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This concept was created by @Nightmare Bunny, @Ogobrogo, and @Zoldyck
D-Script Amendments: To account for the original owners' absences.

MALFUNCTION – The Superpower RP Where Everything Sucks

What the hell is this?

Welcome to a world where having the genetic mutation equivalent of "superpowers" really, really sucks.

The basic premise is simple: a world united under a single government, where super-powers come with devastating consequences, and where supers (dubbed “Genetic Malfunctions”) are feared for their terrifying abilities. Malfunctions are rooted out during their late teen years, through a test administered every year by their local district to all students between the ages of 15 to 20: the time period over which powers begin to manifest.

Testing positive marks you out as a non-human and a Genetic Malfunction. It means there are now two options for you. If your ability is too powerful, then you are put to death immediately. If not, then you’ll shipped off to one of 150 different Training and Education Facilities across the globe: the concentration camps of the twenty-first century. There, you are trained to use your abilities in order to uphold societal order at all costs.

But even the powers themselves aren’t all sunshine and daisies -- this is the real world, after all, and dangerous mutations mean dangerous consequences. Throwing a super-strength punch means breaking every bone in your arm. Excessive use of telekinesis can cause serious brain damage.

Malfunction takes place in this world. Specifically, it takes place in one of these Training and Education Facilities: TEF-149.

The Rules:

1. No "adult themed" content in the RP -- fade to black or take it to the PM.

2. The GM's word is law. Yeah, all three of us. We can talk about changes/new plots as a democracy. :)

3. No god-modding/auto-hitting.

4. Remember that there are real consequences in this setting! If you're going to spit on a guard's uniform, expect to be punished if not hung. Please keep yourselves in check with this one. I would hate to be the bad guy and have to write it in for others. As would hate to see an argument start because of it. :)

5. Keep IC drama separate from the OOC ~*~*~*Friendship.*~*~*~

6. Act realistic -- don't suddenly barge into conversations where you have nothing to do.

7. READ THE GODDAMN LORE. The essentials, and preferably the supplements too.

8. I know it's a challenge in large groups, but let's keep 1x1 interactions to a minimum. In my experience it's always slowed the progress of a story line if only two characters are interacting.

LORE ESSENTIALS

Reading the lore essentials is the most important thing that you can do before starting your CS!! We're looking for characters seem to "fit into" the crapsack world of Malfunction, so make sure you know what's going on! And, of course, if you have any questions... please feel free to ask a GM (preferably all the GMs) via a PM. I, as well as everyone who was a part of the first attempt to get this up and running, can do my best to answer questions.

We're friendly people, and we don't bite~!! Well... Zoldyck only bites sometimes. NO BITING. I feel like I should add that to the rules... :P









SUPPLEMENTARY MATERIALS

We'd prefer it if you at least read the world-building sections of this! But, of course, this is supplementary material. Read this when you're trying to get a better sense of the Malfunction World.













Character Creation

Please read the lore BEFORE you make a character! And if your desired power isn't listed here yet, don't worry -- maybe you're just more creative than us! Go ahead and check with us, and we'll tell you whether you can use it or not.







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... Maybe you should have made an interest check first. lol
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... Maybe you should have made an interest check first. lol


Can always do that second.
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Can always do that second.


It helps to do it first, just so you can fill the RP with people from the start. lol

Either way, I don't think I'll be participating in this one. I was expecting an roleplay similar to this, not a copy/paste of the original OOC. The laziness kind of put me off.
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@Mr Allen J
Kk. First off, I credited the original authors. We had people from the first thread who were already interested. There's no need to do an interest check first if you've already got people who are interested/signed on already. We could just consider the first go at it an interest check seeing as things didn't go as well and it never left the ground in the first place.
Secondly, if you wanted a "similar" roleplay then you definitely should have brought it up. I'm not a mind reader, sir, so if you had ideas about how this should have gone, then you should have brought it up. Even then, your "similar" idea would have been rejected by us outright. We were given permission to use this idea to try and get it started again. Now, where I come from, that means that the proper thing to do is use the same idea, not change it into something else. If you wanted something different, or as you put it, "similar," then you should have made one up yourself. I think that most of the original users who were interested in this idea wanted to participate in it. They, unlike you, who creates enough characters for yourself to outnumber your co-writers and so usurp the role play to manipulate it into your own idea rather than respect the effort of the creators, wanted to write for the idea they were presented with. I see that you are perhaps afraid of the challenge of taking up an idea that is not entirely your own. Collaboration is the spirit of post-by-post style role play afterall. If you're not comfortable with that, you could very well go invest your time in Japanese role playing games featuring characters whose impossible breast/body proportions you've "copy/pasted" into your own cardboard characters.
As for the laziness comment, I didn't see you making any effort to reboot this marvelous idea. I was, and am, interested in seeing how this story, as it is, will unfold. Regardless of what you were expecting, to come and continue to show disrespect to an idea you weren't all that keen on in the first place is a waste of your time. I'd like to tell you about the effort I made to "copy/paste" this rp into a new thread, but that would also be an immense waste of your time. That would certainly help validate my actions, as if I need validation from you. Fortunately unlike you, I don't need validation from someone on the internet.
I actually look forward to your discontinued participation, as I wasn't all that keen on your characters in the first place. Thank you for the laughs, though.

