin daggers reaching 30cm in length one being a pure black blade with a red hilt with a quillion that looks like bat wings. While the other is a golden blade with a white handle, with a feathered quillion
  ~ One steals mana the other health it’s based on 1/2 of total damage dealt with both daggers.
• animikii’s Bloodsipper: Divine Item
  ~ A blade made of rare red metals that inflicts bleeding wounds, and paralysis from an electrical energy that pulses through the blade. Which is harmless to the wielder. It moves faster than any saber as it’s material is lighter than most other items.

Bio: Lady♥Pastry in real life is a shy 20 something girl living happily alone with her mother. Working part time at a library where she has to be quiet, and stock books. All while being an accounting student at a fancy college. In her free time she enjoyed reading the occasional Graphic Novel with heavy comedy themes. This caused her to yearn to tell jokes, but was so scared of what others would say. People made her nervous when they talk to her, even if they were friendly. Which is why many just thought her for the snobby library aid. Due to her mother working for the top college in the nation as an accounting professor. Meaning all the fancy cars, and clothes. Not to mention attending the fancy college her mom works. But, none of this makes LP happy.

All she wants is to be able to step out of her introverted ways, and be able to tell jokes, make friends, and just have fun. So she often frequented RP sites so she could be that person, as their was a freedom being behind a computer screen. Not having to worry about anyone seeing your face or knowing who you really are. Nor even caring about who you’re related to. When she was told about YGGDRASIL, and how fun it was by a cyber friend. She knew this was the perfect place to be, to virtually inhabit the bodies of some of her most favorite RP characters. She had fun rping with friends, but never really decided to join any sort of guild. Finding them to be too much of a commitment, she liked being able to bounce around freely. Plus she couldn’t handle other people, and their drama, she’d plenty of her own baggage to deal with.

When her friends all started leaving the game either growing up, workings busy jobs, or having families she grew lonely. However, she enjoyed the gameplay in itself so didn’t give up on the game, instead continuing on alone. Deciding to instead focus on making, and leveling up a character that fit the personality she had. Unfortunately however, her jokes had turned more into shenanigans, as she’d grown desperate to get people to laugh with her, only instead for them to laugh at her.

It didn’t help her case that she’d decided to take up Joker, seeing as most found it to be a just a novelty class. Even despite its many uses in PvE, and even in an occasional PvP matches. Though they did still party with her due to her other four jobs as mage, monk, rogue, and beastmaster. Finding it to be a formidable combination. As a hobby she liked discovering weird secret paths, and other such tucked away secrets. Some even sharing their secrets she’d yet to discover as many found her easy to talk to after getting past her odd personality. As she was truly soft, caring, and warm like a mother’s hug and a warm drink. Figuring their secret places safe since she’d no friends for whom to share these secrets with.

LP frequented a YGGDRASIL help guide run by a guy named Toasty. She saw how well done his help pages were, and the best part was that the guild he ran was effectively a business. Figuring it’d be a good change of pace she applied to join their guild. Even offering up a secret or two they’d not found, due to either none of them having a high enough agility stat; or just not knowing about it. LP frequented a YGGDRASIL help guide run by a guy named Toasty. She saw how well done his help pages were, and the best part was that the guild he ran was effectively a business. Figuring it’d be a good change of pace she applied to join their guild. Even offering up a secret or two they’d not found, due to either none of them having a high enough agility stat; or just not knowing about it. When she got in she helped to set-up pages or even help tours. Actually taking people to the secret areas, and showing them personally how to get to them. She had fun meeting new people that actually seemed happy to see her. Plus, she made real true friends that stuck around, and enjoyed her company. She didn’t need to try so hard to be liked, and get people to laugh. She was finally happy as she’d found a real home to be herself, and not be judged.

When LadyP discovered they were going to shut down the YGGDRASIL servers her heart sunk into her gut. Was this god’s divine punishment for enjoying the suffering of others? Or was it just as simple as not earning enough money to keep the servers running? Was she doomed to be an introvert forever? Either way LadyP decided a party was in order to celebrate how awesome their years in YGGDRASIL was. As she didn’t enjoy drinking too much, she just watched everyone else get snookered. Laughing at their drunken behavior or their lousy acting. As the last minutes ticked away something miraculous happened. They were teleported into the actual game itself! This terrified LP as she was worried she’d never see her mother again.

