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@Dirty Dan Yes, they are. Also, Genin only have one Chakra nature.

But, Senju have the Wood Release KG, which is Earth and Water so it works. Just remember to keep within the rules.
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It was more geared towards the Wood Release Kekkei Genkai, which utilizes both Earth and Water release. Although, if that isn't allowed, I will easily take it out.
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@Dirty Dan I just edited what I said as I immediately realized the Wood Release xD.
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Yep I am on my way to post my CS.
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@Dirty Dan I just edited what I said as I immediately realized the Wood Release xD.


Hah, I see.

So, my character is basically done, other than his personality and history - which I will get to tomorrow.
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I will give a review of it once it is 100% complete!
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WIP...snoogins...Still WIP..but getting close...its going well!
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Tetsuo is finished.

Edit: Hold that thought. Couple things I need to fix.

Alright, now I'm good.
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@Masaki Haruna A few things;

1. As I stated in the Interest Check, a character from Kiri would be either killed, or arrested on sight. So no, you can't be from Kiri. Be born in Konohagakure, please.

2. Summoning arrows using Chakra is very similar to the Chakra arrows technique, which is a B ranked. Meaning you will have to wait until chuunin to be able to do it.

3. Body Flicker cannot be used in combat cause it is OP. This applies to everybody (I believe Dirty Dan had it in his).

4. I'd like to know why an untrained genin was able to defeat bears in a flash, then wound up passed out. Exactly why. It sounds a little OP.

5. Please take the CS more seriously. Sorry, but 'doesn't undertsand things like porn' in a universe without computers or the internet makes no sense. 'Hakuna Matata' is a saying from a disney movie which doesn't exist. 'Swing schwing swang' is not an acceptable Skill/Abiltiy. 'Weird to Infinity and Beyond!' is a personality trait, not a Skill or an Ability. If you want a reference, please look to Ryu's CS. Please take this more seriously. Else you come off as a joke character simultaneously trying to stress how much of a badass you are. Which just reads 'I wanna be special snowflake like Sasuke.'

So I am going to ask you to please fix those, and take it more seriously. As of right now, I will have to deny your character sheet until these are fixed.
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@Dirty Dan It looks mostly good, just got two things.

1. As I mentioned before, No Body Flicker in combat. You can have it for out of combat, no problem.

2. I am going to have to say no on the weights. Because body weights really don't improve speed like in the anime. Furthermore, they're a drain on the user and something like that wouldn't be used in the field. I'm sorry, but I must ask you to remove those.

Other than those, you're good to go by me.
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@Dirty Dan It looks mostly good, just got two things.

1. As I mentioned before, No Body Flicker in combat. You can have it for out of combat, no problem.

2. I am going to have to say no on the weights. Because body weights really don't improve speed like in the anime. Furthermore, they're a drain on the user and something like that wouldn't be used in the field. I'm sorry, but I must ask you to remove those.

Other than those, you're good to go by me.


Sounds good to me. The Shunshin isn't used for combat, by the way. It's used for emergencies in day-to-day situations, haha.
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@Dirty Dan Once you've made the changes, let me know and I will give official approval.

Thanks being workable
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No problemo. The changes have been made, my friend.
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@Dirty Dan You are then accepted.

Feel free to paste into the CS bin. You will be placed on Team 4, so go ahead and look through Tomiko's CS if you want an idea about your sensei, and what you might know about her. Roster will be updated shortly.
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Edit: Finished.
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