Sincerely,
Discord.

P.S. I hope this finds you well. I did not intend to write this in the way that I did, only to meet you with the same courtesy that you met me with. Best of luck.
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@SecretlyDiscord Wow, my message wasn't even that insulting (Even I thought the laziness part was on the nose), and I get a rant back. I almost came. Let me start by saying it wasn't my intention to insult you (I'm just very blunt and critical), I was just expressing why I wasn't participating, and my reasons why - which should have just been left at just that. But, of course, I'm giving you a response you probably will like even less!

I'm going to keep the personal attacks to a minimum, and instead, attack your argument.

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Kk. First off, I credited the original authors. We had people from the first thread who were already interested. There's no need to do an interest check first if you've already got people who are interested/signed on already. We could just consider the first go at it an interest check seeing as things didn't go as well and it never left the ground in the first place.


Let's be real here, it's been a few months since the original had it's brief run. People are going to lose interest, and move onto other things. That's what I imagined half the original cast was doing. Even then, it would be common sense to alert people. I was under the impression this wasn't going anywhere for quite awhile until I saw this on the sidebar.

Secondly, if you wanted a "similar" roleplay then you definitely should have brought it up. I'm not a mind reader, sir, so if you had ideas about how this should have gone, then you should have brought it up. Even then, your "similar" idea would have been rejected by us outright. We were given permission to use this idea to try and get it started again. Now, where I come from, that means that the proper thing to do is use the same idea, not change it into something else. If you wanted something different, or as you put it, "similar," then you should have made one up yourself. I think that most of the original users who were interested in this idea wanted to participate in it.


That was probably my fault for not explicitly stating you should change some of the setting/ooc a little (I just thought that would change). I'm not saying it should absolutely shit on the idea, but maybe switch some things around... or not totally just copy/paste the OOC. I doubt the original three would care that much (They're pretty cool). lol

Trust me kid, these kinds of "reboots" don't last too long.

They, unlike you, who creates enough characters for yourself to outnumber your co-writers and so usurp the role play to manipulate it into your own idea rather than respect the effort of the creators, wanted to write for the idea they were presented with. I see that you are perhaps afraid of the challenge of taking up an idea that is not entirely your own. Collaboration is the spirit of post-by-post style role play afterall. If you're not comfortable with that, you could very well go invest your time in Japanese role playing games featuring characters whose impossible breast/body proportions you've "copy/pasted" into your own cardboard characters.


Okay, this is my favorite paragraph. Just one juicy exaggeration after the other for the sake of an argument (or some kind of weird ad hominem)! Let me say that I'm pretty good friends with the original three GMs, and we talk a lot. I was pretty hype for the roleplay as a whole (Which is why I took the time to write four character sheets and wait for the IC to go up lol). I really don't get your outright contrived "manipulation," or "uncomfortable with other peoples roleplays" come from - well, other than you literally pulling it out yout ass. lol

All I literally did in the last thread was make four characters, and then shitpost (But it was shitposting to keep the OOC alive). But, apparently, it's a crime to make four characters - well, no. It's actually a crime to say anything you don't like.

And hey, if we want to talk about "cardboard characters," then how about you look at Margent (Who's literal only personality traits are that she's a nice girl, and naive).

As for the laziness comment, I didn't see you making any effort to reboot this marvelous idea. I was, and am, interested in seeing how this story, as it is, will unfold. Regardless of what you were expecting, to come and continue to show disrespect to an idea you weren't all that keen on in the first place is a waste of your time. I'd like to tell you about the effort I made to "copy/paste" this rp into a new thread, but that would also be an immense waste of your time. That would certainly help validate my actions, as if I need validation from you. Fortunately unlike you, I don't need validation from someone on the internet.


