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Current Geez, it's been 11 months since I last logged in. Sorry to anyone I was RPing with, real life got in the way and I guess I just lost track of time.
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I will admit to being interested in the premise, but the one thing that is kinda stopping me from leaping on this is the system. If I understand this right, a single dice roll determines your performance for an entire combat scene in every aspect? If that's the case, I really can't jive with that. It's too much of a gamble, and to me, it wouldn't feel like I have a lot of agency in my character's future. It means every combat essentially has a preset result, rather than ups and downs.


Well, you would be the one writing your own combat scene. I would introduce enough enemies for each player to have the opportunity to write a battle scene between their character and one or more opponents, kind of similar to how normal RPs work. The focus is still primarily narrative, the dice rolls just give a general idea of how well the characters perform.
Like this part, for example:

Her attention turned towards the robot. Looking around the room for anything to use as a shield. Deciding on using a nearby pillar. Flying at top speed towards the robot while shooting her heat vision at it.


This doesn't say anywhere that she ripped out the pillar and held it in front of her or how exactly she used it. For all I knew, that could of meant she hid behind it for a minute to dodge a blast and then jumped out and flew at him. It's not clear at all what is actually happening.
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Yes that is what i was thinking she could do. Although she could just use the pillar like a baseball bat. I can go that route if it makes more sense.


I just wasn't sure of the logistics there because if she is holding the pillar as a shield but also firing heat vision, the rays from her eyes would just hit the pillar she was holding in front of her. If she moves the pillar enough for her eyes to have a clear shot of the Metallo-Bot, then it would also have a clear shot to fire Kryptonite blasts at her face. And If she is just firing heat vision blindly through the pillar, she risks hitting the van or other parked cars and causing them to explode. Plus if she just ripped out a support pillar, there may be structural consequences to the building. So, I'm just trying to fully understand what she is doing so that I can write what happens afterwards XD.

EDIT: I also suggest you take a little more time to proofread your posts to ensure you are writing them in a way that gives a clear picture to everyone else what your characters are doing.
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Just curious, when you said Kara used a pillar as a shield and then rushed the Metallo-Bot, did you mean she broke the pillar off and is holding it to shield herself from the Kryptonite blasts while also firing her heat vision? Just wanna make sure I fully understand what happened in your post.
I may post again today or tomorrow to give some more guidance within the story.
My hope was that we'd get at least eight people on board, but if not, six is good. I'm working all through this weekend and next week, but hopefully I'll have some time to work on getting this RP up and running next weekend.
Okay, post is up. The Metallo-Bot's energy bolts give off some Kryptonite radiation, and the scorpion monsters are fairly strong with paralyzing venom in their stingers. Feel free to use that info to write out your battle scenes.
“Hard to say, but best to be prepared regardless,” Batman replied to Ray’s question. He then turned to address the others as they inquired as well. “The security personnel here will keep a close eye on the cameras and alert you on your ear pieces if they see anything suspicious. I’ll leave it up to you to decide who to patrol with, but…”

“Batman?” Nightwing asked, puzzled that his mentor suddenly stopped talking, seemingly listening to something on his earpiece.

“The situation has just changed,” he finally spoke. “There is a massive prison break at Belle Reve that requires the response of the full Justice League. It is no coincidence that this is happening right now.”

“Wait, what?” Kid Flash’s eyes went wide as he blurted out.

“So you think their intent is to draw the League away from the Hall?” Dick inquired, following his mentor’s line of thinking.

“Yes,” the caped crusader confirmed. “This is either a trap or a distraction, but we must respond regardless. Which means the safety of everyone in the Hall will fall to you all. There very well may be a separate attack here while we’re dealing with the prison break there, so do not let your guard down until we have returned. Nightwing, you will be the leader of Junior Squad while we’re gone.”

“I understand,” the teen nodded.

“We will try to resolve this as quickly as possible,” Batman insisted.

Superman made a statement from the stage explaining the situation, and they brought some of the musical talent out to keep the crowd entertained while the League was gone. Soon the older heroes were assembled, gave reassurances to their respective sidekicks, and then departed via their various high-speed transportation methods for the swamps of Louisiana, where Belle Reve was located.

“Well, I suppose this is our first real test as an independent team,” Nightwing said to the other young heroes as they stood in the lobby of the Hall, watching their mentors leave. “I have faith that we will all rise to the task.”

For about thirty minutes, nothing extraordinary happened, and Junior Squad just casually walked back and forth between the lobby, the ballroom, and the security room. But then, they heard a guard on their earpieces.

“Attention Junior Squad, suspicious vehicle entering the parking lot. A black van with tinted windows.”

“Roger that,” Nightwing immediately responded. “Investigating now.”

He motioned for the other team members to assemble and they walked up to the glass doors leading out of the lobby as the van came to a stop just outside. “Be on your guard.”

Suddenly, the door on the side of the van slid open and a tall Metallo-Bot stepped out, a large chunk of Kryptonite in his chest, glowing green. He extended an arm, which was mounted with two barrels, and began unleashing rapid-fire green energy bolts that shattered the glass and hit Scarlet Beacon in the chest, sending him flying back and sliding along the floor. The others threw arms up to shield themselves from the glass shards.



“Ah!” Conner yelped out at the attack, several scorch marks on his suit. The robot then began firing at the other Kryptionians.

“I got him!” Kid Flash sped off in a flash of yellow lightning towards the metal enemy, but then slid to a stop as he was confronted by Reverse-Flash. “Thawne! I’m surprised you’re here instead of facing the Flash!”



“We flipped a coin. Zoom won,” he replied, shrugging. He then grinned, eyes glowing red, and charged at Wally.

A third figure exited the van, holding a grimoire of some kind. Nightwing didn’t recognize him, but gasped as the man began chanting in Latin and called upon a magical blue light. The book floated up from his grasp and at least a dozen scorpion monsters began materializing in little flashes. They roared and charged into the Hall of Justice.




“Don’t let them get to the crowd!” Nightwing called out, slipping out his batons and gripping them tightly. “We must halt their advance here in the lobby!”
Was going to try and work on stuff if it was slow today at work, but it got super busy. I'm off tomorrow though so I'll be able to focus on RP stuff :).
@CaptainManbeard That’s awesome! I can’t wait to see it!


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