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@ActRaiserTheReturned I like your idea of magic, really like it. I think there's great potential and I am already theory crafting by myself how to develop it further, however I can't really do that if you walk back previously agreed changes. It could be that you missed it or forgot, and I am not blaming you for it, but it really reads like carelessness to me and Magic of all things should not be introduced into the setting in a careless way.
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@ActRaiserTheReturned I like your idea of magic, really like it. I think there's great potential and I am already theory crafting by myself how to develop it further, however I can't really do that if you walk back previously agreed changes. It could be that you missed it or forgot, and I am not blaming you for it, but it really reads like carelessness to me and Magic of all things should not be introduced into the setting in a careless way.


I think what happened is I thought I had edited everything with the agreed changes and I copy pasted everything, thinking so.
But I forgot to edit everything correctly. I apologize for the misunderstanding.
And I agree to the changes.
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I think what happened is I thought I had edited everything with the agreed changes and I copy pasted everything, thinking so.
But I forgot to edit everything correctly. I apologize for the misunderstanding.
And I agree to the changes.


OK, I too am sorry for coming at you aggressively like that. It's good to sort things out.
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In general matters, now that we have:
@BingTheWing
@ActRaiserTheReturned
@Rekkuza
@Stanifly
@Cmmelody
and possibly @Theyra

6 people that have either gone through the process of drafting a character or have expressed an interest in the RP. I will start preparing the OOC thread for us to migrate over to whilst waiting for the rest of the spots to fill up.
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In general matters, now that we have:
@BingTheWing
@ActRaiserTheReturned
@Rekkuza
@Stanifly
@Cmmelody
and possibly @Theyra

6 people that have either gone through the process of drafting a character or have expressed an interest in the RP. I will start preparing the OOC thread for us to migrate over to whilst waiting for the rest of the spots to fill up.


May I host this on my Discord, in case you don't have a Discord for it?
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@ActRaiserTheReturned Even if there does end up being a Discord, we'll still need an OOC and IC thread on here.

Better keep it as much on this site as possible too in my experience, makes it easier to both archive stuff that happens, and for prospective players to know what's going on.

That last part's just my opinion tho
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@ActRaiserTheReturned Even if there does end up being a Discord, we'll still need an OOC and IC thread on here.

Better keep it as much on this site as possible too in my experience, makes it easier to both archive stuff that happens, and for prospective players to know what's going on.

That last part's just my opinion tho


Of course, but it's fun to have a medium where we can have free flowing conversations.
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I am still here, just still figuring out what to be unless I just do a god I have done before from other god rps.
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If you're looking for suggestions, then I guess we still don't have any life-giving gods, or any water, fire, light or artistic gods either for that matter.

All of this to say that there's a few niches to choose from.
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Hello! I am interested in the game you have here! Is there any room for one more divine being in the pantheon?
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If you're looking for suggestions, then I guess we still don't have any life-giving gods, or any water, fire, light or artistic gods either for that matter.

All of this to say that there's a few niches to choose from.


I could do a god of light or a goddess of life since we have no female gods at the moment. I did have an idea for a god of sand, but I feel like, since we have god of earth, I should pick something else. That, and I am not sure if a god of twilight would work.
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Ok! I think it's ready for review!
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If you're looking for suggestions, then I guess we still don't have any life-giving gods, or any water, fire, light or artistic gods either for that matter.

All of this to say that there's a few niches to choose from.


Adding on to this, I think we also don't have gods whose domain is in wind, sun, moon, nature (tho the life giving gods will probably do), and death (this world still lacking a death system too)
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Adding on to this, I think we also don't have gods whose domain is in wind, sun, moon, nature (tho the life giving gods will probably do), and death (this world still lacking a death system too)


War, or Sleep and Oblivion, could fill the role of Death in a pinch, and Sky could cover Wind. As for the Moon (and/or Night and/or Darkness, they're all kind of connected in a way), my guess is that by having a God affiliated with Light could take care of that by opposing it (like if Light's a thing, by necessity there must be Darkness, since something cannot exist without the acknowledging the possibility of its absence, even if it's not a specific God's Domain, y'know? Same could be said with Life and Death I suppose.)

We're obviously not going to fill every single Domain or niche, but I think with enough creativity, cooperation, and diversity in our Domains, we can take care of everything we'd need to make a functioning world.
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@ActRaiserTheReturned As I said I'll make a Discord if the majority want for it to exist. Right now it seems we have 1 vote in favor (you).

@Theyra I remember you from other iterations of the Divinus roleplays. IIRC you liked playing loner gods that did their thing without interacting much with the other players. Do you think that you could be more involved this time, in this roleplay? Just curious.

In general the gender/sex of your god is irrelevant in the grand scheme of things because divine appearance is fluid, especially insofar as how they choose to appear to mortals, of all people. I would suggest that your main questions to yourself when creating a deity concept be this:
  • What do I want to create?
  • What do I want my deity to be known for?
  • Which domain pair is most thematically appropriate to what my deity is centered around, and will facilitate the best result possible for me from the get go?