But, here's the thing, you didn't change anything to the OOC at all. You pretty much just copy/pasted the OOC. Even Zoldyck expressed disappointment in the lack of changes. No matter what you say, putting no effort into just copy/pasting the entire OOC without a single change is lazy. Don't try to say otherwise.

Though, it's amazing that you put more effort into this argument than your "reboot."

P.S. I hope this finds you well. I did not intend to write this in the way that I did, only to meet you with the same courtesy that you met me with. Best of luck.


Honestly, all I was being was a tad blunt, and you write up a whole disproportionate rant like I was actually insulting you or the original roleplay. If anything, you met me with even less "courtesy." lol

But, I still hold no ill-will towards you.

Ultimately, I'll leave my response at this, and won't post on the thread any longer.
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Mr Allen J,
I don't want to trouble you with a mention, as you expressed the sentiment of not posting on this thread any longer. However, my "rant" is still appropriate in my eyes. I was under the impression that I and DarkwolfX37 were interested in carrying out the original idea. I find it disrespectful to change someone's idea around in the first place, no matter how close you are to the creators. It is a fun challenge to write for someone else's idea.
Your backhanded insult (yes I am speaking about the laziness) is not being blunt. It is an insult. If you did not want to participate, all you should have said was that you wouldn't have been continuing.
I have no issue with bluntness, but the fact that you would take it further into name calling is entirely revealing of your character in my eyes. I was willing to be friends, or at least acquaintances, with you, as you can see from our previous discussions. When you suggested that I was lazy, I will admit, I got angry. I still consider it to be a considerable insult to my character.
As for your characters, I know exactly where it came from within me, I just don't know what let it out. Please accept my apology for my insult to that. Jokingly, I will add, what is happening with their proportions tho? Sorry, that was also uncalled for. But woah man.
I'm leaving my response at this, but feel free to PM if you would still like to discuss.

Sincerely,
Discord
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Mr Allen J,
I don't want to trouble you with a mention, as you expressed the sentiment of not posting on this thread any longer. However, my "rant" is still appropriate in my eyes. I was under the impression that I and DarkwolfX37 were interested in carrying out the original idea. I find it disrespectful to change someone's idea around in the first place, no matter how close you are to the creators. It is a fun challenge to write for someone else's idea.
Your backhanded insult (yes I am speaking about the laziness) is not being blunt. It is an insult. If you did not want to participate, all you should have said was that you wouldn't have been continuing.
I have no issue with bluntness, but the fact that you would take it further into name calling is entirely revealing of your character in my eyes. I was willing to be friends, or at least acquaintances, with you, as you can see from our previous discussions. When you suggested that I was lazy, I will admit, I got angry. I still consider it to be a considerable insult to my character.
As for your characters, I know exactly where it came from within me, I just don't know what let it out. Please accept my apology for my insult to that. Jokingly, I will add, what is happening with their proportions tho? Sorry, that was also uncalled for. But woah man.
I'm leaving my response at this, but feel free to PM if you would still like to discuss.

Sincerely,
Discord


Speaking of, have the others from the old thread been contacted yet?
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@DarkwolfX37 Not yet. I'm going to do that right now. Thank you for reminding me.

EDIT: Alright! Everyone has been notified. :) I hope this goes well this time.
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@Treue I like what you've got so far. :)
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Danke Thank you. I still need to do the personality, talents, maybe more quirks. ^-^
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Now just Quirks I think. And remember that those powers would be evolving over time as he learns better control over them. Upon Alexander learning a new skill or overcoming a drawback, the sheet will be updated. Empathy is a very widespread ability. This is what I'm talking about, except without the direct influence or control over anyone else.

Anyway, how many people do we have with us? I'm assuming you're all using characters from the original go?
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I'm going to use mine. As far as anyone else, they can make new characters or use the ones they made from the original go. It's up to them. :)
I'm not sure how many we have with us at this moment. We currently have four, maybe five people. I've contacted everyone who was interested originally, so we'll have to see what the rest of them say.
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Ok, cool. Can't wait to see the cast.
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i'm severely unsettled by the confrontation at the beginning but here i am~
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Eh, what is life but a series of confrontations?
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Eh, what is life but a series of confrontations?


to me, life is a depressing thing i want to end. ♥
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Hey, I know those feels. Just try getting through each day. It doesn't get much easier, I know, but I bet you'll be fine if I am.
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I'm sorry about all of that. I wish I could go back and stop it. I don't know what to say other than that. I'm really sorry.
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