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The Indomitus



The battle had evolved rapidly. With the Lance’s aggressive assault catching the pirates off-guard, and the Indomitus’ forces carving a path towards the stricken Guildcrest Venture. Titus and the Baron held the center like twin anvils, drawing the enemy cores’ full attention, while Aria’s disciplined suppressive fire ensured that none of the routed pirates escaped the meat-grinder forming between them. The opening they created was decisive. Onyx-9 surged through it, and the support company was now reclaiming the merchant vessel room by room.

As she scanned the reports streaming in from the infantry, Lucia was satisfied with the rapid progress that Volger and his men were making. Resistance was collapsing, and the pirates were either being driven back, or pinned down in hopeless firefights against a superior force. It wouldn’t be long until the Venture was once more firmly in Imperial hands. But her initial hopes of a swift conclusion to the battle were dashed by the data streaming in from the Phantom.

Lucia’s first reaction was surprise at just how much information Sharlin had managed to compress into such a narrow beam. The Phantom was already difficult for the Indomitus’ sensors to track under ideal conditions; maintaining such a minimal signature while conducting a comprehensive scan and transmitting it back bordered on audacious. It was the kind of quiet skill that would be lost on much of the bridge crew. Lucia appreciated it fully, and wished the results had been less troubling.

The bridge erupted as the new contacts populated the tactical display. There had been no expectation that the Indomitus herself would be threatened so soon, yet the crew moved with disciplined urgency: orders acknowledged, systems spun up, firing solutions queued. Missiles and torpedoes were already inbound, but Lucia found that training steadied her hands. The Lance was holding the line out there. She would do no less here.

She shared the updated battlespace with the Lance’s forward-deployed units, save for the Phantom itself. It received a brief pulse instead, simply notifying the onboard computer that information was available should it be requested, lest a blast of communication betray the reconnaissance-oriented core’s location.

“Captain, the Shrike and the strike craft appear to be covering a withdrawal across the theater.” Lucia eventually said, her eyes narrowing as she monitored the noisy data streaming across her display. “Attempting to intercept may place the Percheron, the Venture, or possibly Savior-1 at risk.”

Contacts moved in concert, ebbing and flowing as they responded to the Lance’s own actions and deployments. It rubbed her the wrong way: pirates weren’t typically this well coordinated, especially when a clean operation was violently interrupted. Strike craft running dark. A frigate lying in wait until the moment it mattered most. These all stunk of a cold professionalism that ragtag pirates didn’t usually display.

And then there was the determined effort to provide cover for the withdrawal from the Venture. No, it was more than that. The pirate’s leader, whoever they were, were willing to risk some of their most valuable assets - a whole frigate and a wing of strike craft - simply in an effort to delay and distract.

“Onyx-9 Actual to Indomitus. Main areas of engineering under control. Securing secondary areas now. Appears two factions among-”

The Colonel’s communication was briefly interrupted, but Lucia’s ears perked up at his update. Looking back over her display, she saw it too. While some of the pirates’ units were retreating in good order, others appeared to be panicking. There was a spike in hostile chatter between the units and cores that were panicking, but little in the way of communication between the well-ordered force and their less-professional brethren. More than that, now that she knew what to look for, Lucia saw the tell-tale indications of friendly fire occurring among the enemy.

What the hell?

“Phantom, are you able to intercept any of the hostiles’ communication without risking your Core?” Lucia transmitted the request to Sharlin. She knew that what she was asking for was a tall-order. At the very least, it would run the risk of exposing the Phantom to the enemy right when the rest of the Lance was too engaged to assist.

Speaking of the rest of the Lance, Lucia’s gaze flicked to the Baron’s telemetry, and her jaw tightened. Reactor output was spiking. Structural tolerances were slipping. Medical diagnostics painted a worrying picture of a man pushing both machine and body beyond reason. She could only hope the battle broke soon, before the Baron did.


It took Cassian a moment to steady himself after the report came in. Not one, but two real and immediate threats bearing down on the Indomitus. Torpedoes racing in from a frigate that had somehow gone undetected - a whole frigate, lurking unseen in the dark - and strike craft whose payloads could very well include throne-damned atomics.

