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Welcome to the Voting and Feedback round for RPGC#32!


Voting and Feedback guidelines

  • Please take your time to read through all the entries before voting for your favourite work. The reasons you base your vote on are up to you, as long the vote isn’t based on whether or not you like the author.
    It would be nice if you could share why you voted for a specific work.
  • Giving feedback is optional but highly encouraged. When giving feedback you should be respectful and constructive. It’s good to point out any flaws or the things you feel could be improved or why you didn't like something, but don’t be mean.
    Make sure to point out what you liked or what appreciated in the entry too.
  • Contestants may and are encouraged to vote for and give feedback for the other entries, but don’t vote for your own entry. If contestants wish to withhold a vote and only give feedback, that is good too.
  • The entries are anonymous unless the writer asked for having their name added. That being said, writers may claim their work at any time during the voting period.
  • The entry with the most votes will win, but in case of a tie a Contest Mod will cast the tie-breaker vote.
  • You can vote for entries and post your feedback in this thread, but if you rather have your vote and/or feedback be anonymous you can PM it to @Calle.
  • The voting period deadline is July 12th, 9:00 CET, which is 7:00 server time (both times are in a.m.).





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Hidden 3 yrs ago Post by Loksfjoer
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With 2 entries of just over 500 words, a voting period of 1,5 week should be enough. If needed I can extend it.

I hope you'll enjoy reading these 2 stories.
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I really enjoyed both stories, but "The Voice Within" is right up my alley, it had me hooked at the first sentence, then ends with Death Metal ☠🤘
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Goddamn, I'm not sure my vote yet but I enjoyed both!
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Definitely The Voice Within. TVW has better flow than Should I or Shouldn't I IMO. The character actions in SIOSI, like "Nudging the cat away, the door got closed quickly", just don't read correctly/feel abrupt to me, if that makes any sense. Maybe it's the lack of a pronoun or a name that makes it feel awkward.
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My vote also goes to The Voice Within.

Nice and darkly amusing, me likey.
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With 3 votes the winner of this round is The Voice Within and that story will be added to the trophy case.

Thank you for voting!
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