[OOC] The Duel Tower: The first year students. (A Yu-Gi-Oh! Duel Academy Roleplay.) [Axed]

[Ammokkx]

@Ammokkxa lot of japan up in this RP. i mean there is a ninja, there is a samurai, there is now a japanese princess

oh and btw Hayato and Hayate are from a japanese origin

@Satoshi Kyou

Motherfucker, they are not. I've TOLD you not to introduce headcannons after the fact, so you're not going to do so. Whatever they are, it's unknown and we're keeping it that way.

[Satoshi Kyou]

@Ammokkxok then. i knew i forgot something well im keeping them generic then

[Ammokkx]

@Satoshi Kyou You shouldn't leave, but we made an agreement and you should stick to it. I like people who like their characters, but there's something like going overboard as well and it is a major pet peeve of mine. I didn't mean anything bad with saying they should stay generic, maybe put it a bit harsh, but I'm trying to both make you better at this whole thing and not have to pull my hair out at the same time

[Satoshi Kyou]

@Ammokkxright in a way i thought their names would be a giveaway of their nationality.
though all i wanted to say that their nationality was japanese.
is that such a huge deal to you? a change that doesnt really make a slight difference in any way possible (the only difference that there would be is that there would be the word Japanese in their history and that's it)

sigh if all i ever end up doing is piss people off why am i then still in this rp.
because honestly i think my way of thinking is horrible. i mean i get that names can be from any country but in the world of yu-gi-oh! characters with japanese names are generally from japan
my way of thinking is just horrible alright

if i did mention they were japanese my way of playing them wouldnt be much different all i would do with that is they would be seen as a japanese person and nothing else they'll talk just the same way. im taking myself as that core-example. im chinese and i don't behave like i am chinese

[The Red Seelie]

-_- I like how nobody except Ammokkx ever gives opinions on my cards.

Big Ben is sad.

[Satoshi Kyou]

@1Charak2i would give my opinions. but you know... im not too into yu-gi-oh as of late

[Shiny Keldeo]

@Ammokkx Made the changes

[Shiny Keldeo]

Just found out Pot of Avarice is restricted now -_-

[The Red Seelie]

@1Charak2i would give my opinions. but you know... im not too into yu-gi-oh as of late

@Satoshi Kyou

meh all opinions are welcome regardless of knowledge. like if the concept is cool

[Satoshi Kyou]

@1Charak2from my perspective im biased with all counter based archtypes so i think its a near concept. works with clocks and stuff

[vancexentan]

Alright then for future posts I'll make Andre's posts a brighter red. I went for the dark because i figured it fit his attitude better.

[Satoshi Kyou]

@vancexentanthanks... im asking due to the black background making it really really hard to read

[Ammokkx]

@Shiny Keldeo

*RECORD NEEDLE SCRATCH*

I just realized we haven't actually gotten Notice yet and won't get it for at least another month. For all intents and purposes that's still an OCG card. Replace with Warning plz.

There's actually a trap similar to pot of avarice you can replace it with, Jar of avarice. Just replace it with that and you should be good to go. If you've made thise change, head on over and join the thread.

[Satoshi Kyou]

@Ammokkxon another note... now i look at Hayate's replaced card... she is now down one spell card does that matter too much or not? (no im not asking if i can exchange the card im just asking if it matters)

[Ammokkx]

Wording may be off BUT HERE have a archetype

Name: Clockwork, Magi
Level: 3
Attribute: Earth
Monster Type(s): Machine/Effect
Effect: When this card is normal or special summoned place 1 Countdown counter on it.
During each of your standby phases if this card has countdown counter(s) on it, remove one
If this card has no Countdown counters on it, it gains the following effect
This card cannot be targeted by Spell or Trap cards
ATK/DEF 1400/800

Name: Clockwork, Hound
Level:2
Attribute: Earth
Monster Type(s): Machine/Effect
Effect:
When this card is Normal or Special Summoned place 1 Countdown counter on it, During each of your standby phases if this card has countdown counter(s) on it, remove one
if this card has no Countdown counters on it, it gains the following effect.
When this card is destroyed by battle, target one card your opponent controls return it to their hand then you can special summon One Clockwork, Hound from your hand or deck.

