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So, a bit of a trigger warning concerning Salem's creator. I didn't intend for it to get so dark.


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@The Irish Tree Oh crap, everyone was supposed to be an edgelord? Welp, Light is creepy, but shes no edgelord. She will probably pick on any edgelords to be fair... Also shuffled Light's classes around a bit. I'm still not 100% on class stuff. xD


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and as we all know Chaotic neutral is the edgiest of alignment of them all


Oh boy is it.

Mainly having that be Rodias' alignment because in a way, its also very flexible. Wanna help orphans? Can do. Wanna murder a different set of orphans for spitting on your Jays? Can also do.


So, a bit of a trigger warning concerning Salem's creator. I didn't intend for it to get so dark.




Really interesting take on a doll-based character. I like the idea of the eye basically being a "phylactery" for him, and that as long as it survives, he's still technically "alive". The HP Paradox was an interesting read, and it feels like you've put a ton of thought into this character to make them balanced in a game sense, and logically balanced based on their design.

And with that, he/she/it/zey are accepted as our Keeper of Chapter 1! Go ahead and plop them into the character tab!
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Would it piss off everyone here if Vae was an Overlord race class?
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Not me.
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I know very little about the setting so yeah... whatever.

Also noticed I should probably have Devil's sight as a vault guardian so I can see in magical darkness. Alright if I add that? Forgot truesight doesn't let you see through darkness.
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Would it piss off everyone here if Vae was an Overlord race class?


The Wiki describes that most Overlords are at minimum level 80 or higher, buuuuuuut since this is already stemming far and away from canon anyways, I see no problem with him being like a variant Overlord that specializes in Martial skills. Maybe Death Knight instead, as a more fitting title for it?
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@Lugubrious Is it safe to assume most traps on each floor ext are made by Graft? If so, think he also designed the scrooge mcduck vault? xD
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@Lugubrious Is it safe to assume most traps on each floor ext are made by Graft? If so, think he also designed the scrooge mcduck vault? xD


Not at all. Each floor was designed by a guildmember and then made by them and whoever else helped, probably by donating resources. The NPCs only staff the floors. Only after getting to the new world can they actually start making stuff of their own. At that point, though, Graft would certainly peddle his traps to other Chapter Keepers. As such, the vault was either made by Light's creator, the guild leader, or whoever might have been assigned the Treasurer or Architect role in the guild.
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Here's my finished product which stands ready for judgment. I am ready to make.any changes needed.


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Think we should have a discord for this?
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@The Irish Tree, do you have an idea of when we'll get started?
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Think we should have a discord for this?


Nope. Short reason is that I'd prefer people to actually check in on the rp for conversation, so that its a more permanent thing for them to think about. Or spam memes.



@The Irish Tree, do you have an idea of when we'll get started?


Was thinking of doing it this friday, if not by the end of the week. Finals are ramping up on my end so it might start a bit slow, but after December 10th I should be completely free for christmas break.



Here's my finished product which stands ready for judgment. I am ready to make.any changes needed.



Wanted to point out real quick that a class listed as (R) can only go as high as level 5, and that some of your class/race levels aren't defined yet. Also that picture at the end for the White Legion Reference is broken, or I just flat can't see it. Also his age isn't listed.

Other than that though his cs is really shaping up a lot. Barring those minor fixes, I'd say he's pretty much good to go once you finish revising.

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@Stern Algorithm So, I take it your character will like the monster ladies we have here huh?

Also don't worry about the dark bits. I just rewatched the brave little toaster after being reminded of that movie and uh,

And it was published by Disney.
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And it was published by Disney.


I mean, have you seen old Disney movies? They were pretty racist... So a song like that doesn't seem too far out of their ballpark. xD

Besides, kid-oriented Nintendo published a game where one of the main characters litteraly calls another main character a "one-eyed monster", lolinnuendo...1

And hey, who doesn't like monster-girls?
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@Xaltwind Apparently Graft xD. Well, eldritch origin ones.

Nintendo is a fun one. they do a lot of crazy stuff, I love it. Kirby games for example are dark AF for being so colorful and I love it.

And Irish, should I change my stuff around to have a Great Old One race thing or class thing? It hink that might fit Light more, but I don't know how you'd suggest I go about that. or if what I have works for her ability list as is.
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Wanted to point out real quick that a class listed as (R) can only go as high as level 5, and that some of your class/race levels aren't defined yet. Also that picture at the end for the White Legion Reference is broken, or I just flat can't see it. Also his age isn't listed.

Other than that though his cs is really shaping up a lot. Barring those minor fixes, I'd say he's pretty much good to go once you finish revising.


OK so fix the levels, the White Legion image and age got it. When you say defined do I just need to add the levels and rarity or describe them?
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OK so fix the levels, the White Legion image and age got it. When you say defined do I just need to add the levels and rarity or describe them?


Add the levels and rarity. Explanations are for nerds.
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@Xaltwind Apparently Graft xD. Well, eldritch origin ones.

Nintendo is a fun one. they do a lot of crazy stuff, I love it. Kirby games for example are dark AF for being so colorful and I love it.

And Irish, should I change my stuff around to have a Great Old One race thing or class thing? It hink that might fit Light more, but I don't know how you'd suggest I go about that. or if what I have works for her ability list as is.


Hmm...I'd say probably just label the class as like, "Elder Spawn" or something. I dont see a problem with her ability list as-is.
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Pfft, Graft..: The man who has test-tubes and copper-wires sticking out of his back, chest, sides and possibly his posterior... The man with ashen skin, blotches and fake limbs... THAT Graft? Bitchplease! Nobody care wha' dat foo' thinks~ Monster-grils are da bomb. Even if they do look like the nightmare-rendition of Gardevoire...
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I plan to base my character on the Star Spawn from Forgotten Realms, which offshoots of living stars that exist in the Far Realms, and are the Great Old One analogues... so that is to say I'd prefer if we could avoid having other "eldritch" races.
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