He had assumed that the flagship placed him at a comfortable remove from the true danger of the engagement. Sitting on the bridge now, with threat vectors blooming across the tactical display, that assumption felt uncomfortably thin.

Cassian straightened, schooling his expression as his tutors had taught him. A Prince did not hesitate. A Prince did not betray uncertainty.

“Captain Ganishka,” he said, projecting calm he did not entirely feel, “remember that the Percheron and the Venture are our primary objectives.” How did his older siblings always make this appear oh-so-effortless? “The protection of Imperial citizens and their property must come first. There will be time enough to hunt these pirates down later. Justice has a long reach.”

And if focusing on defending the merchant fleet meant that the Indomitus didn’t have to risk itself pushing forward into more direct contact with a fleeing enemy, all the better.
Awesome posts all, I’m hoping to have something up tomorrow to move things along. Will also toss up a Discord link in the near future!
The Indomitus, on the fringes of the Procyon system



"SHOVE IT UP YOUR FUCKING ASS! I'm the Captain and doctrine says follow the chain of command! If the boss has an objection he can very well make it himself!”

The XO stiffened, clearly unprepared for such language being hurled across the hallowed deck of an Imperial bridge. He opened his mouth to respond, then hesitated, his eyes following the Captain’s gaze toward the seated Prince.

Cassian Ardentis did not intervene. Reclined in his throne-like command chair, he merely watched the exchange with faint amusement, one brow curling upward as if the argument were little more than a diversion. After a moment, he offered the XO a lazy nod and waved a dismissive hand.

“The last I checked,” Cassian said mildly, “it is the Captain who commands the ship, Mr. Crow.”

Beyond the bridge’s armored viewports, the void erupted into violence.

Lances of laser fire and streaking kinetic rounds crossed the debris-choked expanse ahead as the merchant convoy’s shattered remains slowly tumbled through space. On the tactical displays, hard contacts flickered in and out of focus: ghosting, resolving, then vanishing again as sensor returns struggled against interference. Pirate mechs emerged from behind broken freighters and ruptured cargo haulers, their cores old, scarred, and brutally utilitarian. They were using the drifting wrecks as cover with a practiced ease.

Lucia leaned closer to her console, jaw set as she tried to impose order on the chaos. The debris field alone was degrading the Indomitus’ sensors; layered atop it was a dense web of electronic jamming that distorted rangefinding and target locks alike.

“Ironside ready! Your majesty, I request to take the vanguard as we approach the Venture!”

"Baron Wilhelm, with all due respect, the Black Knight's command-and-control suite is too integral to our overall coordination to risk in the van. Please, allow me to take your place, should the Prince will it."

Sitting towards the rear of the bridge, Cassian seemed genuinely surprised as more of the eyes of the bridge turned to seek guidance from his throne.

“Oh, well of course the Baron should take the lead, given his wealth of experience.” A flash of what could have been chalked up to nerves vanished from the Prince’s face, as he put on a practiced, confident smile. “Lieutenant Dvalin, see if you can’t keep up with the Baron’s advance. Perhaps you might even learn a thing or two.”

Lucia winced. While the words were polished, she worried that Cassian’s inexperience would be more than apparent to the Lance’s experienced pilots. She also doubted that the Lieutenant would appreciate the tone.

Before the aide could step in to smooth over the Prince’s orders, Onyx-9’s channel erupted with activity. Pressing a finger to her ear, Lucia pushed aside her concerns about the Prince’s lackluster approach to personnel management and focused on the frantic sounds of combat.

“Onyx-9 has been engaged in an ambush. At least three hostile armored cores are active in the area.” Lucia paused, obviously listening to more updates coming to her station. The sensor readings finally started to stabilize as addition data started streaming in from the Phantom’s vantage point. “Make that five confirmed hostiles. They appear to be moving quickly to blunt the counter-boarding force before we have a chance to defend them.”

