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Our collab has gotten pretty long and we don't want you left out at all.
We want you to be informed even of things that don't pertain to you as they go on.
But at this current moment, there are things that you can react to that will enhance the experience that you can have in this roleplay.

I can say for all of us that we implore you to join the Discord server for this RP so we don't lose you to convoluted and spiraling collaborative messes.

Do it now ... .. ........

Joim it,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,
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Alright some changes have been made to bloodlines. Mostly that a full blooded Tyro is now available.
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Currency:
Bronze 1 = 1 (Our base line)
Silver 1 = 5
Gold 1 = 10
Ruby 1 = 25
Sapphire 1 = 35
Emerald 1 = 45
Diamond 1 = 60

[color=972E18]Bronze[/color]
[color=AAAAAA]Silver[/color]
[color=EA9B09]Gold[/color]
[color=EA0913]Ruby[/color]
[color=0F3DB8]Sapphire[/color]
[color=0CAB04]Emerald[/color]
[color=99F3FF]Diamond[/color]
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Only rooms going to be left is two twins.
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Yeah, once I get home, I will join the discord. I do occasionally get bogged down in the multi-page posts.
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ONE OF US! ONE OF US! ONE OF US!
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Generic supplies - 5 Copper
Generic clothes - 5 Copper
Generic armor - 10 Copper
Generic potions (+20 Stamina +20 Soul) - 15 Copper
Generic potions .2 (+30 Stamina +30 Soul) - 25 Copper
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Interested, may I know if its still open ~ ?
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I remember you. Yes it's still open. Look over the bloodlines as there are some new openings.
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Took longer than I should've from busy weekends, but worked out a CS


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Really like the idea for her skills. She seems to be incredibly interesting and unique regarding her fighting style, It would be really interesting if you described it a bit better and expanded on it. I really enjoy her usage of illusions (especially the invisible flames) and invisibility. Maybe describe how exactly she uses them in a combat situation, their limitations & possible applications.

At the same time, I would like to read and know a bit more about her in general. Her backstory (from where she came, who exactly she is), her personality, her appearance, her experience or training.

Tell us more about her!

I can see her being a really interesting character but I would ask you to be more descriptive on her CS and write more about her.

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@Noodles Great concept. But the information is feeling pretty bare bones. I'll make a list.

1. Physique needs a bit more specific details. Like her height can be more than just "She's tall", how tall is she really? Everyone else's CS tells their height and or weight. Along with any more specific details would be appreciated.
2. For abilities please list them off with a name for the ability. Such as "Paperworker: Ast is good at doing paperwork. Her reports are often clear and concise. She has a good listening ear to current affairs."
3. "Illusions" Needs more detail. What kind of beasts can they summon illusions of? Why or how does it work on the undead? Same with "Flaming Rods" What is the distance it can be cost, how hot does it get, what does it do exactly?
4. Experience Is more than a brief detail of what your character did to begin their journey to learning what they know. I need to know what they did to learn such spells, and or abilities. So what kind of training did she undergo to learn her spells? What did she do to learn her abilities?
5. Motivation, why does she want to learn about ancient magic? Why does she have her motivation?
6. Birthplace is Vrondi. You got a typo.
7. For extra info you might want to add "History" to it and fill it out with your characters past story.

Thanks you're almost there! ^-^
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@Noodles A good suggestion for you would be to gauge your CS by looking at our CS's. It'll be a good way for you to get a feel for how to build your character and get something more fleshed out. Cool concept though!
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@Noodles oooo I like it a lot! like what the others said, its a great backbone for a cs, with just a tiny bit more to add! If you need any help, or want suggestions or have questions at all, don't be afraid to ask!
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Was a bit messy job, but fleshed out on the CS. Do let me know if there's anything I missed :X
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Very good! It's accepted! ^-^ Now join the Discord or you may miss out on some neat collabs. ;P
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Things will affect your characters body. But none more important than their physical stamina and their souls essence. Both mysteriously combine yet separate allowing a multitude of abilities and spells to be used. One is of the flesh, another is supernatural, linked to the heart and blood. This is your characters core levels.

Stamina:
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