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This is most certainly going to be a thing. I'm in the midst of finals right now, which is kicking me in the face.


Oof. Good luck. I can wait till you're complete, finals are more important.
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I'd like to register my interest too, and I'll start working on a CS ASAP if there's no issue with that.
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Submitted for your Review...

During the construction of this Character Sheet, I made the inaccurate assumption that Major Command and Sub Major Commands within the US Army would remain organized in the early 22nd century as they are in the early 21st Century. I say inaccurate because the US Army changes its organizational structure more frequently than once every 100 years. As a notice of validity, the author of this character sheet spent 21 years in the US Army retiring 14 years ago as an Infantry Officer. If I didn't know something, I researched it.
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@AnimaJust wondering if this is till a thing?
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Sadly I'm afraid that it might not be. It's been over a week since we last heard from Anima.
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Finals at Uni. :3
Poor Ani be busy. XD
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Psst, @Anima - I'm 100% sure we've written together in the past for a game based in the world of this game's namesake... Haha, anyway, popping in to drop my interest on this shindig! If there's confirmation that this will still be a thing, I'll definitely draw up a CS and shoot it over to ya.
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I'm sorry I've been gone for so long folks. Semester is done, so expect to see me be much more active and such.

@Savage Your character is splendid. I love the backstory you created for him and the creative freedom you used. CPT is such a wonderful concept. If you have any other ideas, please lay them on me.

I have nothing to complain about for you character so far. Though I didn't list it explicitly, third person is golden for IC. First person definitely works for your backstory however.

@vietmyke Your character seems to be recycled from the original LoU. I have nothing to comment. Please see yourself out the door. (Joke joke! I need a demolition nut!)

@Zorogami From my first read, I'm fine with what you have so far for your character. Can you expand upon Lennert's time from joining the service to being transferred to STG? There has to be a stand out factor to have someone be selected for STG. Think of it like this. The normal service carries out perimeter and various traditional duties. The STG ventures out for longer periods of time to disrupt, recon, or establish a beach head for normal military personnel. Both complement each other but perform very different tasks. One requires more ability however.

Also, is it safe to assume Lennert's family is dead? If so, please specify.

If you want clarification or want ideas and such, just let me know!

@Gunther The amount of research and time you put into making your character really shows! I loved what I've read so far. Truly. I'll have to do a re-read given that extensive backstory for further comments from me.

For your character focus, he'll mainly be operating with the heavy weapons capabilities. Air support is very limited with respect to STG operations. I'm still working on a STG info bracket. Anyway, while air support is available sometimes, STG are expected to perform autonomously except when they rendezvous with friendlies, are awaiting exfiltration, or are in UGC air capable spaces.

Just a heads up. When I finish the STG bracket, I think that'll help you and everyone further understand the STG purpose and what they do.

Looks good so far though!


To those I have yet to get to, I'll respond later tonight. I have to jump ship for right now. I'm hoping to have the roster out by this weekend and kick this off by Sunday or Monday. Please don't post your character to the character tab until I or Zhaliora give you the go ahead.

Thanks for being super patient. I love everything I've read so far :)!
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@Anima Not true! The only things that have remained the same is the picture and presence of bombs and carbine. Most of the background and personality have been written from the ground up. D:
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@Anima Not true! The only things that have remained the same is the picture and presence of bombs and carbine. Most of the background and personality have been written from the ground up. D:


... This is why relying on old memories and assuming do not make a savvy combination. My bad!

Expect feedback later tonight as well then.
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Psst, @Anima - I'm 100% sure we've written together in the past for a game based in the world of this game's namesake... Haha, anyway, popping in to drop my interest on this shindig! If there's confirmation that this will still be a thing, I'll definitely draw up a CS and shoot it over to ya.


I remember you dear! Same name but different experience altogether. Send me your CS whenever you'd like!
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@Anima Well thank you very much! And yes I agree third person is the only way to go for IC...it makes everything far less confusing. However I wanted to try something different for the CS. I'm glad it worked out!
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@AnimaThanks a lot for the feedback. Will modify my CS according to it, expect an update soon

EDIT: Here is my modified CS. The parts that have been added/changed are in red for easier reading.



I hope this is ok, let me know if you need more
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I'd like to register my interest too, and I'll start working on a CS ASAP if there's no issue with that.


My apologies! I didn't see your voice of interest, so I rudely ignored you. Whenever your CS is done, just post it here.

@Zorogami The changes look good to me. Go ahead and post on the character tab.

@vietmyke Myke, go ahead and post your character on the roster. Like I said, give me some good loving explosions mister!

@corneredbliss@Zorogami@Savage@vietmyke@Zhaliora@Gunther@The Scotsman@Nallore@Meiyuki

To everyone. I would like to start this next Monday. I'm revising the policy a bit concerning number of characters. I'm going to deny further potential interest after this post.

Namely, those who voiced interest already are free to continue making their character sheet. Those who ask to make one post this post will not be consider or placed on a waitlist if one of you should choose to opt out.

Secondly, I'm going to revise the rules a bit. Same ones are still there. Just adding stuff for clarity as the story moves on and such.

Thirdly, I would like to post a starter next Monday. Please have CSes finished prior to this coming Monday.

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That's it for now!

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I'm peeking in to say that I'm gonna go ahead and give up my spot, I've already been accepted into another game. Apologies, and best of luck to you all!
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@corneredbliss No problem at all. Thanks for the heads up!
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Zorogami Sorry for disappearing!

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@AnimaSorry it took me a bit longer to post Webbs in the Character section, the Guild has been messing up a lot lately.
Looking forward to get this started!
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Hey all.

Just an update. I'll have to push back the start date to later today (it's 00:40 on my end). Hang in there. We'll have this puppy up and running soon.
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Ani sent me a msg saying that she's feeling really bad. So release is pushed back again.
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