Hidden 2 mos ago Post by Calle
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Welcome to the Voting and Feedback round for MFP#4!


Voting and Feedback guidelines

  • Please take your time to read through all the entries before voting for your favourite work. The reasons you base your vote on are up to you, as long the vote isn’t based on whether or not you like the author.
    It would be nice if you could share why you voted for a specific work.
  • Giving feedback is optional but highly encouraged. When giving feedback you should be respectful and constructive. It’s good to point out any flaws or the things you feel could be improved or why you didn't like something, but don’t be mean.
    Make sure to point out what you liked or what appreciated in the entry too.
  • Contestant may (and are encouraged to) vote and/or give feedback for the other entries but shouldn’t vote for their own entry. If contestants wish to withhold a vote and only give feedback, that is good too.
  • The entries are anonymous unless the writer asked for having their name added. That being said, writers may claim their work at any time during or after the voting period.
  • The entry with the most votes will win, but in case of a tie a Contest Mod will cast the tie-breaker vote.
  • You can vote for entries and post your feedback in this thread, but if you rather have your vote and/or feedback be anonymous you can PM it to @Calle.
  • The voting period deadline is March 2nd, 9:00 CET, which is 8:00 game time (both times are in a.m.).





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Hidden 2 mos ago Post by Kenshi
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Kenshi

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Haiku for the ox
Hidden 2 mos ago Post by Dark Cloud
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Dark Cloud When the spaghetti is done just right.

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Vote for: Dew
Hidden 2 mos ago Post by Salenea
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Salenea Gatewatcher

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My vote goes to: The Pride of the Ox or Stolen Oxygen or Lament for a Friend

awesome poetry, just amazing.
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Hidden 2 mos ago Post by Calle
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Last day of voting!
Hidden 2 mos ago Post by Shovel
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Shovel A Shovel is typing!

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I would like to vote for Haiku for the Ox
Hidden 2 mos ago Post by Fiscbryne
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My vote goes to “Haiku for the Ox.” It’s short but has a motion to it and the implicit image of turning over soil works well for the piece.

As for the others, I enjoy the strong language in “The Pride of the Ox,” especially the energetic line, “Jugular spilt a spew.” I do think, however, that the line is perhaps a little short in a way that can hurt comprehension and not leave enough room for the words to really breathe as much as they deserve to. In regards to “Dew,” I like the whimsy but I think that it would have been improved by seeing a little more of the grass growing wild before being eaten.
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Hidden 2 mos ago Post by Calle
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With 3 votes the Haiku for the ox is the winner. Congratulations! Your entry will be added to our hall of fame.

I do want to give a special mention to The Pride of the Ox or Stolen Oxygen or Lament for a Friend, for the originality and creativity shown.

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Hidden 2 mos ago Post by Kassarock
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Kassarock I had a fancy colour one of these, then RPG died

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Aye thanks for the votes everyone! Shout out to the other entrants, this was a strong contest!
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