Name: Clockwork, Cogmasters Apprentice
Level: 2
Attribute: Earth
Monster Type(s): Machine/Effect
Effect: When this card is Normal or Special Summoned place 1 Countdown counter on it, During each of your standby phases if this card has countdown counter(s) on it, remove one
if this card has no Countdown counters on it, it gains the following effect.
Reduce the level of all "Clockwork" monsters in your hand by 1
ATK/DEF 700/1000

ATK/DEF 1000/700

Name: Clockwork, Winding Key
Level:1
Attribute: Earth
Monster Type(s): Machine/Effect
Effect:During each of your standby phases if this card has countdown counter(s) on it, remove one
if this card has no Countdown counters on it, it gains the following effect.
You can move one Countdown counter from one of your Clockwork monsters you control, to another clockwork monster you control.

ATK/DEF 300/300

Name:Clockwork Longhand
Level: 4
Attribute: Earth
Monster Type(s): Machine/Effect
Effect:When this card is Normal or Special Summoned place 1 Countdown counter on it, During each of your standby phases if this card has countdown counter(s) on it, remove one
if this card has no Countdown counters on it, it gains the following effect.
This card cannot attack

ATK/DEF 2100/500

Name: Clockwork Shorthand
Level: 4
Attribute: Earth
Monster Type(s): Machine/Effect
Effect:When this card is Normal or Special Summoned place 1 Countdown counter on it, and change it to defense position.
During each of your standby phases if this card has countdown counter(s) on it, remove one if this card has no Countdown counters on it, it gains the following effect.
Your opponent cannot target other monsters you control for attacks

ATK/DEF 500/2100

Name: Clockwork Butler
Level/rank:5
Attribute: Earth
Monster Type(s): Machine/Effect
Effect:When this card is Normal or Special Summoned place 1 Countdown counter on it, During each of your standby phases if this card has countdown counter(s) on it, remove one
if this card has no Countdown counters on it, it gains the following effect.
during your main phase, draw 1 card then place 2 Countdown counters on this card.
ATK/DEF 1700/2000

Name: Clockwork Cogwall
Level/rank:6
Attribute: Earth
Monster Type(s): Machine/Effect
Effect:When this card is Normal or Special Summoned place 2 Countdown counter on it,
and change it to defense position.
During each of your standby phases if this card has countdown counter(s) on it, remove one
if this card has no Countdown counters on it, it gains the following effect.
Once per turn during either players turn, if a "clockwork" monster you control is targeted for a card effect, negate the activation and if you do destroy it
ATK/DEF 100/2500

Name: Clockwork Cogmaster
Level/rank:7
Attribute: Earth
Monster Type(s): Machine/Effect
Effect:When this card is Normal or Special Summoned place 2 Countdown counter on it, During each of your standby phases if this card has countdown counter(s) on it, remove one
if this card has no Countdown counters on it, it gains the following effect.
you can special summon a level 4 or lower Clockwork monster from your graveyard and if you do place 1 Countdown counter on this card.

ATK/DEF 2600/1300

Name: Clockwork King
Level/rank:8
Attribute: Earth
Monster Type(s): Machine/Effect
Effect:When this card is Normal or Special Summoned place 3 Countdown counter on it, During each of your standby phases if this card has countdown counter(s) on it, remove one
if this card has no Countdown counters on it, it gains the following effect.
Your opponent can only activate one card effect a turn. During your opponents end-phase add two countdown counters to this cad.
ATK/DEF 2700/1700

Name: Clockwork Sage
Level/rank:9
Attribute: Earth
Monster Type(s): Machine/Effect
Effect:When this card is Normal or Special Summoned place 3 Countdown counter on it, During each of your standby phases if this card has countdown counter(s) on it, remove one
if this card has no Countdown counters on it, it gains the following effect
During your main phase you can add one spell or trap card from your deck to your hand then add two countdown counters to this card.
ATK/DEF 2600/2000

Name: Clockwork Dragon
Level/rank:10
Attribute: Earth
Monster Type(s): Machine/Effect
Effect:When this card is Normal or Special Summoned place 4 Countdown counter on it, During each of your standby phases if this card has countdown counter(s) on it, remove one
if this card has no Countdown counters on it, it gains the following effect.
Tribute one Clockwork monster you control, this card gains attack points equal to that monsters level x200
ATK/DEF 3000 / 2200