@Necrodancer This is a beautifully written concept with genuine emotional depth. However, there's a critical issue that I feel I must address: "desires endless war" is campaign-breaking. In a game where players are cooperatively building a world, a deity whose core motivation is perpetual warfare will be in constant opposition to any god of peace, agriculture, family, healing, or civilization. This creates an antagonist dynamic where you're mechanically incentivized to sabotage other players' goals.

What if you to reframed Adria's motivation from active perpetuation to reverent observation? She doesn't cause wars, but when mortals go to war, she appears to honor their sacrifice and preserve their stories. Think Valkyrie (witness/collector) rather than Ares (instigator). This keeps all your beautiful imagery and emotional beats without forcing you into a villain role (unless, of course, you want to be a villain as well. In this case I can accommodate just like I did in Yzechr's case, but you'll have to be certain about it.)

Additionally, the Music domain needs meaningful integration or replacement. Currently, every "music" reference is actually about war (drums, battle cries, funeral songs), these are subcategories of War and not standalone Music expressions. Either expand Music to cover warrior culture's artistic expression broadly (war poetry, epic songs, marching cadences) or replace it with something that fits better like Glory, Sacrifice, or Fate.

Finally, resolve the compassion-versus-desire contradiction: your motivation says Adria wants endless war, but your roleplay shows deep sorrow and maternal tenderness for dying soldiers. Pick one: is she a compassionate witness who mourns the necessity of war, or does she genuinely want conflict to continue? I'm happy to approve once these alignments are clear.
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@Theyra I remember you from other iterations of the Divinus roleplays. IIRC you liked playing loner gods that did their thing without interacting much with the other players. Do you think that you could be more involved this time, in this roleplay? Just curious.

In general the gender/sex of your god is irrelevant in the grand scheme of things because divine appearance is fluid, especially insofar as how they choose to appear to mortals, of all people. I would suggest that your main questions to yourself when creating a deity concept be this:
  • What do I want to create?
  • What do I want my deity to be known for?
  • Which domain pair is most thematically appropriate to what my deity is centered around, and will facilitate the best result possible for me from the get go?


I did rp with people, like in one iteration of the Divinus. I teamed up with someone to create humanity. So I can do that more if you wish.

Well, in that case, then a god of spirits. Since I would like to make a god that creates spirits and a spirit world. Since I never got the chance to do that in Divinus rps. So either a god of sand and spirits or a god of spirits and something else.
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I did rp with people, like in one iteration of the Divinus. I teamed up with someone to create humanity. So I can do that more if you wish.

Well, in that case, then a god of spirits. Since I would like to make a god that creates spirits and a spirit world. Since I never got the chance to do that in Divinus rps. So either a god of sand and spirits or a god of spirits and something else.


I apologize if I offended you with my comment by the way, I genuinely hope all players interact with the world as much as possible. It won't be fun if they don't! As for Spirits and Sand, do think hard how these two could be thematically tied. What would spirits in this setting be? How would they take form? What events would have to take place for the formation/birth of a spirit to take place? Will they all be born the moment your deity assumes the Domain of Spirits? These are just some questions, feel free to think on it deeper.
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I did rp with people, like in one iteration of the Divinus. I teamed up with someone to create humanity. So I can do that more if you wish.

Well, in that case, then a god of spirits. Since I would like to make a god that creates spirits and a spirit world. Since I never got the chance to do that in Divinus rps. So either a god of sand and spirits or a god of spirits and something else.


I'm curious, why sand in particular? Is there a god concept you already have in mind? Maybe if you tell us what you want to play we can make a suggestion. (of course it's up to you)
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@BingTheWing @ActRaiserTheReturned @Rekkuza @Stanifly @Cmmelody @Theyra @Necrodancer

For those with accepted character sheets, please go ahead and post them in character thread of the OOC. For the rest, port your WIP over to the OOC for us to continue over there.
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@Vec Those are some really good criticisms, thank you for addressing's these. I defiantly felt like I was playing a little too much into the war aspect of her character and left the music aspect of her as some flavoring. Sorry about the world breaking desire. It felt a little cliche even to me, but I didn't know exactly what else a goddess of war could desire. Alright let me change a few things to make it fit much better lol.

So instead of being the goddess of music along with war, what if she was the goddess of sacrifice instead. Then her new desire would be "She desires that every sacrifice, heroic or tragic, noble or desperate, be witnessed, honored, and remembered." I hope that's a lot better from before and less agonistic. For the final concern about compassion versus desire contradiction, I think that's settled since I am leaning more into a compassionate goddess of war.

I'll start editing my character sheet to fix the problems, is there any other concerns or suggestions you want to make? I am always happy to take some ideas!
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