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3 yrs ago
Current I think watching fight scenes can help in general terms with writing combat, since it can give you an idea of flow and choreography.
3 yrs ago
At least if you're writing something you know, with knights.
3 yrs ago
I mean, depends on what you're writing, and the tone and theme of what you're writing. Trained armored knights were legitimately monstrous on the battlefield, so looking up how they fought helps.
4 yrs ago
As much as there's a lot of reasons twitter sucks, I genuinely don't want to see it die for the sake of all the artists who now rely on it. Hoping the shithead stops trying to directly administrate.
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4 yrs ago
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Well, I mean, generally speaking they have to be knights who will carry out justice, desire to defend the weak, defend Thaln, that kind of stuff. There's an oath involved and all, after all.

You have an excuse for him defending the weak, yes, and it's not like you have to edit, I was just kind of wondering.
@KuramaaaZ: I figured, but it's just that I'm surprised he'd join the Iron Rose Knights when it's a big part of what they are, defending the weak.
You still need to explain some of this stuff. That's what I said.
Maybe make him a little less hateful of people weaker then him? Focus more on him hating people who go after those weaker then themselves?
@Raineh Daze: Accepted.
@KuramaaaZ: While I don't see anything too objectionable about the bio, I will say that the entire order is basically about defending those who can't defend themselves. Well, and in general defending Thaln itself, but defending the weak is a big element. You do kind of address that, but just saying.
I'll admit that part's not as fleshed out yet.
Mindless undead tend to stick to one place without a guiding intelligence making them go elsewhere. Sapient undead can go anywhere barring one being revived in some way that forces them to stay in a specific place.
Nothing urgent, just if there's anything in particular you want to know, really.

That goes for everyone, any possible questions you might have, feel free to ask.
You didn't mention that in the backstory section. ^^; I guess I'm just wondering how he go from the tropics to Thaln and how he heard about the Iron Rose Knights.
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