Name: Clockwork, Celesital
Level/rank: 11
Attribute: Earth
Monster Type(s): Machine/Effect
Effect:When this card is Normal or Special Summoned place 4 Countdown counter on it, During each of your standby phases if this card has countdown counter(s) on it, remove one
if this card has no Countdown counters on it, it gains the following effect.
One per turn before you attack you can tribute this card. destroy all cards on your opponents side of the field and if you do, halve the ATK of all monsters you control until the end-phase..
ATK/DEF 3200/ 2000

*limited or Semi Limited*
Name: Legendary Clockwork, Big Ben
Level: 12
Attribute: Earth
Monster Type(s): Machine/Effect
Effect:
This card cannot be normal summoned this card can only be special summoned by the effect of "And The Clock Struck Twelve"
When this card is Special Summoned place 12 Countdown counters on it, During each of your standby phases if this card has countdown counter(s) on it, remove one
if this card has no Countdown counters on it Destroy it at the end-phase.

Once per turn you can remove countdown counters from this card to activate the follow effects depending on the amount you removed
1: Target one monster "Clockwork" Monster you control it cannot be destroyed by battle until your opponents next end-phase
3: Select one Card type, Monster, spell or Trap, this card is unaffected by the selected type's effects until your opponents end-phase
6: Target two cards on the field and destroy them.
9: Switch this card to ATK position and switch its ATK and DEF. Destroy it at the end of your opponents next end-phase
12: Tribute this card, special summon as many "Clockwork" monsters with different names as from your graveyard as you can, Remove them from play during your opponents next end-phase .

ATK/DEF 1000/4000

Spells
Name: Winding the Clock
Spell type:
Effect:
Add one Countdown counter to all Clockwork monsters you control, gain 500 life points for each counter added by this effect.

Name: Clockwork rotation
Spell type: Quick spell
Effect: Return one "Clockwork" monster you control to your hand, special summon one level 4 or lower Clockwork monster in attack position, place 1 additional countdown counter on the new monster.

Name: And The Clock Struck Twelve
Spell type: Normal
Effect: Activate this card if you control 3 face up "Clockwork" Monsters with Countdown counters. Pay half your life points, Tribute 3 face up "Clockwork" Monsters you control then you can special summon 1 "Legendary Clockwork, Big Ben" from your hand or deck.

Name: Time Warp
Spell type: Quick spell
Effect: Activate this card only if you control a Face up Clockwork monster, target one monster your opponant controls and return it to its owners hand.

Name: The Legendary Clocktower
Spell type: Field
Effect:
Once per turn you can select one Face up "clockwork" monster you control and remove up to 2 countdown counters (min 1) from that card. While this card is face up on the field, you can only control "Clockwork" monsters.

Name: The Clockwork Curator
Spell type: Normal
Effect: Discard one "Clockwork" monster from your hand Tribute a face up Clockwork, Cogmasters Apprentice" you control, to special summon one Clockwork, Cogmaster from your hand or deck, you can only activate the effect of this card once per duel.

Traps
Name: Overclocking
Trap type: Normal
Effect: Activate this card only if a "Clockwork" monster you control is targeted for a attack, Place one Countdown counter on the targeted monster. The targeted monster's attack becomes double its original attack until the end-phase

Name: Living On Borrowed Time
Trap type:
Effect: Activate this card only if your opponent declares a direct attack. Negate the attack and Special summon one Clockwork monster from your hand equal or less to the attacking monsters level.

@1Charak2

-Magi iz gud

-Clockwork hound gets 1300/700 and when it special summons another clockwork hound, they place an additional CW counter on them. Otherwise you could very easily have a return loop.

-iz gud

-Das gotta become once per turn, otherwise you could load all counters onto Longhand

-Speaking of which, iz gud

-Yeah, them too.

-Butler iz gud

-Cogwall just sounds funny and I love it. Iz gud.

-Oooooh. Nice one. Iz gud.

-Make it S/T and only one additional counter. Restricting monster effects too would be a little bonkers.

