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The world of Teyvat sees an age of increased prosperity as the Electro nation of Averton launches the age of industry, where man steps away from the providence of gods and spirits, and instead by their own hands, takes hold of their own futures. Yet, not every person in this new age seeks to create a future for the good of all, there are those who seek selfish ends with the new technology, only focused on the benefits that they alone will experience.

The many peoples of this diverse land experience a myriad of problems, as does every age of civilization does. Rebellions, whispers of war, conspiracy surrounding the rich and powerful, and lawless lands seeking order. Way of life in this Teyvat can be unclear, especially for those living on the fringes. Those who hold Visions considered the last envoys of the Archons.



Geo Chapter
Red-Gold Rivers in the Desert Sand


The great Sea of Dunes that encompasses more than 90% of Al-Marabar stretches on endlessly, the sands constantly shifting like a great big sea. In the distance one might see one of the many sand ships wandering the sands, some as small as fishing boats, as big as galleys, or even ones owned by the most powerful Sand Pirate crews, as big as small towns and cities. Among these is the capital, headed by the Sand King Axon, and his crew, the Burning Suns. The newly crowned Sand King is one who loves the gladiatorial combat the region is known for, encouraging other large crews to build their own arenas, and giving prisoners more chances to prove themselves. The many events and tournaments have proven to be enjoyable for the peoples of the region, and even career gladiators have begun emerging among the prisoners, some may even refuse freedom to fight for longer.

Of course, not all are happy with the new King, particularly the Aldugan Spines, a large sand pirate group that had always opposed Axon and his brother, the former Sand King. Whisperings of late have connected them to people from Averton, but whisperings and rumors will remain so, until the veil is lifted, and those daring would dare try to find the truth.

The beginning of this chapter starts on the Sand King's ship and by extension capital city, Zweidaya. Axon the Sand King, holds a grand tournament gathering all of the Sand Lords in the realm together to present their best gladiators to determine the strongest. To the winning city goes great riches directly from his coffers. As the grand gladiatorial battles take place, a conspiracy begins to brew.


Nations of Teyvat






Playable Races



In Regards to Half-Races


This is a case-by-case basis, however the ones that are decidedly not possible as a half are Noble Beasts, Cryptids, Beastmen, and Elves. The latter two are already technically partially human, the former two occur in very unnatural ways where they do not breed like regular races.

If you have questions, please bring them to me.


Technology



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Hidden 1 yr ago 1 yr ago Post by AzureKnight
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@Sho Minazuki

Hey. I had a decent amount on my plate and wasn't sure if I could take this RP on as well. Been lurking around the interest sheet, and I decided to throw my hat in again, if that's cool. Got a CS here, let me know if anything needs to be changed.

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Pretty much, the same on my end as Azure. But, they've divided the coming workload up, so I can slot back in with my character app, if that's cool.

In case anything needs last minute changes:

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@AzureKnight Pretty much a shoe-in actually. You can put her in the character section.

@Enkryption More or less good, although perhaps a couple things.

To better define your sorcery, make a new name to put Ionizing Purity and Shock and Awe under one umbrella for the sake of the Independent. From what I can tell, her sorcery is based on the body, and gives her more control over what it can do and manage.

And I also recommend doing a bit of formatting, it had taken me a little extra time to sift through it. I am allowing the two weapons mainly because it is important for your fighting style, so do bear that in mind. It would be appreciated if the weapons didn't seem to blend together on your sheet.

Other than that, you're good.

Once again I'll be giving out personal independents a little later for everyone so stay tuned for those.
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Cool deal.
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@Enkryption More or less good, although perhaps a couple things.

To better define your sorcery, make a new name to put Ionizing Purity and Shock and Awe under one umbrella for the sake of the Independent. From what I can tell, her sorcery is based on the body, and gives her more control over what it can do and manage.

And I also recommend doing a bit of formatting, it had taken me a little extra time to sift through it. I am allowing the two weapons mainly because it is important for your fighting style, so do bear that in mind. It would be appreciated if the weapons didn't seem to blend together on your sheet.

