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Fixed my CS! Lemme know if I should change anything else
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-How old was she when the family pronounced her a failure and just churned out another kid? That seems like the sort of drastic move you wouldn't do prematurely, especially since she's got good latent talent.

-Also it's worth noting that families really only teach one kid the magecraft to begin with because of how the more people there are who know the magecraft, the weaker it gets. They'd be hesitant to teach two kids magecraft to begin with, let alone to keep teaching the one who isn't the heir anymore. That's why Sakura got pawned off to the Matous.

-Keep in mind that healing grevious wounds and fatal injuries is a pretty big thing; if you're ever trying to heal someone from the verge of death, for instance, expect it to cost quite a lot of jewels.

The main snag is this thing with the family you're wanting to do. Something like her having a sibling she competed with to be the heir would be feasible, but if she lost then she just wouldn't be taught magecraft to begin with, and probably wouldn't even know it existed.

I'd probably say the better way to handle this would be that, instead of saying she got disowned as the heir, say she got disowned as the family's representative for the Grail War. The Tohsakas care about it a lot, after all, and she'd probably have been told about it from a pretty young age. Doesn't want the responsibility, starts screwing up, family decides to hire in outside help, she gets mad, bam. That's probably the cleanest way to thematically do what you want while still making sense for the setting.

As an aside though, the phrase "Expert, knowledgeable and powerful mage" really has no business going anywhere near a Tohsaka at this point in history.


@Breo Looks good. The 24 hour window will be up in case anyone gets a Rider sheet in before then, but otherwise you'll get the slot.


I might as well give it a shot. Will attempt a Master.


Alrighty, let me know if you have any questions!
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Cool. Will move that up.... in a bit more. I'm feeling tired af so Imma take a power nap. Will return to fix that stuff.
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Ah sorry, the wiki hasn't been working well for me so I end up just using the BL posts with the translations, must have missed the Skill. And if you think the skill is well-defined enough then that's good enough for me. I'll shoot you a PM.


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Ah sorry, the wiki hasn't been working well for me so I end up just using the BL posts with the translations, must have missed the Skill. And if you think the skill is well-defined enough then that's good enough for me. I'll shoot you a PM.


Alrighty, Assassin's good to go. Giving the same window as I'm giving for the other classes, of course.

Oh no, please don't use the wiki, never use the wiki. I'd infinitely prefer you use the BL translations than taking stuff from the wiki.

That applies to everyone, for the record. Please use any and all of the following info sources rather than the wiki. If you have specific questions for where you can find other translated materials, just let me know.

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Alrighty everyone! Here's a german master for ya.

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I think I fixed the more blaringly wrong thingies about my character's backstory.... thoughts? Critics? Anything? please
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@GrafRoy Zeppeli Good to go.
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Cool! Thanks for guiding my hand on some of the more complicated stuff~
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Alrighty, so as you all can see on the character list, the only roles for which we don't have people currently making applications are for the Imperial Japanese Army member and one of the Edelfelts. If you'd like to submit for either of those, let me know!
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He done

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I do have an idea for an IJA Master. I had something in mind involving him, Berserker, and possibly a Master of the German Faction.

Basically, my IJA Master could have been in contact with Germany as a spy or some other sort of operative. Either a German faction member could have given him Fafnir's catalyst, or knowingly letting him steal it, with the intention that they will easily beat Fafnir since they have Sigurd in their ranks. IJA Master then gives Berserker to one of the founding families who don't have a sufficient catalyst to summon a Servant.
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If the Edelfeldts pick Rider, then there is a chance of 3 Fafnirs. I hope you all understand the consequences of this.


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I do have an idea for an IJA Master. I had something in mind involving him, Berserker, and possibly a Master of the German Faction.

Basically, my IJA Master could have been in contact with Germany as a spy or some other sort of operative. Either a German faction member could have given him Fafnir's catalyst, or knowingly letting him steal it, with the intention that they will easily beat Fafnir since they have Sigurd in their ranks. IJA Master then gives Berserker to one of the founding families who don't have a sufficient catalyst to summon a Servant.


We actually do have someone currently working on an IJA Master as of now, but you're still free to make one if you want to compete for the slot!

This does also mean that only the second Edelfelt Master is left, so anyone who doesn't have a character on the Japanese side already should feel free to go for that!

We'll be firming up the Servant slots shortly. The only reason I haven't done that yet is because someone expressed interest a while back, but got a bit delayed in making their sheet due to real life, so they're the last person I'm currently waiting on for the Servant side. Once their sheet is done, which should be in the next day or two, I'll be locking the Servants in.
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Alright cool! I actually did have an Edelfelt character in mind from the beginning, although I was waiting for another person to do Twin 1 before I did. I didn't realized that at that point, our slots were already determined. Cool with how things are, now, tho!
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Here is my first attempt! I realize I will probably have to adjust it a lot. I don't often make Masters so this is quite a good experience.
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Magic Circuit quantity to E, quality to EX, Od to a sub-E value (pick a value between 1 and 2, and put it there instead of a rank).

Gloves will need prana to be run through them to activate.

Alchemy ability should be a good bit better than just above the average; any Einzbern with half-decent magecraft ability should be pretty first-rate.

I'm assuming the healing works by speeding up natural healing processes. State if that's not the case.
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@Over Illusion Alright all changes made. I forgot about saying the thing with Prana and Healing sorry about that. Made sure it's explained in there. I was trying to be careful with the alchemy and the Magic Circuit stuff was just a tad confusing but that information helps a lot.
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