Reviewing the information streaming through her console, Lucia felt a brief sense of relief as she received confirmation that the Commander’s dropship had responded to hails. The pirates had clearly been aiming for some kind of a decapitation strike, attacking the middle of Onyx-9’s formation as they had.

“Onyx-9’s vanguard is approaching the Guildcrest Venture and taking sustained fire. All counter-boarding elements are advised to make haste to the vessel. Once you’re aboard, their cores can’t target you..”

Lucia shifted her attention outward again, scanning the wider battlespace. The pirates’ concentration around the Venture had allowed several surviving merchant ships to pull back, but not all had escaped unscathed.

“Captain Ganishka,” she said, opening a secure channel, “we’ve received a distress call from another convoy vessel: the Percheron. Their reactor was damaged during the initial raid and is at risk of going critical. Their damage control teams are attempting field repairs, but they’re requesting immediate assistance.”

She reviewed the diagnostic burst the freighter transmitted, brow furrowing as dense, nigh-indecipherable technical schematics filled her screen.

“Mr. Hartwig,” Lucia continued, immediately looping in the Lance’s chief engineer as she sent him a copy of the files, “We have a friendly vessel suffering from reactor trouble, I would appreciate your assessment of their situation. If intervention is feasible, we may be able to deploy limited engineering support - provided the Captain believes the Indomitus can maintain a safe posture while doing so.”

She glanced back toward the tactical display as fresh contacts bloomed amid the debris.

“Time is not on their side.”
Com-Star? We got another BattleTech player here?


I keep meaning to check out some of the Battletech books, myself. So far my lore knowledge just comes from a couple innocent dives into YouTube.
these posts are amazing!


Agreed! I've loved reading them so far.

Alright, here's one that's more out there, but I think we lacked wizards in this group.

Name: Hierophant Tyche Comstar
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Mech:
Designation/Callsign: Prophet 1
General Description:
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I really love the concept here. It’s ambitious, a little strange in the best way, and very much in line with how the setting treats powerful voidtouched figures.

First, a quick meta question: how comfortable do you feel juggling three characters at once? I don’t doubt that you could handle it, but especially early on, posting burden can sneak up on people. It might be worth starting with two until the RP finds its rhythm.

I also want to flag that another player is working on a somewhat adjacent concept (a voidtouched noble with a mech that amplifies their abilities). That’s not a problem, but it does mean we’d want to work together to carve out clearer niches (more explicit differences in void disciplines, combat roles, or team function) so both PCs get space to shine.

High-level thoughts:
I really dig the not-quite-human vibe and aesthetic of the character. It very much fits how the Imperium tends to view powerful voidtouched practitioners. My main concern right now is that the app presents her as exceptional in several different domains at once: one of the most potent voidtouched, deeply versed in archeotech, physically enhanced via cybernetics, and seemingly a very capable pilot on top of that. None of these are bad individually, but taken together it makes it a bit hard to see where her weaknesses truly are. I would recommend trying to focus her skillset just a tad more, or to add more faults/limitations to clarify where her abilities fall short.

By way of examples, you could focus her more on the role of a voidtouched/archeotech expert role: add a limitation indicating that she is not too strong in a fight without her powers, and even as a pilot she’s rather slow and vulnerable. Her cybernetics, rather than conveying significant advantages on their own, are there to help her human body to withstand the burden of using and restraining her powers, which are primarily used in a support role rather than for direct combat. Heck, you could even have her not be a Lancer herself if you’d really want to focus on her voidtouched powers being her main contribution to the Lance.

Alternatively, you could swing things the other way. Sure she knows a fair deal about archeotech due to her heritage, but she’s no scientific savant. Instead, Tyche was born and raised as a potent, psychic weapon. She is trained to be an effective pilot and uses her void-touched powers as a tool of battle.

I also like the world-building with both the Com-Star corporation, and the pseudo-dynasty that they’ve become! I’d probably clarify that they don’t have total control over technology in this day-and-age, but perhaps they are still quite prominent in the Imperium’s efforts to decipher and understand the technology of Ancient Terra. I especially like the idea that much of their understanding has been lost, leaving them reliant on doctrine, ritual, and precedent. Internal tension between a more “scientific” versus more “religious” approach to archeotech would fit the setting very well.

