They all sound rather enjoyable! An Overseer sounds interesting (especially if it was a Kafka or Nabokov-inspired one) but so does the Mastermind faction as well as the others.
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“In the middle of winter I at last discovered that there was within me an invincible summer.” - Camus, Return to Tipasa
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I like weird narrative structures. Neat.
This is conceptually wonderful, but I lack the Elder Scrolls knowledge to really contribute much. Looking forward to reading some great IC posts. Hope it's very Conradian and whatnot.
Is it a thing for each character to use a different color in IC posts? I've not seen a lot of that before. Oh yeah it is
NEVER TOO MUCH INTROSPECTION.
I do realize think this first post was way too heavy with introspection but that was just because there's no one around for Hanir to act superior to.
NEVER TOO MUCH INTROSPECTION.
Edited my CS for readability since my previous CS was weirdly stream-of-consciousness and/or confusing, and the character motivations didn't make 100% sense, etc. Opinions tbd but probably won't change a lot
Poor Hexaflexagon. Good luck.
Poor Hexaflexagon. Good luck.
Character sheet's finished with all the character opinions for everybody. If I got a bit too presumptive with describing people please let me know. Maybe we could even work out some "How they met" scenes to flash back to :p
In general, the "opinion of others" is written adorably.
@Iuniper Sounds like a bit of an overreaction...but if you think you (Edit: "should") do better, then best of luck upon you!
All in the name of okay writing! And, erm, better understandability. I will be victorious!
I'm going to need to completely rewrite or scrap entirely a few sections of my CS. (The structure is very poor, and while much of the grammar is correct, I use a lot of indirect object structure which sounds very bad. I will need to tweak some other parts entirely because they come off as very "special snowflakey" and that is a pretty awful basis for a character. It might just be better to scrap the entire thing. ) I expect it'll be a few days before I can make an IC post. Definitely before the weekend.
@Dogematix Unh, that character art. Very nice. 10/10. This is also a really great character sheet.
Also, to anyone - I would definitely appreciate critiques on my CS if you have any, since you all seem to have a really good grasp on writing your characters, and something I've not done in a while. I'm rereading my CS and it seems startlingly unrealistic.
Also, to anyone - I would definitely appreciate critiques on my CS if you have any, since you all seem to have a really good grasp on writing your characters, and something I've not done in a while. I'm rereading my CS and it seems startlingly unrealistic.
There is much back-patting to be had in these parts!
...Just be careful not to knock out a lung while you're at it guys >_>).
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e: In any case, I have no place in criticizing people so I will be a bundle of .. erm, joy? Until then
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