Other:
~ LadyP is obsessed with candies, and sweets so much so she’ll do anything to get her hands on some. Especially if someone else has it as she finds it even tastier when stolen.
~ Hangs out outside most of the time. She likes the quiet, and serene feeling she gets just watching the clouds float by.

Other:
~ Tasty is obsessed with candies, and sweets so much so she’ll do anything to get her hands on some. Especially if someone else has it as she finds it even tastier when stolen.
~ Hangs out outside most of the time. She likes the quiet, and serene feeling she gets just watching the clouds float by.

@Gilgex

Haven't looked at the full profile yet but Over-Rank Magic is less like that and more like this:



Basically, if someone uses Over-Rank Magic, you are gonna fucking know it xD

@Turboshitter So what about my char? He's good?

@RedDusk

Yup, go ahead!

Mystery World // Misery World~ (Overlord RP) [High casual/Low advanced]

@Turboshitter Have we decided on a guild name yet? I'd like to know it for my bio.

@Gilgex

I believe we settled on "the Æsir Syndicate". I've also taken some proposed names into account and decided the guild's fort/base of operations shall henceforth be called the Ragnavault!

@Turboshitter
SO I after reviewing all the points you made, I did some more edits on my char sheet and hopefully this time it shall be ready for use! I orignally planned to make her human, but in the end decided against it :3 WE shall have a robot looking angel in disguise! I decided against the fetus idea... I have hard time seeing a fetus wielding weapons or wearing armors xD

Silva

Name(s): Silva Ciel Fae

Illusion

Silva’s real appearance is that of the typical mechanical looking angels that are seen across YGGDRASIL. With the exception that her real size isn’t much different that that of her illusion.

Gender: Female

Height: 1,75 m

Race: Angel

Title: Mistress of Illusions

Job:

• Sorcerer 15
• Illusionist 15
• Illusion master 10
• Fata Morgana(The most powerful illusion user class) 5
• others 40

Residence:

• For all player characters this should be the guild base. For NPCs be specific about which area.

Alignment: Neutral

Sense of Justice: 100

Racial level:

• Angel 15

Job level: 85

Stats:

• HP:65
• MP:95
• PHY. ATK:55
• PHY. DEF:60
• AGILITY:70
• MAG. ATK:80
• MAG. DEF:90
• RESIST:75
• SPECIAL:70

Spells:

• Conjure water
• Conjure food
• [Message]
• Greater area scan (scan the immediate area for anything invisible or of magical nature)
• Magic observation block( Blocks any magic observation spells around the user.)
• Greater Teleportation block.( Makes enemies around the caster to not be able to teleport away)
• Fireball
• Fire pillar(creates a 2 meters wide pillar of fire.)
• Lesser magic shield
• Greater magic shield
• Gate
• Fly
• All magic item appraisal
• Lightning
• Maximize Magic
• Human self( Among the upper tier of illusion magic, it makes the user appear completely human, presence, voice and all. Additionally sensory perceptions of those around it are shifted so even if they touch the target, they still believe they’ve felt touching a human)
• Mimic appearance(the user can throw an illusion around himself to mimic the appearance of another)
• Hide self(illusion magic that renders the user invisible)
• Greater Full Potential
• Shadow field(causes an area to be consumed by darkness)
• Dominion of darkness(covers an area with illusion of darkness that clouds senses and masks presences)
• Perfect warrior
• Flying
• Greater Illusion mastery
• Confuse mind
• Cloud senses
• Mask presence(hides the presence of the user or a target)
• Greater mirror image (creates 4 illusions of the user, virtually impossible to distinguish from the real one, except the fact their magic and physical attacks do no damage.)
• Illusion forge: demonic guard(creates what appears to be a big hulking demonic servant to protect the caster. Has no attack, but can take quite a few blows before the illusion really vanishes)
• Wall of damnation( conjures an illusion of a huge 'living' wall, so grotesque and terrifying that it instills fear into almost anything that sees it.)
• Wall of eternity(Illusion magic of highest degree, this wall stands in it's place altering the minds and presence of everyone within this illusion. This who are caught in it cannot move, advance or attack forwards for everything they see is a huge wall. Their minds refuse to act against it.
• True fear(Shows the target’s greatest fears to them.)
• Coveted illusion!(Shows the target’s most desired thing in the entire world.)
• Wide area illusion(allows the user to creates giant illusions, be it to hide something like a castle or to make it appear like a castle exists somewhere.)
• Mind devouring beast(a single target illusion attack that causes the target to see a grotesque beast approaching them. When this illusion attacks it's target, the target takes damage as if he was struck by actual physical object. This illusion is so strong it causes the body to react as if it was real. Weaker the victim, stronger the damage and the speed before the damage is dealt.)
• Reality burst(Illusion magic that sends everyone caught within it into a trance like state, caught into a maddening spiral of destruction withing their minds while their bodies stand still)
• Legions of Albion(Creates an illusionary army that can do actual harm to those struck by it. Still those are illusions so soldiers are rather fragile and each illusion of a soldier vanishes after a hit or two)
• Reality of carnage(An area illusion so strong that it temporary corrodes reality. While the illusion is in effect nightmarish beasts appear, devouring everything in their paths, damage dealt by the beasts is completely real)

