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Alrighty, here you go. I'm very interested to get your feedback on him.


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@geminironin Which one from the three? Its not all one gift.

Keen Sight, Keen Insight, and Charismatic (Deceptive) are okay. Maybe lose Quick Learner; I want these things to scale and this one seems hard to manage. Illusion (Human) isn't a Quirk/Perk; that's more of an application of one of the gifts (if you would decide on choosing that particular one).
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@Lugubrious I'll read up on the sheet, but by giving it a quick scan, here are my suggestions.

- A better and larger image.
- Younger, Charismatic (Authoritative), and Lucky are okay. Understanding probably just change it to Perception.

What do you mean by Genius Intellect? If its a Knowledge Perk, then its cool, but you have to pick a specific field of knowledge and should coincide with your background.

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@Lugubrious I'll read up on the sheet, but by giving it a quick scan, here are my suggestions.

- A better and larger image.
- Younger, Charismatic (Authoritative), and Lucky are okay. Understanding probably just change it to Perception.

What do you mean by Genius Intellect? If its a Knowledge Perk, then its cool, but you have to pick a specific field of knowledge and should coincide with your background.


I'm not sure about how the image is displaying to you, but to me it's quite large. I'll screencap and then upload the screencap in place of what I have now.

As for Genius Intellect, I just mean he's very intelligent, not specifically knowledgeable in one area. That relates to his ability to take in, process, and act on information. If that's not good, I can replace it with something else.
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Yeah, it was probably an inch big on my screen. Its large now after the edit.

Ah yeah, that's a pass on the Genius Intellect thing.

Also, was that his real name? I mean, its cool if he wanted to change names, just mention what his previous name was.
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Yeah, it was probably an inch big on my screen. Its large now after the edit.

Ah yeah, that's a pass on the Genius Intellect thing.

Also, was that his real name? I mean, its cool if he wanted to change names, just mention what his previous name was.


In the background I mention in the first sentence his name was Evan Lobb, but I can put it in parenthesis in the Name section too if it helps.
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Sorry for short and crisp backstory, simply wanted to get it out.
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@Protean Pair Alright, how about Keen Linguist instead of those? Bit more limited.
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@geminironin What would that do? Able to speak more languages? Won't be having any, or at least not that many foreign dialects in the RP.
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@Protean Pair I figured it would help with reading old languages or codes.
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@Protean Pair

Hows my sheet?
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Did my thing.

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Hm, Imma reuse an older character concept.

It's time I get some angst in this RP.

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Rabidporcupine Depression Tree.

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I have no idea why the picture is so small by the way, the one on the website is actually pretty big.

Edit: Fixed it.
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So, we've got a pretty good cast in the works here, looks like. After seeing what the first few characters got I'm super interested to see everyone's Gifts.
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@Protean Pair
I’m having a tough time choosing a concept so I’ll just ask this. Is there a character limit? I assume one each but best to ask
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@Protean Pair I made the changes, and had a buddy of mine draft a picture for the rabbit. If this is all good, shall I post the CS in the Char tab?

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So how is everyone.
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Argonaut Mostly Dead BTW

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G O O D just a bump to check if this is still a thing
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