WhiteAngel25

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@Silly@Lyla Great openers! Sorry that I haven’t been able to comment that recently. I’m in the process of building a chicken coop for my feathered babies and it has been a process. lol

@tadcfnaf You can post whenever you’re ready! :)

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@TruckKun

Notes

If he is a full demigod of Hades, he’s going to need to have more than just ‘Controlling Shadows’ for Divine Gifts and a description with them. He’s going to need at least two more.

And considering he’s the descendant of the god of the dead, he’d probably be a threat level Red or Black depending on what his other gifts are.

Also, if a lighting strike hit the bottom floor of an apartment building and set it on fire, I can guarantee that the DDA knows of his existence. However, they may not know of what extent his lineage is. His age for his abilities surfacing should be in the 11+ age range. 8 is too young, otherwise the government would have captured him by now.

Also, what’s the wolf’s name? And give a little description of how that came to be besides just released him from a trap. Same with the rivals. The proprietors need at least names. And the DDA would be a rival, not necessarily the police because the DDA are the ones who handle god descended incidents.

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@TruckKun It is a good start but if you could flesh it out more that would great!

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@Silly@Lyla It is basically the one in the CS. If you just want to reference it, the flashback is the way to go. If you’re Awakeniv is happening in the present, then you would write it happening as such. If that makes sense.

We will be meeting at a safe house first. The academy is not just known to the newly Awakened.

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@Lyla Love it! I am probably just going to add Lyssa’s pov to a brand new post.

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@tadcfnaf If you could flesh out the Awakening part a bit more with detail that would be great. Being a demigod, he would be powerful but I don’t know if it would be enough to bring his dad back to life. Many demigods have to go down to the Underworld to retrieve loved ones. Perhaps his dad is comatose? That would give him reason to try and find a way to bring him back?

Also, it would have been a nice to place it here to be approved before the CS. Just as a courtesy since you also didn’t PM me about him. But it’s okay.

But overall, I like Joesph’s concept! An interesting twist on having him heal with Apollo. That’s usually a Hermes thing. I could see using sunlight as a healing factor though. :)

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@Silly I mean you’re not wrong. 😂 How many has Hera been secretly killing off though? 🤷🏻‍♀️

@Lyla That sounds great!

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@Lyla Yes, it can either be present day or a flashback. But it should be in the first post. :)

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@Silly Just reading the CS, I wouldn’t know who her parentage is.

Also, the opening post is up! :)