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Prologue


On an island in the middle of the Pacific Ocean, far off from anything resembling a nation or any semblance of authority, lies a single building made of steel and stone. A heavy contrast to the lush tropical scenery around it, the building stands tall. Before long, a pair of figures begin to approach the building from a road paved with stone. The boat docked at the coast is enough to tell how they got here, but that in and of itself is unimportant.

"Mr. Zelretch, sir, thank you so much for coming to help us with this. As you know, there have been a lot of issues with the quantum mechanics of the device you've helped draft for us, and—" one man, cloaked in a long lab coat that nearly reaches his feet, began to say before being cut off by the older man to his side.

"No need to say any more. I had expected as much, so just show me what you have so far and I should be able to resolve the issue," the older man responded, a somewhat ambiguous expression on his face as the two near the building. Having stopped his rambling, the former knelt down near a small terminal and pressed a sequence of numbers into the device. A few moments later, and the door slid to the side, revealing not the interior of a building, but a solitary stairwell leading deeper into the island.

"After you, sir."

No more words were exchanged as the two slowly made their way down into the building, which was now more apparently a research facility. The area itself was impeccably clean, with only the occasional scientist or worker passing them by. The two continued farther and farther into the base, until they arrive at a hallway with naught but a door emblazoned with a series of magical sigils. Without another word, the man with the lab coat quickly dispelled the seals on the door, which proceeded to slide upwards and out of sight. Before them is what seems to be a large reactor of some sort, and in the center of it all is a small steel circle with a magic circle carved into it.

The older man, Zelretch, nodded without another word and stepped forth, his coat flowing behind him as he looked around—not at the device itself, but around the room. With a sigh, Zelretch massaged his forehead and turned towards the man in the lab coat, who was nervously waiting for the appraisal to come forth.

"The circle is positioned slightly off-center from the leyline that runs through here. I would've thought that you wouldn't have overlooked something so simple," he noted, berating the man beside him before walking forward and shifting the device slightly to the right. Immediately, the circle began to shine, and the man in the lab coat covered his eyes as the light began to cover the entire room. Above that circle, a few more magic circles become visible, showing that the device was constructed from a massive array of magic circles, all layered on top of one another.

"The preparation is complete. Send for the potential Masters now, because I CERTAINLY hope you have been scouting for them across the globe; if we are to have any chance at resolving the crisis ahead of us, we must act quickly."

With an embarrassed face and a hasty "Yes, Mr. Zelretch, sir!", the other man quickly exited the room, leaving only Zelretch and the device. The old man's face, which had been up until then a frown, could now be described as a faint grin.

"Hmhm... I wonder how long it'll take them to finish all of this. If I was in my prime, I could be done in a week—no, less."
With a laugh, Zelretch exited the reactor, leaving the device to continue whirring away.



Plot

This facility, while mostly unassuming, is the location of a device that accurately mimics the abilities of Kischur Zelretch Schweinorg's Second Magic. Built under his supervision, the device itself was built to seek out various singularities that have been appearing in the timeline. The device itself cannot act upon or resolve those singularities, though; it can only create a method by which to reach them.

This is where the Masters come in. While there is no explicit 'Grail War' at the root of the singularities, each one does have a Grail at its core. These Masters are to use the mana present at their current location and summon Servants to aid in retrieving each Grail, at whatever cost necessary. By what means are the Masters chosen?
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Well, that's Zelretch's secret screening process.



Notes

  • Each player must submit both a Servant and a Master form; this information is NOT hidden, given the nature of the RP.
  • The pairings for Masters and Servants are up to you (the players) to decide on. You can opt to play both halves of the duo, or not. Your choice.
  • In regards to alternate classes or versions of a Servant: Only one version of a given Servant may exist at any given point in the timeline, unless stated otherwise (basically NPCs that may or may not appear in the future). No classes outside of the basic 7 are allowed (so no Ruler/Avenger/Saver/Shielder/Etc;). No Alter versions of a character (so sorry all you JAlter fans out there).
  • Be reasonable about Servant abilities. Like... Seriously.
  • Not all Servants have to be pulled from existing Nasuverse lore. They can be, but they don't HAVE to be.
  • No Gil/Karna/etc;-level Servants. Just... Putting that out there.
  • Servants have a very basic knowledge of the situation at hand when summoned to minimize the amount of exposition. They may need clarification or a summary of recent events, but that should be all.