Skills:

• Over-Rank Magic: Avalon’s Veil( One of the most powerful defensive spells in existence. It has incredibly long cast and recharge time, but once unleashed it can block even the strongest magic attacks until it fades away. )

Equipment:

• Crown of Illusions – legedary item.(lowers the mana cost for every illusion magic)
• Robes of the Fae – divine item.(magical robes that warp the user's status, making it impossible to read unless special measures are taken first)
• Veil of Avalon – divine item.( a small soft piece of cloth that appears to be weaved by strands of moonlight. Once per month it can be used to cast an Over-Rank barrier spell )
• Staff of serenity – legendary item. (a magical staff that allows the user to cast serenity spell across his allies, curing metal status afflictions)
• Mark of Du Lac – minor item ( a small steel ring with a single word engraved on it ‘Lac’, summons a level 20 knight.)
• Sword of the lake – Medium item( an elegant and sturdy weapon, that always shines as if it was just pulled out of water. It does water damage on top of the physical one. A rather weak for end game players, but Silva’s master had taken a liking to it and always kept it.)
• Staff of Emrys – Medium item(a simple looking wooden staff, that boosts magic power somewhat.)

Bio: >list>
Before coming to the New World, Silva was just a simple NPC.

Personality: Silva is a rather eccentric for an angel. For a member of beings who are supposed to be the god's messengers, kind and caring, she is rather indifferent about those outside the guild. She still has some degree of a moral compass, but if it's for the guild, she will deal with anyone she must. She will not really help a stranger in need out of the blue without reason, but at the same time she will not act with prejudice towards anyone.
Still for those who are part of the guild, she is caring and friendly. One of her most favorite thing is to poke fun of people and she often does that to anyone she can. It's a trait she gotten from her creator and a thing she loves about herself. Strangely enough Silva does have hobbies, she enjoys napping and eating and writing poetry(despite how bad she is at it). She seems to dislike human kings and emperors, a thing that was programmed by her creator.

Other: Silva's creator was a female player named 'Morrigan Fair Quin'. She was a human spellcaster that also specialized into Illusion magic. Morrigan was among the first members of the guild, but sadly didn't live enough to see the end of YGGDRASIL. She was attacked while walking home after work one night. It was ruled as an attempted robbery gone wrong. She was stabbed with a knife and taken to a hospital. She didn't make it past that night. Her best friend who also played YGGDRASIL though in another guild, was the one to inform her guildmates about her fate.

@rivaan

Accepted! Into the character tab she goes!

Mystery World // Misery World~ (Overlord RP) [High casual/Low advanced]

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Shalltear gets smashed by anyone above Ainz's tier, which is mediocre>medium tier, so I reckon it won't be the most powerful. In addition, we have no idea how extensively customized Gargantua was because it was just a golem that was sent that was upgraded or molded into what the Guild would want it to be. Considering how much power AOG had in terms of equipment and data, it wouldn't be a surprise to consider Gargantua an exception among guild golems.

Perhaps I could go with a weaker variant?

@Hinsek

Actually, Ainz is mid-upper tier among YGGDRASIL players at least. He'd be higher if his build wasn't so poorly optimized. Saying she gets destroyed by anyone stronger than Ainz is kind of a given since most people get smashed by guys stronger than Ainz.

And sure that sounds like a good compromise.

Mystery World // Misery World~ (Overlord RP) [High casual/Low advanced]

Uh, the power level for a guild golem seems to be absurdly high, with AOG's Gargantua being as strong, if not stronger, than Shalltear.
Is that still okay?

