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@Blu Oh Sorry, I had thought about doing that but I wasn't quite sure. In any case, fixed it in my sheet!
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@Blu Oh Sorry, I had thought about doing that but I wasn't quite sure. In any case, fixed it in my sheet!


Great! Everything's in order now so accepted~
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We truly are a class full of protagonists.
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Feel like Class A is basically entirely that. But maybe that's just me.
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Well at the very least, we're filling every cliche of protagonists there are.
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Give Caelum new things to learn and places to explore and he'll be a happy noodle.
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let me introduce the class

here's drake, he's a fire swordsman guy

here's kiara, who specializes in electricity

here's alberta, who can make plants

here's sekhandur, who's literally the strongest man at the academy and has a list of powers that makes Najimi Ajimu blush

here's kress, who can make chairs
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"Theres not enough seats!" Kress can solve it.
"The ship is sinking, if only we had alot of wood to keep us afloat.." Let there be chairs.

"They are coming, we must barric-" Hes on it.

"Totally not english are invading!" Tea anyone?

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@Dead Cruiser Hoo boy, where do I start? Yeah, your character is definitely way too overpowered at this point for the RP. You'd have to make a lot of changes to his spells. Thematically, his spells just include a bunch of niches. He has necromancy, support spells, alchemy, elemental attacks, and even future sight. It's too much. Here's what I would need to see changed:



And lastly for your mana characteristic, it lists "The humbling magnificence of a billion stars shining in the desert sky." I hope this is just playing it up, but if you're serious then this needs to be changed into something even more humbling (for the prince that is). In it's current state, I can't accept the character, sorry.
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@Dead Cruiser Thank you for being receptive to changing things. The names don't matter so keep them as they are. The thing about the mana characteristic is that it's showing just how powerful his mana feels. Like being in awe at a billion stars in a desert sky is pretty powerful so I'd appreciate something a bit more tame.
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I would argue that some people thus far have some pretty powerful mana descriptions?

Like...
Overwhelming.

A Serpentine Orgy Of Chaos.

near-abyssal qualities.
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@Dead Cruiser @ERode Combined with the actual spells it seemed like it added more to the OPness than the others, but point taken. I can work with that since it's meant more to be poetic.
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Overwhelming


to be fair, i meant more overwhelming as in "oh god, why'd you spill the entire 2 litre on the floor" than "all my senses are fried because there's too much"
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I can't believe I didn't ask this before, but how are each persons sleeping quarters at the academy? Is it individually customized rooms with bathrooms, or be it split with one or several other students? Or is it dependant of character wealth?
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I can't believe I didn't ask this before, but how are each persons sleeping quarters at the academy? Is it individually customized rooms with bathrooms, or be it split with one or several other students? Or is it dependant of character wealth?


Never given it much thought. What do you guys prefer?
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