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Hidden 4 yrs ago → 4 yrs ago Post by RickyG85
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Hidden 4 yrs ago Post by tobiax
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@BenG85 This has potential, but I feel it needs some revision to meet out standards. Perhaps a slight re-work and an addition of a bit more depth?
Hidden 4 yrs ago Post by RickyG85
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@BenG85 This has potential, but I feel it needs some revision to meet out standards. Perhaps a slight re-work and an addition of a bit more depth?


Sure, no problem. Were you just needing more detail, is there something there that doesn't fit well, or is there something in particular you want to see?
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@BenG85 A bit more nuance and texture to the character would be nice. But I have to point out we're kind of overbooked, so not everyone who has currently expressed interest can get in, sadly. We have nine active interest seekers and 8 spots, but the game was more geared towards 7. Sorry if I was unclear before.
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Hidden 4 yrs ago Post by RickyG85
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@tobiaxNo worries. I've made some changes, his background is just a little more detailed, now, with some actual hints at personality this time :P and best of luck to my fellow applicants ^_^
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Oh, also he has no last name.
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Hidden 4 yrs ago Post by RickyG85
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@tobiax Now he does
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Hidden 4 yrs ago Post by Red7VII
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Awesome character @BenG85! I look forward to reading what you all come up with!
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Hidden 4 yrs ago Post by tobiax
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Um, hi... can I help you?
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@BenG85 I'm not really sold on the character in his current state.
Hidden 4 yrs ago → 4 yrs ago Post by RickyG85
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revisions taking place, trying not to rush this, but I really want the part!

Update: lots of revision, but, hopefully this is a more cohesive, coherent bio/background! Still came out kind of long, but, at least it all should fit together better.
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Hidden 4 yrs ago Post by sassy1085
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sassy1085 The Queen of Sassy

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Finally...it's being 100 years but I finally finish it. Heres a "trying to make a friend but doesn't know how" girl and a "jerk with a heart of gold" digimon!




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Hidden 4 yrs ago Post by Le Fay
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Sorry about the delay, other things had been taking up my time. As for the issue of acceptance of Churches in Japan, I'm going to edit my backstory to make it clearly an international cult from the start. And Masato's mother would definitely be viewed as an outlier in Japanese society. Expect the edited backstory tomorrow.
Hidden 4 yrs ago Post by tobiax
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@Le Fay You don't need to edit it so heavily. Just understand that it's very abnormal for Japanese society. Adjusting small details accordingly is more welcome than large changes.
Hidden 4 yrs ago Post by RickyG85
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I'm a little confused, about the digivices- the characters I've seen portrayed with art (great, btw) are holding gen1 Digivices, but the one pictured in the intro almost looks like something designed to fit on the wrist and forearm? Which one is actually being used?
Hidden 4 yrs ago Post by sassy1085
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@tobiax
do I move to the character tab?
Hidden 4 yrs ago Post by tobiax
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@sassy1085 Yes, please do. :]
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Hidden 4 yrs ago → 4 yrs ago Post by RickyG85
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Edit: Forget I asked- I'm going to be patient, and I apologize for being impatient.
Hidden 4 yrs ago Post by Le Fay
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Edited my character sheet slightly. Hoping it is acceptable now.
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Hidden 4 yrs ago Post by tobiax
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@Le Fay It works now. Thank you for your cooperation. Masato is accepted.
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