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Interesting! your powerset could lead to some interesting traps or a fun way to sneak around. I have a feeling he and my own character will have some things in common, but there's more than enough different to not have to worry.

Accepted!
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for a strange second i misread "pocket bandana" as "pocket banana" and was very confused for a moment.
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and Fringe, my own character, is up!
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*awkward face*
So I was planning on making a person loosely based on gwenom.
Apparently I wasn’t the only one with Spider-Man on my brain lately
It’s kinda like this

Mixed with this
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Hey new to the site, figured I'd get my feet wet with a superpower game. Below is my character sheet.

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@Athol
Suggested alias, Aether. Also, welcome!

Or Doc.

Or Professor.
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@Jareththis is a really interesting character you have set up here. I want to see more of them, and the challenges that come up for writing a character like this seem interesting. I really dig the astral projection power, since it keeps them in the action without having to interact as much. accepted.
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@Athol
Suggested alias, Aether. Also, welcome!

Or Doc.

Or Professor.


aetheritis
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unicorgi I don’t have discord

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@Athol
Suggested alias, Aether. Also, welcome!

Or Doc.

Or Professor.

smartatoid aetheritis
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unicorgi I don’t have discord

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also ill hopefully get my cs up by tonight (eastern time)
ive finally got my character all figured out and shes definitely in the top ten of my favorite characters i have every created (all non roleplay characters included and that's a lot)
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@unicorgi let me guess, her name is Namine Smith?
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hahahahahahahahaha

no

why would I give different characters the same name? it doesn't even fit my character for this roleplay!
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this probably sucks and is full of grammar issues but here I go!


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this probably sucks and is full of grammar issues but here I go!

hehehe
have fun finding my character sheet



Bro, this many hiders is not only unecessary, it's also a surefire way to get booted from a roleplay and labeled a troll.
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ok then

i literally only did that to see if i could

all fixed

thnx for telling before i got in trouble :P
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@unicorgiAfter a bit of debate and looking over your cs, while your character is certainly interesting, they're just not what I'm looking for here. With your character being in the mix, that would make a third techie without a lot to differ them from David in terms of unsuited skills.

The use of camouflage and minor shapeshifting is pretty cool, but its the backstory that kind of sets me off.Also, the spider motif is something I'm really shaky on since I'm already doing that for Fringe. Would you mind working at your CS a little more before I say yes or no? It's got potential, but could you work on it to make them more different than the other accepted characters?
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After reading unicorgi's sheet, I'm now tempted to make a character with abilities similar to Alex Mercer's...
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What exactly do I need to change? (I get confused with vague instructions)
I’ll change whatever is needed
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For starters, having two characters having powers originated from Aprico’s tests seems like a little much, especially given how close they resemble one another. Maybe expand a little more on the Venom side and less on the spider side? Maybe her power from The Boom wasn’t discovered until she got hit with a stray bullet from a stolen prototype weapon?

As for skills and unsuited skills, anything not science related? She seems pretty athletic, so maybe dive deeper down that route?

I don’t want to tell you how to make your character so they’ll fit in, otherwise I’d just write them myself, but I want to help you get an idea to help make them stand out among other similar characters
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Oooh this looks great! :D I'll try to get a CS in here sometime within the next 2 days.
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