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3 yrs ago
Current I think watching fight scenes can help in general terms with writing combat, since it can give you an idea of flow and choreography.
3 yrs ago
At least if you're writing something you know, with knights.
3 yrs ago
I mean, depends on what you're writing, and the tone and theme of what you're writing. Trained armored knights were legitimately monstrous on the battlefield, so looking up how they fought helps.
4 yrs ago
As much as there's a lot of reasons twitter sucks, I genuinely don't want to see it die for the sake of all the artists who now rely on it. Hoping the shithead stops trying to directly administrate.
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4 yrs ago
roleplayerguild.com/posts/5… If anyone's up for fighting some kaiju, why not try out my new RP, Godzilla: YATAGARUSU?

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Miyu's Not Happy With Mazes


After some bright lights an walking, they were... at another corridor. Just like the last one. Miyu folded her arms. Jeez, it was like someone was just copy-pasting these places. The tiny blonde frowned deeply. It was probably deliberate to avoid anyone getting too far too easily, wasn't it? Well, the tiny mage was having none of that. Mazes just back her annoyed, after all, but before now she didn't have a rather unique tool for dealing with them.

Miyu grinned, and raised one hand towards the air, pointing up at the sky. There was a faint hum, as a reddish light gathered around her. Motes of light shot up in a circle from around the girl, as a magic circle spread from the tip of her finger, beneath a growing ball of light. It was time to see just how durable these walls were, wasn't it? It was unlikely she'd have to use this spell against anything else inside a dungeon. For a while, at least. The humming sound grew steadily louder, as the orb grew bigger and bigger... and she thrust her hand down and forward.

"Spark Rise Vermilioooooooon!"

There was a blast of noise and light as the orb shot forward, erupting in a beam towards a nearby wall.
Torako seemed mostly oblivious to the conversation. Instead, she was trooping onward, eyes carrying over every little aspect of the terrain as she hummed to herself. It was an old Rikukoan folk song, about a little firefly and a dragon. The firefly glowed her brightest to outshine the dragon's resplendence, but exhausted herself in the process. The dragon, acknowledging the firefly's efforts, breathed life into her and she became the brightest star in the sky. To this day, she glows in the sky. At least, according to the song. It was all about trying your hardest, no-matter who you were. Torako liked it for that reason, and that's why she was humming it as she walked along. However, her focus was on something else.

The base was probably not out in the open... so they'd need to check every nook and cranny, wouldn't they? Torako strode ahead of the others and began to tap any rocks that looked slightly out of place, and big enough that they could be hiding something. Though really, it would probably be hidden further up, rather then down here...

"... Hmm... nope, none of these rocks! I don't think, at least..."
AkaRocket is there too, I just need to work out a followup to the villain who was there kind of vanishing. ^^;
Mimori's Still Ticked


Where that comment about a cop had come from, Mimori had no idea. It was true, but how would anyone guess that here? Well, it's not like she had any problem. She had nothing but pride in her profession before coming here. However, the wings took her off-guard, but she refused to let go regardless. Unfortunately, her grip slipped, and she stumbled back, catching herself. One hand flew to her sword. She wouldn't use it, but she could threaten the suspect into stopping and allowing herself to be apprehended. However, the winged woman had already taken off and ascended into the air before she could stop her.

"... Damn it," Mimori said to herself, narrowing her eyes. It wasn't as if taste in genders mattered to her, but coming up out of no where and sexually harrassing someone absolutely did.

She turned to face Ranca.

"Are you alright?"




Miyu Boldy Goes Forth


Miyu was a little surprised when the light suddenly engulfed them, letting out a small squeak of shock and shutting her eyes quickly... until they suddenly appeared in an angular room. Miyu opened her eyes when she realized the light had faded, and shook her head. Well... this was... different. It looked like there were three passageways... one with a sad face, one with a neutral face, and one with a super-creepy happy face. Miyu blinked. Well it was pretty obvious they had to pick one...