-Iz gud

-"During your Main Phase, if this card has no clockwork counters on it, you can activate the following effect once for as long as "Clockwork Dragon" remains face-up on the field" fixed it

-Hm. Yeah, lessgowiththat

-To activate ONE of the following effects. Otherwise i shudder at the possibilities. Also considering the cost of getting BB out, I feel like they're good at 3.

-Eyyy I like the way you think. Iz gud.

-To special summon or , then special summon? CLarify that one.

-Same as BB, iz gud.

-Activate only if you have a Clockwork monster with no 'Countdown' Counters on it, target one monster your opponent controls and return it to the hand. Then, after this card's activation, place one 'Countdown' Counter on all clockwork monsters you control that do not have a countdown counter on them.

-(The legendary Clocktower) That is one nasty card. I'm going to need a second opinion on this @Scarifar. Also you already have Big Ben as a monster, this seems really awkward if you had both on the field =P

-The once per duel thing aint needed. Iz gud.

-Holy shit the Big Ben or Longhand combos. I love it. Iz gud at 2.

-Hm. Hmmm.... Yeah, @Scarifar I'm needing you on this last one too.

[Ammokkx]

@Ammokkxon another note... now i look at Hayate's replaced card... she is now down one spell card does that matter too much or not? (no im not asking if i can exchange the card im just asking if it matters)

@Satoshi Kyou

It doesn't. Not a hardass like Varionus was on the subject.

[Scarifar]

Shorthand I'm a bit worried about, since you can just set the card and get a 2100 DEF wall monster. Hmm...

Celestial I'm a bit worried about, cuz even without the eff, you can get a 3200 ATK beatstick out.

Overclocking: add 2 counters instead of one. It's far too easy to avoid the one counter drawback.

Time Warp: add 2 counters too. It's turning back time, after all. :P

Legendary Clocktower: removing 2 counters is a bit much. I'd say only remove 1.

Cogmaster: Hmm... adding a single counter after using the effect doesn't do much if it can just remove it next turn.... I suppose some combo could be done with Clock Struck 12 or something.... I dunno.

Hound: it has no ATK or DEF values. Might wanna fix that.

Big Ben: the boss monster of the archetype. Nasty piece of work to go against, but....
Hmm, maybe have Clock Struck 12 to only allow it to be summoned from the deck. That way, Big Ben becomes a dead draw.

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If I haven't mentioned a card in here, that card is probably fine, unless others have objections.

[The Red Seelie]

Alright from what I gathered so far this is what you meant

cards needing further clarification

Name: Living On Borrowed Time
Trap type:
Effect: Activate this card only if your opponent declares a direct attack. Negate the attack and Special summon one Clockwork monster from your hand equal or less to the attacking monsters level.

Cards Changed

Name: Clockwork, Hound
Level:2
Attribute: Earth
Monster Type(s): Machine/Effect
Effect:
When this card is Normal or Special Summoned place 1 Countdown counter on it, During each of your standby phases if this card has countdown counter(s) on it, remove one
if this card has no Countdown counters on it, it gains the following effect.
When this card is destroyed by battle, target one card your opponent controls return it to their hand then you can special summon One Clockwork, Hound from your hand or deck and if you do place 1 additional Countdown counter on the summoned monster.
ATK/DEF 1300/700

Name: Clockwork, Winding Key
Level:1
Attribute: Earth
Monster Type(s): Machine/Effect
Effect:During each of your standby phases if this card has countdown counter(s) on it, remove one
if this card has no Countdown counters on it, it gains the following effect.
Once per turn you can move one Countdown counter from one of your Clockwork monsters you control, to another clockwork monster you control.

Name: Clockwork King
Level/rank:8
Attribute: Earth
Monster Type(s): Machine/Effect
Effect:When this card is Normal or Special Summoned place 3 Countdown counter on it, During each of your standby phases if this card has countdown counter(s) on it, remove one
if this card has no Countdown counters on it, it gains the following effect.
Your opponent can only activate one spell or trap effect a turn. During your opponents end-phase add two countdown counters to this cad.
ATK/DEF 2700/1700

Name: Clockwork Dragon
Level/rank:10
Attribute: Earth
Monster Type(s): Machine/Effect
Effect:When this card is Normal or Special Summoned place 4 Countdown counter on it, During each of your standby phases if this card has countdown counter(s) on it, remove one
During your Main Phase, if this card has no countdown counters on it, you can activate the following effect once for as long as "Clockwork Dragon" remains face-up on the field. Tribute one Clockwork monster you control, this card gains attack points equal to that monsters level x200
ATK/DEF 3000 / 2200