Changes from Iteration 1

  • One Servant and one Master per player, unless I have given permission otherwise. This is to minimize pairing clutter. On that note...
  • Player cap. I feel that running two arcs at once ultimately slowed down the process of both (partially due to my own habit of wanting everyone to post before I did), and so I'm going to try to keep the number of players in the RP lower this time. I think I'll limit the number to... 5 entrants, myself not included. This also means that I'll have a total of six pairs in the RP, which is a reasonable amount to get an arc done in a feasible amount of time (aka not 6 goddamn months to barely get into the first set of arcs)... I think. That leads me to...
  • An actual screening process. I'm not going to be running this as a first-come, first-serve sort of thing; quite the opposite, actually. While I may open slots in between arcs if people drop or spontaneously disappear, I shall not do so otherwise. With that in mind, I want at least the following from anyone aiming to join:
    • Reasonable posting schedule. I'm not asking of anything absurd, like a post every day or something stupid like that (though I expect the posting schedule will be something like that the first few days of rerelease). I AM, however, hoping that something comes out at least once or twice weekly. If something comes up in life that prevents that, let me know and we can work something out. Last time I ran this, there was a giant delay between posts, so I'm hardcapping delays at a week, maximum. Any more than that and I'm going to keep moving, come hell or high water. Writer's block is a thing, and we all hate it, so if a bout of it kicks in, let me know. If you're already in the RP, I can figure out a way to keep your characters in without necessarily removing them. I'll be jumping a few hoops, but I'm here for you just as you are for me... Right?
    • Ability to write coherent posts. Now, I'm not asking that we all be Shakespeare or Hemingway or what have you when writing a post, but I AM asking for posts that make sense within context of the scene, and then in context of the characters in said scene. This should be a non-issue, but let me say that I find no problem in people wanting to write long posts nor do I find fault in short ones. My problem lies in lack of meaning. Take that as you will.
    • Willingness to bring up concerns/ideas/etc;. I'm in this for enjoyment just as much as you are, and I'm learning every time I try something like this. If something seems interesting or I may be limiting people too much, let me know. I may have reason behind my actions, but because that information may not always be conveyed up front, I may seem like I'm deliberately making things unfun. That is never the intent behind my actions. So speak up! OoC, PMs, what have you; don't feel afraid to speak your mind.
    • Commitment. Yes, I know burnout is a thing, but I'd really like if the people who join intend to stick around for... Well, ideally, the entire RP. I don't mind the fact that people drop RPs, but if you are going to, at least give some warning to the people who are still in it. Morale always takes a hit when people leave, and if their status remains a permanent "?", then matters are made even worse.
  • More things to do. I guess my biggest mistake last time was denying players agency at times, or making their stuff feel ineffective. I aim to address that with the arcs in mind (and with things moving faster, maybe it'll feel like less of a slog if that IS the case).


Forms







Let the forms roll in.
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  • Name: Arturia Pendragon
  • Class: Saber
  • Appearance: "Ex..."
  • Abilities:
    • Strength: A
    • Endurance: B
    • Agility: B
    • Mana: A
    • Luck: A+
    • Noble Phantasm: A++
    • Magic Resistance: A
    • Riding: B
    • Charisma: B
    • Instinct: A
    • Prana Burst: A
  • Noble Phantasms:
    • Excalibur - Sword of Promised Victory: An incredibly powerful and holy weapon, a sword that is impossible to break(though this is because it's a Noble Phantasm as well as... being Excalibur). Its most powerful ability is to unleash an immense blast of prana which is capable of killing an immense amount of targets or destroying an entire fortress. She cannot simply repeatedly fire off this this ability, as she lacks Avalon, which gives her a vast amount of prana with which to use for Excalibur. She is also unlikely to use it if there's a risk of collateral damage or killing allies. At most, she could manage one shot per day if there's no risk of collateral damage or killing allies.
      Invisible Air: Invisible Air, which is capable of becoming a sheath that renders her second Noble Phantasm invisible. It can also be used as a projectile.
  • Personality: Saber is strong-willed and stubborn, as well as very brave and utterly determined. She suppresses her emotions in most situations, though social situations often bring out her insecurities. She considers herself as a knight first, before anything else. Saber holds little mercy towards opponents. As the king of knights, she has a strong sense of honor. In spite of this strong personality, Saber can become shy and withdrawn in regular social situations due to the previously mentioned insecurities, and it is not too difficult to fluster her. She has a deep sense of justice, fitting the legendary King of Knights, and acts respectful to honorable and just opponents. Saber has a deep adoration of good food, very eager to eat any that is given to her. For all her regrets, Saber still possesses a strong sense of pride in her kingship and her knighthood, proudly bearing the title of the King of Knights. Even in all her regret, she will never give in on her ideals and never sink below her morals. She is a knight, through and through. ... That being said, regardless of her insistence that she is a knight before anything else, Saber is often a rather silly girl, easily embarrassed by some situations and naturally drawn to depictions of lions.
  • Other: N/A
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@VitaVitaAR: Well, I'm pretty sure I'd be foolish if I didn't give a pass to a form that came from the last time I ran this, especially considering you were a) my co-GM and b) stuck through until it fell last time. So accepted.
Also, have your title back.