... Happy face seemed creepy. Really creepy. That could be misdirection, but Miyu doubted it... the sad face could be misdirection as well, but it looked kind of foreboding. What would make them sad down there? As a result, only one face looked appropriate.

The middle ground!

With a confident smile, the tiny blonde strode forward, towards the pokerface corridor as she headed right through.

"Here!"
@Lunar: It's Ramiel's twin, Clarence! ... iel!
... -gasp-

Of course!
@Medjedovic: Blood type confirmed blue! It's an angel!
Mimori is not Happy


Of course, there wasn't much more that could be done. Mimori had hardly forgotten her police training simply because she had died and revived in a new world, and those skills almost instantly surfaced after she saw Ranca's attacker knocked backwards from the impact. As she arose and leaned forward, appearing to attempt to flirt in spite of how strongly she had been rebuffed, Mimori sprang into action. Doing this to some stranger you'd never met before...! In a flash, she had sprang behind the suspect, and pushed forward to force the girl down to the ground. Such an action would be... severely awkward and inappropriate for public action if it had been wanted, but it was obviously thoroughly unwanted here.

The former police officer grasped at the girl's hands to force them behind her after she was pushed to the ground, and hold them together behind her back as quickly as possible. Restraining her was the most important thing here, and Mimori found herself wishing that she had handcuffs, or rope, or anything she could use to stop the suspect's hands from moving about.

Regardless, she did her best.

"You're under arr-" Mimori paused for a moment, realizing she did not have the authority to say that, or to label the girl as a 'suspect' "... I'm taking you to the guards."




Miyu's Really Eager for Some Candy Already


"... Oh, look, there's another candy store we haven't been able to go in... and another... and another..."

They all looked fantastic, with all kinds of sweets that Miyu had never seen before. Therefore, she wanted all of them. Every single one. So what better way to ensure that they didn't miss a single shop then to point out every single one they passed by on their way to the dungeon? It was only natural, wasn't it? Of course it was. And of course, the pointed look she made to Takeyoshi every time she mentioned one was also totally necessary. After all, it wasn't as if he was the one who had stopped her from getting any candy... oh wait, it was. Even though he totally owed her candy. Miyu wasn't planning on going candiless, or letting that fact go until she got her candy. In fact, with each candiless day that passed, interest built. By now, Takeyoshi owed her several times more candy then he would have otherwise.

"... Today, it's grown by fifty percent~" she added, to clarify this fact. Like she had been every single day. Praise and candy were what she wanted. She'd gotten praise, so she just needed the candy. "You know, you're not much of a tengu~ Aren't you either supposed to have a big red nose, or be a girl who runs a newspaper?"

Miyu cocked her head to the side, leaning forward as she followed along behind the tengu boy, bearing a catlike smile on her lips as she did. Frankly, being either of those things might have made Takeyoshi more exciting. If he wasn't going to get her candy sometime soon, at least. Hmph.

"Fufu, it's..."

She trailed off for a moment as she realized just how enormous the tower was.

"... Well, there's not going to be any shortage of things to sell in there!" Miyu declared, stepping forward, before realizing that that Takeyoshi asked her about a light source.

"... Fufufu~" she chuckled, "Sure~ If you want it to explode! ... I'd want it to explode~"
I didn't like how the character was presented(like I said, I am okay with pervert characters and like plenty of them but I've listed my grievances) but that's fair.

I will say if that action remains there's no real chance of of the character being in the party as it stands.
You're ignoring how I said there's perverted characters I like, and how I proposed alternate routes that would still let her be a perverted character.

You made her nothing but a pervert. There's no other aspects to her character mentioned at all. Her first action in the entire RP is "molest stranger".

Honestly, if you did stay in the RP, I'd like to see the post blanked and the character completely rewritten to be more the a flat pervert.

Frankly it's in the same vein as a flat villain is just evil for the sake of evil and has no other character traits.
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