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Well what better to follow up a half-demon than an angel, right?

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Well what better to follow up a half-demon than an angel, right?



Great application! The only thing I can say is that Viridi's link is broken. Accepted!
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Dang links, thought I caught it. Thank you though!
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I've been lurking for a bit and then talked to Zoey, who shilled about how awesome this RP is. So I decided to write up a character submission to see if I could get involved, too. I'm sure adjustments might have to be made, but Zoey was really cool and tried to steer me in the right direction, so hopefully it's not in need of too much revision. I left his ability without a cooldown time simply because I wanted your opinion on what it should be, instead of me just spitballing a time or defaulting to what it is in his game. (For reference, though, it's cooldown is 15 seconds in-game)



Hope he looks somewhat fun, I honestly like the character mainly for his personality and I think I can possibly work in more of his cloaking-type abilities for more trickery and tomfoolery later. Or perhaps add a whole new layer through spirits, when that time comes.

Again, super willing to try and work through any issues. If he seems like a problem in general I can try to go for something else, too. Thank you for your consideration :3
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@Lugubrious

I've been lurking for a bit and then talked to Zoey, who shilled about how awesome this RP is. So I decided to write up a character submission to see if I could get involved, too. I'm sure adjustments might have to be made, but Zoey was really cool and tried to steer me in the right direction, so hopefully it's not in need of too much revision. I left his ability without a cooldown time simply because I wanted your opinion on what it should be, instead of me just spitballing a time or defaulting to what it is in his game. (For reference, though, it's cooldown is 15 seconds in-game)



Hope he looks somewhat fun, I honestly like the character mainly for his personality and I think I can possibly work in more of his cloaking-type abilities for more trickery and tomfoolery later. Or perhaps add a whole new layer through spirits, when that time comes.

Again, super willing to try and work through any issues. If he seems like a problem in general I can try to go for something else, too. Thank you for your consideration :3


Hey there! I'm glad this RP caught your interest. The application overall looks quite good, with just a couple points.

The first is that Galeem's attack annihilated everything, not just the PCs. Every other contestant, audience member, civilian, etc in the game and indeed world in which he disappeared would also be gone. As for abilities, including the fifteen second cooldown on his hologram would be alright, since more details are better. Spacing it appropriately IC should be pretty easy. I'd be willing to have Fall Damage Immunity just be an effect of his equipment rather than a Strength, as Strengths are typically more stats, quirks, or skills than passives or equipment-related unless there's nothing else to draw Strength from. Maybe a generalist weapons proficiency instead, given his ability to pick up and use a whole host of different firearms skillfully in-game?

The only other thing I could say is that Kindred Spirits don't actually need to be related to the character. If that's what you want you can do it of course, but since its just a method of ensuring the specified characters will appear eventually, you can also choose characters whose spirits you might want for Mirage or who would have a neat dynamic with him.
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I have gone ahead and made some edits, which I'll include below for convenience. Hopefully it clears up the issues!

For my Kindred Spirits, I might be thinking a little too inside the box. But I did change one of them for the moment, maybe it's a bit more interesting than the previous choice.

EDIT: Zoey informed me that Zer0 is a character that's already out of commission here. So for now, I'm going to just leave Pathfinder as my only Kindred Spirit.



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I have gone ahead and made some edits, which I'll include below for convenience. Hopefully it clears up the issues!

For my Kindred Spirits, I might be thinking a little too inside the box. But I did change one of them for the moment, maybe it's a bit more interesting than the previous choice.

EDIT: Zoey informed me that Zer0 is a character that's already out of commission here. So for now, I'm going to just leave Pathfinder as my only Kindred Spirit.



Seems good! Sorry about Zer0, although if there's a different version of Zer0 that exists you could use that version instead. You can also adjust your kindred spirits as they come to you until one appears in the story. Go ahead and put Mirage in the characters tab and I'll PM you about an entry point!
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Never mind, it was a mistake.
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I'm working on a post for Harlie & Frog. Just a heads up everyone.
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Alrighty I'm done. I didn't do anything, that would change combat. I'll post Frog's IC after the next GM post. And if Laharl's reaction seems wrong to you, I assure you it is right because he's a brat who thrives off of attention.
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Submitting for inspection.



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Seems good to me! The first two kindred spirit links are broken, but the application is approved.
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I forget that just because they work for me doesn't mean they work for everyone else.
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I have an important question. I have acquired big hands.

May I throw you back onto the ship?
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I have an important question. I have acquired big hands.

May I throw you back onto the ship?

Absolutely

Since you only got two big hands, if you have to pick and choose I think Cadet could get back alright on his own, but I won't turn down getting tossed either, would be fun.
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I have an important question. I have acquired big hands.

May I throw you back onto the ship?


Blazermate defenetly needs the help, shes just slowly sinking.
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@Gentlemanvaultboy I guess you didn't need saving, lol.

EDIT: Throw Glenn.
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Can I haz Goliath strikers?
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I'm going to have the little brat grab one or both, but wanted to ask if anyone has a problem with that.
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Tora would have been interested in one as a potential Mech Arms upgrade if he'd been fully cognizant, but he fell asleep before he could claim one, that's a pass from my characters.
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