Currently contemplating a new Servant idea, though, so yeah. owo;;

I guess I should've also pinged the other people in the interest check here, shouldn't I?
@KoL@CrimsonCastle@Rin@Riegal

And something addressed to other people who may be looking at this: We're still open/accepting. =3=;;
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I'm still very busy with RL stuff and all, for the next week or two, making me unsure if I should join or not. I like the idea and stuck around until the end last time, but having limited time at the moment is a barrier.

If either this takes sometime to launch, or a spot open in the future, I'd be willing to join since I still want to play as Atalanta and, likely a new Master since I know that Lone's not coming this time around.
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@KoL: Given the way things are looking right now, you could probably get away with signing on. I don't think we'll be getting off the ground for a while, if only because I'm trying to decide on a Servant to use.

Contemplating a nerfed Ozymandias but hm...
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Well, if that's the case, I may as well do a CS as soon as I have some free time. While there are other Servants I'd like to try, I guess that I'll really stick to Atalanta, maybe review the way I play her.

As for a master, I don't have much of an idea at the moment, but I'll think of something when I have the time to sit down and do it.
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CS will be up after work later tonight
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Expect something from me towards the weekend, once I'm done with my first week of finals.
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I figure I should check in as well. Having some trouble with both my Servant and Master, which is why it's taking me a while. Have a couple ideas for both but nothing I immediately love, so I'm just working on all of them right now to see if anything clicks for me.
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I figure I should check in as well. Having some trouble with both my Servant and Master, which is why it's taking me a while. Have a couple ideas for both but nothing I immediately love, so I'm just working on all of them right now to see if anything clicks for me.


Servants are easy, unless you are very interested on a yet to be made canon one, just picking a premade, canon Servant that you like is the easiest thing to do since you don't even have to think about stats.

Like I'm pretty much certainly choose Atalanta. I was going to try Nero, but we already have a Saber, so it's no deal to pick the same class twice.
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Man, don't you love it when life is nothing but chaos? =3=;;

But, uh... Yeah, if Atalanta's making a return I'll probably be running Keisuke again as well. As for servants... Yeah, nerfed Ozy seems aout right. I can work with a nerfed Ozy.

Given current trends, we probably won't start for another week or two just because of the lack of forms at the moment though. =w=;;
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I'll have Atalanta ready tomorrow since I pretty much just have to copy and clean the old CS. I'll try to at least begin to scratch a Master too, since I'm unlikely want to use Seyrun without Lone around, despite liking that character too much.

Though, I may use an expy, since I really enjoyed the Rune magic part of her that I developed on the last iteration of this RP.
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Ok, I'll get a Master later. Meanwhile, here's Atalanta:

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@KoL: It probably goes without question that Atalanta's accepted. =w=;;

Speaking of forms... One old and one new. Woohoo!


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Well, I need to sleep so I'll stop staring at this and post it for review. To be honest, I don't even know if the Holy Church is a thing in GO, so there's that haha. Little bit edgier than what I usually do, too, but eh.

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@Riegal: Putting aside how origin's kinda irrelevant in the context of the RP...

I don't... Think that the character needs to be edgy, per se? Semi-serious maybe, but not edgy edgy.

The only question mark that pops up at the moment is the mention of 'heretical humans' there. I'm... Getting an idea as to how to parse that but I'm still kinda unsure as to what that represents.
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Nice, I have enough time before my shift starts to reply. I'll make edits later tonight.

I'll need more of an explanation on why Origins are irrelevant. I haven't read much Type-Moon related stuff in a while, and I don't know Grand Order as well as I know most other TM stuff, so I could be missing something obvious. Because she shows her origin outwardly far more strongly than normal, it's dictated much of her life's path. It's the reason why she's strong enough to be an Executor, as well as being her biggest weakness, so I thought it was worth as much of mention as it got while I was writing her.

The edgy comment was more off-hand and not serious haha. I agree, I don't think she's 'edgy' at all in terms of personality. Just, you know, I feel her backstory qualifies a bit, what with the whole 'seeing my family killed by my possessed father' as well as living the life of an Executor.

I was going for humans that the Church didn't like, basically. I'm imagining most of them being people getting themselves knowingly involved in demon-related activities.
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@Riegal: Irrelevant within the context of the RP as in "this is more a piece of fluff and I likely won't be making use of it so it's kinda superfluous." I mean, if it's something you wanna have in, by all means. =3=;;

But yeah, with that clarified I'd say she's good to go. =w=;;
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Thanks! That makes sense, that's totally fine. I'll leave it in if only to give other players insight on her since it's pretty much completely shaped her personality.

Aaand here's a Servant for review. Still haven't been able to come up with an original I liked, so I finally just went back through the list of canon servants and decided good old Jekyll would be fun enough.

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@Riegal: I see no problems with Jekyll, so he's good to go.

Hm... I guess I should start planning more stuff now...
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