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@1Charak2I would like to join if you'll have me. I'm going to be presenting a very unique/odd character. :D

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I'm sorry but this character seems a little too far over the top. Sorry but it is not accepted as it is.
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@1Charak2Being made of hair? O_O Does it gross you out or something?
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@1Charak2Being made of hair? O_O Does it gross you out or something?


Certainly not, its mainly a combination of the logistics of the quirk combined with his characterisation. He simply is over the top in my honest opinion so in his current state he is not accepted.
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@1Charak2What would make it acceptable?
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@1Charak2What would make it acceptable?


Simply giving him a true human body beneath the mass of hair would be a good balancing factor instead of him being entirely made of hair. Likewise his backstory doesn't fit with the established canon of BNH as society has already come to accept even ugly people, so such insults wouldn't have occurred considering his age.

So those two are mainly it.

I really just don't want to accept such a character as is.
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Simply giving him a true human body beneath the mass of hair would be a good balancing factor instead of him being entirely made of hair. Likewise his backstory doesn't fit with the established canon of BNH as society has already come to accept even ugly people, so such insults wouldn't have occurred considering his age.

So those two are mainly it.

I really just don't want to accept such a character.


So you're saying that even if I made these changes you still wouldn't accept it? It would be a waste of time for me to even bother to?

I have two other characters that are pre-made. I will PM them to you and see what your take is on them. I made this one because it was different than the ones I've ever RPed before.

As for bullying, no matter what world you live in, bullying is a social norm. I doubt your role play takes place in the perfect world.
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@Holy Soldier

Notice I made a small edit while you were posting the reply beause I missed two words.

I said 'as is' not forever.
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Hope this CS looks alright, let me know if anything needs changing!

Appearance:


Name: Robin Hara

Superhero Name: (Leave Blank until a certain point in the roleplay)

Age: 16

D.O.B: December 20th

Weight: 130lbs

Height: 5'8

Personality:
Warm, joking and enthusiastic, Robin carries the air of a free spirit and a laid back individual. He's quite prepared to go with the flow in most cases and let the world around him guide him rather than charting his own course, that said, he has a great passion for nature and loves to admire scenery and wildlife. He has an adventurous streak and desire to take in new information, try new things and experience what the world has to offer.

History:

Growing up, Robin was surrounded by the ideals of heroism, he was born in America where his father and mother were working on gadgets and costume commissions for new hero start ups overseas. Every now and then he was allowed to play around with the latest tool that crime fighters might one day be utilising, sitting in and watching his parents tinker away or draft up designs for new outfits and utilities. Robin's family moved around several times while he was growing up, travelling around the world before returning to his mother's homeland of Japan where they eventually settled down when he was around 9 years old. Until then he had grown used to making friends fast and enjoying the time he had with them, knowing that it was likely limited. He learned to live in the moment and appreciate things in the now rather than worrying too much about what was to be and what had been before.

Given his father's quirk of mechanical manipulation and his mother's wind controlling capabilities, it was quite a surprise to find Robin was a mutant-type but it didn't matter too much as the pair were able to support his growth and provide him the freedom and space to learn to control his flight abilities, even providing gadgets like stabilisers and safety bracers while he got the hang of flying. As their only son, the family unit was always close and supportive, and with their constant involvement with hero agencies all over the world there was little doubt in Robin's mind that he wanted to enter the industry for himself. Following this ambition, when the question arose of where he would go to study his parents cashed in a few contacts and were recommended to Chihaiten Academy where a few of their clients had done their training. And with that, young Robin was taking his first steps on the journey to become a hero.


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Would expect more of a harpy then an angel to be a result of an avian mutation but that random inconsequential tidbit aside. I like this guy and his quirk, though may I offer the concept of also include a birds brittle hollow bones in order to allow him to fly properly?
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*Tentative interest*

I'm assuming you guys are still open for business, yeah? If so, I might jump in with a buddy of mine because why not.
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*Tentative interest*

I'm assuming you guys are still open for business, yeah? If so, I might jump in with a buddy of mine because why not.


Yea
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Would expect more of a harpy then an angel to be a result of an avian mutation but that random inconsequential tidbit aside. I like this guy and his quirk, though may I offer the concept of also include a birds brittle hollow bones in order to allow him to fly properly?


I was thinking along similar lines! Wasn't sure what to put for his weight given he's going to be lighter because of it, should I add that into the 'weakness' section of the quirk perhaps to specify?
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I was thinking along similar lines! Wasn't sure what to put for his weight given he's going to be lighter because of it, should I add that into the 'weakness' section of the quirk perhaps to specify?


Yea do so. Though I would say making him more harpy like would actually make him stronger overall and more able to fly properly as those arms wouldn't be in the way- But thats a change you can do optionally.

Otherwise hes good and hes accepted.
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Yea do so. Though I would say making him more harpy like would actually make him stronger overall and more able to fly properly as those arms wouldn't be in the way- But thats a change you can do optionally.

Otherwise hes good and hes accepted.


Tweaked him now, is he good to be moved to the character section?
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tell me if I stroke out

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Whatever you do, don't put them in 3-D.
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Accepted, Nothing bad here.




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Yea you can post him in the char tab if you want now.
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@1Charak2 Hi, remember me? I decided to make an app for this roleplay. Hope it meets standards.


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