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manapool1 A wanderer who is actually lost

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@Fjanz see, there you go. Now limit his range
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ok
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I am certainly interested, will post character later
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Awesome. I'm looking forward to roleplaying with you all. There's a nice variety in characters so far~.
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@Rex Double accepted!
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Character posted!
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I know I haven't made my presence known at all. But I've invested my time into creating this character. Hopefully you like him.

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@Renny@Azure Flame@Wasted Ink@Fjanz

For Renny's character, I am unsure if it seems alright. What do you all think?
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Personally, I think the quirk is OP, even if it's 'flaw' seems balanced, it doesn't happen until hours later, and doesn't effect the quirk during use, he even says it's not bound by physical restrictions. Basically, he can change gravity within 300 ft however he wishes, with pretty much no limitations, with the only downside being it happens to him later on at midnight. To me, everything about it screams OP, because as an example, we could have like the end of Season 1, where villains have attacked the school. Well, he can simply put a stop to it by increasing gravity for all the villains in a 300 ft radius, stopping them in their tracks, while everyone else cuffs them and takes them away, with the only downside being that that night, he has increased gravity pinning him down for a bit.
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I completely agree. I feel the lack of know limit and the fact that it only effects him at midnight. If you are dead set on keeping it a time based thing then maybe he has a 10 min timer before the gravity backlash. Or you could have it be like a muscle and get tired after exerting force the time being dictated by how much force or for how long he is applying force. It's a cool quirk but the seemingly limitless power of it seem a tad OP in my opinion.
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@Renny There you have it: Limit the area and amount of time between when it hurts you.
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@manapool1 @LeamonZest89 @Azure Flame

Thanks for reeling me back to reality guys. I often have a vision for my characters that I know is OP but attempt to get away with anyway because well... its the vision. It takes people pointing out the major flaws for me realize just how absurd it all sounded. Anyway, here's the version I had come up with literally seconds after the original in case It got shot down. Let me know what you guys think.

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Certainly seems more balanced to me.
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could I join please I just started the manga
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My power is a joke against his the times recognized simply big cities destroy than he has no area.

@Renny@Azure Flame@Wasted Ink@Fjanz

For Renny's character, I am unsure if it seems alright. What do you all think?


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Oh cool, the IC is up. I'll post sometime soon.
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@RinOkumara Go right ahead big boy
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@manapool1 Good to see ya back. So am I accepted? revised quirk and all
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@Renny Yessir!

Guys I will be a while.
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