@Hinsek

That's... stupidly high, considering Peroroncino basically minmaxed and gamed the system as hard as he could to make Shalltear as strong as she was.

I'm gonna go with no if that's canonically how powerful he is. Sorry.

Mystery World // Misery World~ (Overlord RP) [High casual/Low advanced]

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Cool stuff. Should I post the CS in the character section? What were the small issues that you had?

Incidentally, regarding Nostromo's created NPCS, I plan on making a ghost librarian to manage his Librarium, and she will probably be about a level 40 or 50 character. The other would be something like a Werewolf manservant/bodyguard, similar to Sebas Tien. This character would probably be level 100. If anyone was interested in playing this, I'm open to collaboration.

@Dead Cruiser

Nah, it was nothing. Go ahead and post him in the character tab.

W.I.P

Name(s):

• _______ - (Left as blank)
• Sahar

Gender:

• Male

Height:

• 210 cm

Race:

• Asura, a race that is more of a myth than reality as those who are seen as Asura are spread far and wide, having never seen two at the same place before or even one in public. Rumors about this race are even scarce as little to no information is known about them except for their tremendous amount of strength rivaling and even some say defeating the trolls and their unique 3 pairs of arms they possess. Known to philosophical pacifists capable of great feats with their spirituality but are very capable combatants when the situation calls for it. Those who undergo the Asura race are restricted to martial arts and hand-to-hand combat limiting on their usefulness and coverage but gain a tremendous skill boosts towards unarmed melee skill.

Title:

• Atlas, Bearer of the World
• The Archetype of Strength

Job:

• Entity of Outer Strength: A specialized class for the Asura race that rewards those who followed their spiritual training along with their conditioning, it combines a calm and focused mind with the conditioned body to preform feats of unbelievable strength. They are the strongest race and class in the game who are second to none in terms of pure stats and can easily overwhelm the defenses of other with their devastating attacks. However the majority of their skills all possess necessarily a long cool down to rest both the mind and body for preforming such a daunting feat.
• Avatar of Inner Peace: Another specialized class that rewards Asura character who undergo spiritual training and combine it with conditioning, it focuses of the character's defenses. Mastering the class will allow the character to enter a state of peace of mind by meditating, which exchanges all of their physical attack stat and covert it into magical attack and defense. While in this mode, all melee attacks are disable and instead gains a variety of spells to use in this mode. While in this state of calm, all mental debuffs are ineffective on the character and all damage is reduced by 20%. However to maintain this state, mana is drained every time they are hit along with every second passing until they are drained.
• Black Belt: The upgraded version of martial artist, it is a class devoted on using various forms of martial arts. Being proficient and knowing various school such as karate, judo and tae-kwon-do but not limited to them as there are many others. The class allows the body to move fluidly and use the least amount of wasted action and energy to preform melee moves, without being clumsy. It is usually a class requiring combos in order to successfully pull off, but when they happen, the results can debuff the victim depending on what finisher is used. Since the various forms of martial arts, this class can be leveled up to level 30.

Residence:

• For all player characters this should be the guild base. For NPCs be specific about which area.

Alignment:

• Neutral Good

Sense of Justice:

• 200

Racial level:

• Realized (15)
• Awaken (10)
• Materialized (10)
• Avatar (5)

Job level:

• Entity of Outer Strength: (5)
• Avatar of Inner Peace: (5)
• Black Belt: (30)
• Martial Artist: (15)

Stats:

(670) <-- Trying to find something to nerf

• HP: 150
• MP: 20
• PHY. ATK: 130
• PHY. DEF: 90
• AGILITY: 110
• MAG. ATK: 10
• MAG. DEF: 80
• RESIST: 60
• SPECIAL: 20

Spells:

• FIHAHBALL!!! - DEAL OVER 9000 FIRE DMG, TOO STRONGK

Skills:

• The realm of warriors, and their magic equivalent. Similar to the Martial Arts of the New World but not quite, Skills are basically spells or techniques that warriors can use a limited number of times per day. Again, not many of these have been mentioned in canon, so you're free to use your imaginations.

Equipment:

• List all your worn and equipped items along with their class (Divine, World etc.). For simplicity's sake, this includes weapons. Feel free to be creative! Remember, not much has been established in canon.