More specific comments/musings:
Archeotech Expert: The idea here is great. I’d recommend toning it down just a little, though. Cut out that she understands things “perfectly”, since even Com-Star would have lost most of their comprehension of the true science behind a lot of Archeotech - relying instead on a lot of half-ritualistic and empirical methods.

Master of the Drift: I’d want a little bit more specificity with regards to her “core” powers. Folks can certainly gain skills/abilities over the course of the RP, but right now things are just a little bit too vague on this front for Tyche. I’d recommend focusing on a key “discipline” for her powers (feel free to come up with your own, although I’ve found 40k’s psykers to be a decent-ish source of inspiration: Psyker | Warhammer 40k Wiki | Fandom).

Character Quick-Links



Player Characters

Titus Ulpius Marcellus, the Stalwart Defender - Played by Arnorian
Mika Ganishka, the Pirate Captain - Played by Wernher
Sharlin Vande Tanne, the Spy and Assassin - Played by Kensai
Wilhem von Zollern-Krauthammer II, the Old Guard - Played by Wernher
Stader Volger, the Veteran Commander - Played by Terrans
Aria Dvalin, the Vengeful Angel - Played by Psyker Landshark
Albert Hartwig, the Brillian Mechanic - Played by Eisnhorn
Tyche Comstar, the Voidtouched Scion - Played by Wernher

Non-Player Characters

The Indomitus, on the fringes of the Procyon system



Cassian lounged in his command chair with bored impatience etched plainly across his features. One boot was hooked idly over the armrest, his fingers drumming a lazy, arrhythmic pattern against the gilded frame. Standing watch on the bridge of the Indomitus had sounded thrilling when the voyage began; the reality, he had learned, was far less inspiring. The bridge crew moved with disciplined efficiency, their routines seamless, practiced, and utterly dull.

His gaze drifted across the cavernous room, lingering on the glow of holographic displays and the steady, practiced motions of officers at their stations. Transit lighting bathed the bridge in a soft amber hue, muting the harsh lines of armored bulkheads and giving the warship an almost languid calm as it cut through the void. The large viewscreen might have been able to offer stunning views of interstellar space, but for now all that it showed was the empty darkness of the void.

“Lucia,” Cassian called at last, his patience wearing thin. “An update, if you please. When you mentioned a distress signal, I assumed it would be something that actually warranted my presence.”

The Prince’s aide glanced up from the console bank, where she had been conferring quietly with the ship’s communications officer. “We’re still verifying the signal’s authenticity, Your Highness,” she replied evenly, her eyes already back on the data streams. “It shouldn’t take much longer.”

“Receiving something,” the comms officer beside her said, frowning at his display. “It’s…distorted. Civilian format, I think.”

Cassian straightened a fraction. “Think?” he echoed, irritation creeping into his voice.

“It’s being jammed.” Lucia said, lips tightening as the decrypted fragments resolved. “Deliberately. The source matches Merchant Guild registries: a trade convoy out of Valeria.”

That earned Cassian’s full attention.

“Valeria?” Cassian leaned forward now, interest flickering to life. The sector’s breadbasket, politically fractious and economically vital.

“Capital-bound, I presume?”

Lucia hesitated, just briefly. “Almost certainly. If they’re delayed or destroyed, it won’t go unnoticed.”

Cassian’s smile widened.

Praxion, capital of the Procyon sector, was meant to be their first formal stop. There would be speeches, ceremonies, and the Governor’s carefully curated welcome. Necessary, perhaps. But unremarkable. A rescued convoy, on the other hand? That would make an impression.

“Well,” he said lightly, “it would be terribly rude of us to keep them waiting. Set a course. Inform the Lance that they should prepare for deployment.”

Lucia frowned, hesitating before executing the Prince’s instructions.

“Your Highness,” she said carefully, “I must advise caution. This jamming isn’t the work of an amateur. Whoever is doing this understands Merchant Guild protocols and Imperial response ranges. That suggests preparation, not opportunism.”

