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That is an amazing series, but if you're talking about the , it won't be like that. I was just thinking of a material that had an anti-magic field of its own that prevented magic when worn by a mage. Guardians aren't a thing in the other land, so there isn't another way to deal with those who can use magic.


The material could undergo a process similar to how guardians are created in the Five Kingdoms, except in a more rudimentary form. Kind of like the basic technology leading to a greater technology.
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First half of Edessa/Ilayna's bio is amended, now I have to fill in the "what she did from age eight to age twenty-four" blanks and design narrative after that.

Originally my idea was to group up (somehow) with the people in Valaria/Valeal before going into the Gorgon plot stuff, but I'm not sure how tangible that is. Feel free to workshop/suggest stuff to help me there. I'll be working on the rest of the bio right now.
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@Brand: So you're saying that the material should be made in a similar to process to what turns a mage into a guardian? I was thinking that it would just be an inherent property of that metal, which is rather rare, but I could definitely see it being the other way.

Also, is constructs always its own form of magic, or does that vary? I'm asking because I know that Saltwater's character has Hydromancy and Constructs, while Headphones character has Hydromancy and Aeromancy, but can make water constructs.

EDIT: Where would be the easiest location to set my second character? I'm thinking the coast of Valaria as opposed to Gorgon because Ink and I are sort of planning to collab there, and I would like to keep my characters separate.
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EDIT: Where would be the easiest location to set my second character? I'm thinking the coast of Valaria as opposed to Gorgon because Ink and I are sort of planning to collab there, and I would like to keep my characters separate.


Well, I don't have shitall planned for what Edessa will be doing (like I said Blackwater nonsense may come to her later, but for now she's pretty much distant from that conflict).
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First half of Edessa/Ilayna's bio is amended, now I have to fill in the "what she did from age eight to age twenty-four" blanks and design narrative after that. Originally my idea was to group up (somehow) with the people in Valaria/Valeal before going into the Gorgon plot stuff, but I'm not sure how tangible that is. Feel free to workshop/suggest stuff to help me there. I'll be working on the rest of the bio right now.


The rumors going around that the Blackwaters are planning to retake the throne are just that, rumors. Likely started by the Blackwater supporters, there are many. Although there are a great deal of disgruntled nobles in Gorgon who want the Brairs taken off the throne, there isn't really much unification amung them, because no one agrees who should be the king among them. When they hear news that a child of Arthur Blackwater is still alive, they would likely rally together to put a Blackwater back on the throne. Although Lucien is technically the heir, the fact that he betrayed his kingdom means no one wants to see him on the throne. Which could raise some interesting angles with him possibly trying to start a faction, maybe mostly mercenaries, to reclaim the throne. That however would require a great deal of money which he doesn't have.

You're character, despite being a female, is still a Blackwater. The disgruntled Gorgon lords would probably rather see a woman on the throne then a Briar, but more then that they would probably try to wed themselves to you, which would give their House a claim on the throne. My recommendation would be to play out either the Valeal / Valaria storyline for a while, while subtly leaving a papertrail of your lineage. That way when someone puts the clues together and discovers a Blackwater is still alive, the news will reach Gorgon and a hunt will likely begin between the Briars and the Blackwater Loyalists to see who can get to the claimant first.
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You're character, despite being a female, is still a Blackwater. The disgruntled Gorgon lords would probably rather see a woman on the throne then a Briar, but more then that they would probably try to wed themselves to you, which would give their House a claim on the throne. My recommendation would be to play out either the Valeal / Valaria storyline for a while, while subtly leaving a papertrail of your lineage. That way when someone puts the clues together and discovers a Blackwater is still alive, the news will reach Gorgon and a hunt will likely begin between the Briars and the Blackwater Loyalists to see who can get to the claimant first.


Yeah, that's what I was thinking. I'm not sure how I'm going to do the snippets of a papertrail but perhaps my co-writers and yourself will have some interesting suggestions for that. Right now, it's getting her into the Valeal/Valaria arc stuff.
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@Brand: So you're saying that the material should be made in a similar to process to what turns a mage into a guardian? I was thinking that it would just be an inherent property of that metal, which is rather rare, but I could definitely see it being the other way.Also, is constructs always its own form of magic, or does that vary? I'm asking because I know that Saltwater's character has Hydromancy and Constructs, while Headphones character has Hydromancy and Aeromancy, but can make water constructs.EDIT: Where would be the easiest location to set my second character? I'm thinking the coast of Valaria as opposed to Gorgon because Ink and I are sort of planning to collab there, and I would like to keep my characters separate.