Name: Legendary Clockwork, Big Ben
Level: 12
Attribute: Earth
Monster Type(s): Machine/Effect
Effect:
This card cannot be normal summoned this card can only be special summoned by the effect of "And The Clock Struck Twelve"
When this card is Special Summoned place 12 Countdown counters on it, During each of your standby phases if this card has countdown counter(s) on it, remove one
if this card has no Countdown counters on it Destroy it at the end-phase.

Once per turn you can remove countdown counters from this card to activate One of the follow effects depending on the amount you removed
1: Target one monster "Clockwork" Monster you control it cannot be destroyed by battle until your opponents next end-phase
3: Select one Card type, Monster, spell or Trap, this card is unaffected by the selected type's effects until your opponents end-phase
6: Target two cards on the field and destroy them.
9: Switch this card to ATK position and switch its ATK and DEF. Destroy it at the end of your opponents next end-phase
12: Tribute this card, special summon as many "Clockwork" monsters with different names as from your graveyard as you can, Remove them from play during your opponents next end-phase .

Name: Clockwork rotation
Spell type: Quick spell
Effect: Return one "Clockwork" monster you control to your hand to special summon one level 4 or lower Clockwork monster in attack position, place 1 additional countdown counter on the new monster.

Name: The Clockwork Curator
Spell type: Normal
Effect: Discard one "Clockwork" monster from your hand Tribute a face up Clockwork, Cogmasters Apprentice" you control, to special summon one Clockwork, Cogmaster from your hand or deck.

Name: Time Warp
Spell type: Quick spell
Effect:
Activate only if you have a Clockwork monster with no 'Countdown' Counters on it, target one monster your opponent controls and return it to the hand. Then, after this card's activation, place one 'Countdown' Counter on all clockwork monsters you control that do not have a countdown counter on them

>Reason why I didn't do yours Scarifar was because doing 1 counter would still lock down all of the clockworks effects until the end of the turn the card was activated. Adding 2 would be a little too much of a nerf. (plus your only rewinding time a little, its not like your making your opponent shuffle it into their deck or anything)

Name: The Legendary Clocktower
Spell type: Field
Effect:
Once per turn you can select one Face up "clockwork" monster you control and one Countdown counter from that card. While this card is face up on the field, you can only control "Clockwork" monsters. All clockwork monsters you control gain 300 ATK and DEF

>averaged it out a little better, not entirely sure if the ATK and DEF gain is necessary but could prove helpful (at least the field spell isn't like "If this card is destroyed by a opponents card effect, add 1 "Clockwork" monster from your deck to your hand. On second thought that effect could also work, not entirely sure)

Name: Overclocking
Trap type: Normal
Effect: Activate this card only if a "Clockwork" monster you control is targeted for a attack, Place two Countdown counters on the targeted monster. The targeted monster's attack becomes double its original attack until the end-phase

Cards Accepted

Name: Clockwork, Magi
Level: 3
Attribute: Earth
Monster Type(s): Machine/Effect
Effect: When this card is normal or special summoned place 1 Countdown counter on it.
During each of your standby phases if this card has countdown counter(s) on it, remove one
If this card has no Countdown counters on it, it gains the following effect
This card cannot be targeted by Spell or Trap cards
ATK/DEF 1400/800

Name: Clockwork, Cogmasters Apprentice
Level: 2
Attribute: Earth
Monster Type(s): Machine/Effect
Effect: When this card is Normal or Special Summoned place 1 Countdown counter on it, During each of your standby phases if this card has countdown counter(s) on it, remove one
if this card has no Countdown counters on it, it gains the following effect.
Reduce the level of all "Clockwork" monsters in your hand by 1
ATK/DEF 700/1000

Name:Clockwork Longhand
Level: 4
Attribute: Earth
Monster Type(s): Machine/Effect
Effect:When this card is Normal or Special Summoned place 1 Countdown counter on it, During each of your standby phases if this card has countdown counter(s) on it, remove one
if this card has no Countdown counters on it, it gains the following effect.
This card cannot attack