With a wave of his hand, Cassian brushed aside the officer’s concern. “Minor details. We are a Lance of the Imperium, are we not? It would be improper of us to be scared off at the slightest sign of danger.” He offered the woman a smile. “Make sure the pilots receive a full briefing before we arrive.”

Lucia’s frown deepened as fresh telemetry scrolled across her display. “If we burn hard, we’ll reach them in under an hour. That gives the Lancers minimal time to prepare.” She hesitated, then added quietly, “And it puts us on a very predictable approach vector.”

“An hour?” Cassian interrupted, already turning away. “That’s an eternity for professionals.”



The alert went out shipwide moments later, prompting the Indomitus to come alive with preparations.

“All Lance elements: begin immediate preparations for armored core deployment. All pilots, be ready for departure within the hour. More information to follow.”

Across the ship, armored bays thronged with activity. Gantries slid into place. Warning lights strobed from amber to red. The deep, steady thrum of the Indomitus engines shifted pitch, a subtle but unmistakable signal that the ship was committing itself to action.

Lucia scarcely noticed the change. She and her staff were already scrambling, cross-referencing fractured sensor returns and half-decrypted telemetry, trying to assemble something resembling a coherent picture. An hour was not much to work with, not for a live combat insertion, and certainly not with intelligence this thin.

She would have preferred to brief the Lance in person. To let the veterans ask questions, to give them time to argue, plan, and refine. Instead, reality pressed in on all sides. Several armored cores had already launched from their bays, pilots sealing themselves into cockpits while others rushed through final checks. The window for deliberation had closed almost as soon as it had opened.

With a quiet exhale, Lucia opened a secure channel to the Lance’s pilots and the commanders supporting the operation.

“Ladies and gentlemen,” she began, voice steady despite the circumstances, “to reiterate: we have confirmed a civilian distress signal originating from a Merchant Guild convoy out of Valeria. Telemetry indicates multiple vessels, with hostile activity concentrated around the convoy flagship, the Guildcrest Venture.”

Data packets began to stream across cockpit displays: fractured sensor returns, distorted visual feeds, red-highlighted threat vectors.

“The distress signal is being actively jammed. That alone suggests a level of coordination beyond opportunistic piracy, so caution is advised. We are still working to identify the attackers, but preliminary analysis indicates a well-organized force with anti-ship capabilities. Their efforts appear to be focused on boarding and capturing the Venture, which is currently under siege.”

She paused deliberately, giving the pilots time to absorb the information. The shared battlespace map rotated slowly, available to any member of the Lance who wished to manipulate it. The stricken Guildcrest Venture was highlighted in gold, while the debris from the earlier fighting floated slowly around it. Stricken hulls and twisted pieces of twisted metal created a dense environment that surrounded and obscured the mission area.

“Onyx-9 will be leading a counter-boarding operation aboard the Venture, using the debris field in order to cover their advance. The primary objective for all Lancers is to escort them to their target, and then to provide support and protection from any counter-attacks. During the operation, Captain Ganishka will provide remote support from the Indomitus."

A final burst of data followed - ship schematics, approach vectors, and a steadily ticking countdown to contact.

“When ready, you are cleared to deploy and engage hostile forces on sight. Expect hostile armored cores and strike craft, with the possibility of a larger vessel serving as the raiding party’s base of operations.” Lucia concluded. “This will be a hot insertion. Good luck.”
Ach! Got a third character idea I want to make now lol


Hah! While I might recommend waiting until we get settled at a certain posting rate, I'm definitely curious to hear about what you're cooking.

I'm also starting on the opening post now - so hopefully it'll be up today or tomorrow.
Alright, wanted to get this sorted out before I called it an evening, figured we could use someone in a support role.



Great app, accepted!

Saw this get posted up earlier, and have been meaning to give it a read. Definitely interested in getting a character put together in the coming days, as long as you have room for another of course.


There is indeed still space! Am aiming to throw up the IC sometime over the weekend, but even then I’m hoping to keep apps open for the latecomers.
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