Other than that, you're good.


I'm taking these are optional suggestions, though, I'll happily reformat the CS to look better than it's barebones form as I intended to do before I posted it.
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Hey @Sho Minazuki I added a new technique and expanded the backstory a little so I wanted to check with you first


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@Teyao I would recommend making Water Barrage have a cooldown instead of just not being able to generate water from your body anymore, you DO have a Hydro vision after all, the source of the water is the vision's elemental power.
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@Teyao I would recommend making Water Barrage have a cooldown instead of just not being able to generate water from your body anymore, you DO have a Hydro vision after all, the source of the water is the vision's elemental power.


Kay kay dude, will modify then, are there any other issues you can see?
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Aight Independents are out. If you wanna discuss them I highly recommend using discord to do that.

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Alright, here comes my character sheet. May have gone too edgy with this one, not sure. It's been a long time since I've done a character sheet.

Within an underground facility in the remote reaches of Averton is the scene of a massacre. The massacre seems to have taken place a year ago, but the conditions of the underground facility have turned what was once a place of research into a crypt that is good for preserving bodies. Among the bodies, rubble, blood, and gore is the common occurrence of the phrase "Project Titan" as it is written on the doorplates of several destroyed rooms and among some of the scattered pieces of paper that managed to somewhat escape the massacre intact.

The destruction that went rampant in this place seems to have been some sort of beast, or perhaps two beasts. One of them had claws that rip and tore and the other had hulking fists that smashed and crushed. Many things are scattered about as well as if a tornado ripped through this underground facility: A tornado that sought nothing more than death and destruction.

In one more secretive, hidden room is a bloodstained journal that is clutched against the bosom of a corpse. Any explorer who happens to pry this journal from this cold, dead hand will discover that it has been penned by a highly methodical, scientific hand. There is also a portrait tucked in its pages as well. The hand whom the journal was pried from is wearing the garb of a man of science. The journal's first page reads thus--



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@Renose I do recommend you join the Discord. Overall the sheet is actually fine, but there are some specifics and caveats I'll need to talk to you about and ask for.
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@Renose I do recommend you join the Discord. Overall the sheet is actually fine, but there are some specifics and caveats I'll need to talk to you about and ask for.


But there's no link to Discord in the OOC?
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It's there now at the bottom.
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@Renose I do recommend you join the Discord. Overall the sheet is actually fine, but there are some specifics and caveats I'll need to talk to you about and ask for.


Alright, I'll be there
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Is this still active?
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This is indeed still active. You can find me on the discord. If it's not working, do notify me.
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......Dammit, it's Genshin Impact, so let's do this!


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@Rezod92 Proof that Walton is run by lizard people wearing human skin. Anyway cool we got a cryptid haha. A rather difficult thing to make.

Landslide Force should make all interactions against an enemy of smaller stature be treated as if you had +1 Strength.

Geo-plosion should also deal more damage based on how much armor is left on Garrick, so you'll have this situation where you can put on as much armor as possible with Terra's Embrace, and then detonate it for massive damage as a two turn gambit.

Backstory's pretty solid too.

Independents...

Intimidating Presence - Garrick's monster form as a powerful cryptid dwarfs most other species and races, and the sheer size and lizard features in combination can make for an intimidating sight. Garrick appearing by surprise will lend him a very generous first attack window when he instills fear into his foes, and enables him to better intimidate others in a conversation or negotiation.

Protector - Garrick's natural nature as a protector of others gives him further determination. When fighting to protect another, whether it be an NPC, or an ally in the midst of combat, he has a +1 to Endurance.

Otherwise all good. By the way for your racial independent, it may be best to also iterate what abilities Garrick has as a cryptid.
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@Sho Minazuki

Ah right, you did say you'd allow us 1 Independant of our own making while you provide us the other two.

Anyway, I edited my sheet to your recommendations. Am I good?
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