ATK/DEF 2100/500

Name: Clockwork Shorthand
Level: 4
Attribute: Earth
Monster Type(s): Machine/Effect
Effect:When this card is Normal or Special Summoned place 1 Countdown counter on it, and change it to defense position.
During each of your standby phases if this card has countdown counter(s) on it, remove one if this card has no Countdown counters on it, it gains the following effect.
Your opponent cannot target other monsters you control for attacks

Name: Clockwork Butler
Level/rank:5
Attribute: Earth
Monster Type(s): Machine/Effect
Effect:When this card is Normal or Special Summoned place 1 Countdown counter on it, During each of your standby phases if this card has countdown counter(s) on it, remove one
if this card has no Countdown counters on it, it gains the following effect.
during your main phase, draw 1 card then place 2 Countdown counters on this card.
ATK/DEF 1700/2000

Name: Clockwork Cogwall
Level/rank:6
Attribute: Earth
Monster Type(s): Machine/Effect
Effect:When this card is Normal or Special Summoned place 2 Countdown counter on it,
and change it to defense position.
During each of your standby phases if this card has countdown counter(s) on it, remove one
if this card has no Countdown counters on it, it gains the following effect.
Once per turn during either players turn, if a "clockwork" monster you control is targeted for a card effect, negate the activation and if you do destroy it
ATK/DEF 100/2500

Name: Clockwork Cogmaster
Level/rank:7
Attribute: Earth
Monster Type(s): Machine/Effect
Effect:When this card is Normal or Special Summoned place 2 Countdown counter on it, During each of your standby phases if this card has countdown counter(s) on it, remove one
if this card has no Countdown counters on it, it gains the following effect.
you can special summon a level 4 or lower Clockwork monster from your graveyard and if you do place 1 Countdown counter on this card.

ATK/DEF 2600/1300

Name: Clockwork Sage
Level/rank:9
Attribute: Earth
Monster Type(s): Machine/Effect
Effect:When this card is Normal or Special Summoned place 3 Countdown counter on it, During each of your standby phases if this card has countdown counter(s) on it, remove one
if this card has no Countdown counters on it, it gains the following effect
During your main phase you can add one spell or trap card from your deck to your hand then add two countdown counters to this card.
ATK/DEF 2600/2000

Name: Clockwork, Celestial
Level/rank: 11
Attribute: Earth
Monster Type(s): Machine/Effect
Effect:When this card is Normal or Special Summoned place 4 Countdown counter on it, During each of your standby phases if this card has countdown counter(s) on it, remove one
if this card has no Countdown counters on it, it gains the following effect.
One per turn before you attack you can tribute this card. destroy all cards on your opponents side of the field and if you do, halve the ATK of all monsters you control until the end-phase..
ATK/DEF 3200/ 2000

Name: Winding the Clock
Spell type: Normal
Effect:
Add one Countdown counter to all Clockwork monsters you control, gain 500 life points for each counter added by this effect.

Name: And The Clock Struck Twelve
Spell type: Normal
Effect: Activate this card if you control 3 face up "Clockwork" Monsters with Countdown counters. Pay half your life points, Tribute 3 face up "Clockwork" Monsters you control then you can special summon 1 "Legendary Clockwork, Big Ben" from your hand or deck.

And about having Both the Legendary Clock-tower and Big Ben, just remember that Big Ben refers to the bell inside of the clock tower and by extension the mechanisms as well. So you can have the legendary clock tower and Big Ben on the same side of the field, its just big Ben would sit inside of the clock-tower instead of its own clock-tower.

Also Celestial, most level 11's have stats over 3000, except Yubel - Terror incarnate (but lets not get started on that card) but until its effect becomes active, Its just a normal monster. (and hey at least its not Nekroz of Sophia...)

[Ammokkx]

Yeah, they're all through imo. The deck seems gud. I'll get around to listing them somewhere within the next hour or two then bug Satoshi about adding them in the second post, but for now, oh god I'm hungry and still need to study more X.X

[Ammokkx]

Holy shit, making markup for all those cards is time consuming. Anyway, they're listed @1Charak2. I'm not going to create packs until after the placement duels, but I can say I have enough cards for them. I'd love some more S/T cards tho