Bio:

• What was your character’s story before coming to the New World? What are they like as a person?

Other:

• Other miscellaneous stuff and/or gags.

Dis is hard, I still have a lot of stuff to do ~^~

[edit- I justed deleted all my skills, I am gonna go cry now]

@ArtifactCreator

Asura is actually a job, not a race (Cocytus has it!). And what do I keep telling people about yellow being only for human races?! >.<

Mystery World // Misery World~ (Overlord RP) [High casual/Low advanced]

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"Gargantua is not a custom NPC, but a bonus given from the Game Administration. The guild members named it as one of the floor guardians, yet it usually settles at the bottom of the lake."
According to the wiki, I was too lazy to go back to volume 3 or whatever that mentioned this.

@Hinsek

Oh hey, you're right. Hmmmm...

#surewynaut

Mystery World // Misery World~ (Overlord RP) [High casual/Low advanced]

So I clicked on this thread yesterday, went through it and was like, "whoa that's a lot of stuff." My curiosity got the better of me however, and I watched the anime and I have to say, I really enjoyed it, so i'm starting to read the light novels as well.

I would like to join, if that's alright? I'd actually want to be an NPC, loyal to the supreme beings, of course. I'll say this in advance, if someone wants to "create me" then that's cool, if not, I think I can come up with something.

@Lord Zee

Sure, go ahead.

Can I apply as the guild's self defense golem that is given to any established guild?

@Hinsek

I'm not sure that's a thing.

Mystery World // Misery World~ (Overlord RP) [High casual/Low advanced]

HEAR YE, HEAR YE. I PRESENT TO YOU MY JUDGMENT!

@urukhai Okay, a few things.

1.) Heteromorphic races can't have 100 job level, you have to subtract your racial level from your allotted 100. So it should be 25+ racial level and 75 job level.

2.) It seems like you should have to put more points into Doppelganger than Greater Doppelganger since the latter requires the former to unlock. I'd advise switching it to 15 levels in Doppelganger and 10 in Greater Doppelganger, since that's rarer.

3.) A lot of his spells seem more like skills, tbh. Might wanna move a few of them around into the skills section, like "Ignore me", "Dancer's Grace" and "Shadow Knife". Also Heart Attack is "Grasp Heart".

Other than that just finish the sections you haven't filled out yet. It's kinda hard for me to judge a character without equipment or a bio :P

@rivaan

1.) Even disguised, an angel should still have some racial level. Also, if you removed the illusion, would she look like Victim or the more mechanical angels the Sunlight Scripture summoned?

2.) Spells look good, but I'd appreciate you being a little more detailed with her combat magic and general spells.

3.) Why so many demonic/unholy sounding illusions? Seems kinda weird for an angel xD

4.) NPCs can't use Over-Rank Magic (or at least the Guardians couldn't)

5.) Veil of Avalon seems like a good item to allow an NPC to cast Over-Rank Magic. 10th is too weak for a level 100 NPC, since she should be able to cast that rank of magic on her own. This way you can keep Over-Rank Magic even though your character is an NPC while still limiting its use.

@RedDusk

1.) Even though he was human before, those traits would make the Revenant an Undead race, which is heteromorphic.

2.) Liking the berserker vibes here, but soul-stealing or feasting whatever is represented by stealing exp in YGGDRASIL, so his race probably just feeds off of blood or life force in general, not souls.

3.) You should probably have a few levels in "Others" for your racial levels, just so you don't have so many extra points in "Other" jobs xD

4.) Stats can't go beyond 100, they just become "Exceeds limit" like Ainz's MP

5.) Summon Portal is just "Gate"

6.) Explain what kind of mount is summoned. Just one word telling me what it is will do, like "Summon: Unicorn" or something like that.

7.) Blood Frenzy is already the name of a True Vampire skill/ability. Please change it.

8.) I love how he renamed the sword "GG". His backstory in general is great. He'll make a great addition to the team xD

@Dead Cruiser Thank you for reminding me that Relic and Legacy Class items are a thing.

Guys? Relic and Legacy Class items are a thing. Adjust the relative rarity of your items accordingly.

Besides that and a few minor quibbles I'll only bring up if they ever become relevant, Nostromo looks great. Amazing, really. You've made a profile here that equals or even surpasses the sheer obsessive attention to detail I put into mine xD

I look forward to RPing with dear Nostromo.