EDIT: I think Headphones said he could make a water serpent from his Hydromancy, correct? Technically a elementalist could still make some form of entity out of their powers, but that entity won't have a mind of it's own. Ie. he can make a water serpent but the serpent won't be able to act independently of the casters actions. A good way to look at constructs is it essentially allows you to create a kind of NPC 'pet'.

EDIT: Nvm, yeah he wrote water constructs. That needs to be changed.
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Yeah, that's what I was thinking. I'm not sure how I'm going to do the snippets of a papertrail but perhaps my co-writers and yourself will have some interesting suggestions for that. Right now, it's getting her into the Valeal/Valaria arc stuff.


When I wrote the first IC i wrote a 'post' dedicated to each player. For you new-comers I could do the same if you'd like.
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Hopefully that addresses all of the issues. I'll have to find a good picture later, however.
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Brand said
EDIT: I think Headphones said he could make a water serpent from his Hydromancy, correct? Technically a elementalist could still make some form of entity out of their powers, but that entity won't have a mind of it's own. Ie. he can make a water serpent but the serpent won't be able to act independently of the casters actions. A good way to look at constructs is it essentially allows you to create a kind of NPC 'pet'.EDIT: Nvm, yeah he wrote water constructs. That needs to be changed.


Ah, so that's how it is. Was wondering about that, thanks.
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Headphones said By the way, I failed to mention this in the past, but Free Faller needs to edit their sheet, because they have made several inaccuracies, one of which is that they mention that the war lasted five years, when it was actually ten. They need to either put the dates of Tegan's training, Tower entrance and graduation in the sheet or tell us, so we can put them on the timeline.Also, could these be of use?


I'm a female, just to avoid that ambiguous "they," lol. But the five years in my bio refers specifically to when the war was in Ferros. Since she fought solely for and in Ferros, her "war" was only the last five years of the whole thing in total. It states in the bio that she didn't go off to war until Malfear entered Ferros, so her time line makes sense.

She left for the tower a few months after the conclusion of the war, so twelve years ago, and would have graduated and become a full-fledged Guardian five years later, so eight years ago.

Also, I should get a post up sometime later tonight.
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Also just edited my CS again, bio is pretty much done I think unless suggestions deem it necessary to edit it again.
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@Raven, your character bio looks good, however do you have any idea how your character could get herself involved in the current conflicts? I would rather players know how their characters will be involved in the political mechanics of the world.


Missed this the first time around >.>

She'd probably be helping the People's Army gather intelligence, and helping them sabotage or undermine the opposition. I was hoping to expound more on it in the RP itself but if you want me to include some of it in the CS, I can do that
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Missed this the first time around >.>She'd probably be helping the People's Army gather intelligence, and helping them sabotage or undermine the opposition. I was hoping to expound more on it in the RP itself but if you want me to include some of it in the CS, I can do that


as long as you know which direction you want to take, you can save it for the IC.

Reading your revised CS tali
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I suppose I’m ready to get involved in whatever, whenever – I guess. My CS is up-to-date and seems I’m approved to post ICly, though I’m not sure how I’m going to get the engine running per ce. I think you suggested a “dedicated post” or something for people to springboard off of? I guess I’d like to figure out what other characters I’ll likely be running into and how best to communicate with those players? I don’t know. Maybe I will figure something out.

But with all of that said, I hope the new profile is up to spunk and all that.
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When they hear news that a child of Arthur Blackwater is still alive, they would likely rally together to put a Blackwater back on the throne. Although Lucien is technically the heir, the fact that he betrayed his kingdom means no one wants to see him on the throne. Which could raise some interesting angles with him possibly trying to start a faction, maybe mostly mercenaries, to reclaim the throne. That however would require a great deal of money which he doesn't have.


I figured no one would automatically know he betrayed him, and would just think he died. When they see he'd alive, I figured he would lie about it and make up some sort of story about beung captured or whatnot. Of course the story would fall apart as soon as he used Necromancy, which he might be careful to avoid around certain people at first.
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I take it I have the go ahead to post?
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I take it I have the go ahead to post?


Yes.
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Alright I'll get it done in the next few hours :)
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Hopefully that addresses all of the issues. I'll have to find a good picture later, however.


It does.
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