ClocktowerEchos

American Dream: A Shattered Union

I am going to be declaring this RP as "dead" now.

Sorry to anyone who still had interest in this.

What are some signs a roleplay is about to die?

When the GM is holding everyone at gun point and the hostage negotiation is failing.

@Dervish

Beautiful.
10/10 IGN would recommend

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@Damiann47Preferably I would have people just repost it but oh well xD

Now for some comments after a quick look over of your CS:

Kind of amazed you didn't decide to take a Fisto but that was up to you

Can I ask for you to put in something about the Kohrneheim and the Ennedi relations? Judging from your history and what's implied from the background information, you don't really say anything about it. PRN schools would most likely not show "the Reichmen" in a too positive light and it seems like the only contact you've had with the Ennedi is when you first got on to their planet.

Beyond that, it looks pretty good ^^

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@ClocktowerEchos So. I have a question. Can we be a bit creative with the lore? I'm not super into GATE or Warhammer, do we have to have our characters be from places that exist within those universes?

@Nevix

I'm not quite sure what you mean by that but this isn't supposed to be a warhammer x GATE crossover; characters are not supposed to directly come from either of those universes.

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@Evil Snowmanlol, okay :)

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Anyways, I finally have a character of my own and seeing that I end up judging all of your stuff, I thought it'd only be fair if you judged mine.
_{And also because I'm a narcissistic bastard}

Your Glorious Commander

HWANGI SAIYAKO

If you look like you know what you're doing, then people will believe you do know what you're doing.
-Saiyako

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Name

Hwangi Mukuri Saiyako

Nicknames

Saiya (Nickname)

Age

30

Gender

Male

Homeworld

Fuso

Rank

2^nd Lieutenant

Role

Unit Commander

Appearance

Judging solely from appearances, Saiyako looks nothing like what one would expect from an officer, even by Fusan standards. His brownish-redish hair is always in varying amounts of ruffled or crumpled, dark lines hung under his dark golden eyes from his many all nighters no doubt, whatever happens during these long moons is known only by Saiyako himself. With a body type between his natural skinny frame and the body mass built up by military training, the man doesn't look like one you'd immediately expect to be a soldier but more of a bookworm who spent too much time at the gym. His resting, apathetic bitch face is only broken by the occasional cocky smile that arises when he feels the rare need to outdo someone.

In terms of outfits, Saiyako generally finds himself in any number and amount of clothing; like many Fusans he has no qualms about walking around in his underwear or nightwear and has been spot on more than one occasional strolling between the showers and his quarters nude. He also has a bad habit of tramping around in his sleeping clothes until noon when he knows he has no planned assignments or tasking for that day. Surprisingly enough however, his actual officer's dress uniform is perfectly kept in pristine condition, not a speck of dust on it, not a hole anywhere, not a button loose.

Equipment

• Fusan Type 108 Automatic Carbine
• Fusan Type 0 Warblade
• ARMA Unit "Oni"
• M3P-4 10mm Pistol
• RO-3 Omni Grenade
• Officer's Regimental Guide Manual

Personality

Laid back almost to the point of apathy, Saiyako is more extreme case of the famous Fusan calmness and indifference. With and almost superhuman ability of procrastinating and extending deadlines, Saiyako rarely feels urgency with things like paper work of which he sees as his greatest foe. One could say he's a fatalist, believing that his life is already set out by some greater power who isn't the Primarch or the pantheons of Terranism causing friction between him and the Inquisition who keeps tabs on all commissioned officers, his apparent lack of zeal doesn't help.

Of course, now with the arrival of the Gate, that personal philosophy has more or less gone out the window. In its place there's a new sense of excitement which Saiyako hasn't felt in a long time as before him is a beautiful world straight from a fantasy game. He works with greater speed and efficiency now although relative to others he still works dreadfully slow. Any official papers like reports while likely be handed in a week late with crumpled corners, an improvement from when papers would go missing for months in Saiyako's hands and come out like they were in their own war in the bowls of his desk. The only type of papers which he hasn't failed to submit on time are papers relating to the well being of his unit; things such as payrolls and requisition forms have rarely failed to be handed on time and are the only things which he will rarely submit early. Perhaps this is rooted from an amicable nature that's hidden under layers of apparent boredom and snark.

In battle, his apathetic nature is incredibly apparent, Saiyako appearing to give absolutely zero shits about being shot at or yells about him getting down. Of course this doesn't mean he's slow or combat stupid, his indifference to danger and gore is one of the primary reason behind his promotions. The battlefield is also the only place where his normal expression breaks and is replaced by a slightly cocky grin and an air of confidence. Its not uncommon for him to challenge someone to see how fast they can dash into cover while under fire as although he doesn't care much for the insults people call him, he does enjoy showing people up sometimes even if he doesn't always win them.

Traits

• Seemingly apathetic to danger, blood, and insults
• Wonderful chief
• Deadlines are relative
• Something of best friends with his ARMA unit
• Fusan army training which comes with better melee skills
• Master of procrastinating
• Reliable regarding matters of his unit's well being
• Fan animated shows and has a small collection of figurines and collectables in his quarters
• Atheistic

History

Saiyako was born to a medical researcher space elevator operator on a space station in orbit around the Fuso. His life was normal for the most part, no sudden parental deaths or secret family wealth to be inherited; Saiyako was just a normal boy who lived life between the station and planet side. While definitely not the upper crust of society, his family was more than able to pay for their lifestyle and some of the gifts the child would want; perhaps one reason why Saiyako was even more laid back than most Fusans. The biggest change in his life up to that point would be the birth of his little sister when he was six. Things changed for Saiyako when Hwangi Tantan Mutoi came into his life but not too dramatically. Like his parents, Saiyako did his best to shower Mutoi with love and affection.

Maintain respectable grades throughout his teenaged years, the turning point of his life hit both him and his family hard, quite literally. During a family trip which Saiyako had offered to drive, his father next to him and his mother in the back with his sister, a mechanical failure cause the car to veer into oncoming traffic where a cargo transport plow right into them. Despite Saiyako, his mother and his sister all recovering, his father never did for some reason. Days turned into weeks, weeks turned into months but his father wasn't recovering for some reason, doctors attributed it to some genetic issue that was preventing his body from healing as it should and instead was actually decaying.

Life suddenly went downhill as Saiyako started failing his classes and locked himself in his room for hours at a time, feeling as if he was the one who cause his father's pain, eventually refusing to go visit him out of shame and guilt. The last time Saiyako would see his father would be on his father's death bed who told him:

"Son, there is no hidden treasure of our family for which I can pass on to you. There is no secret wealth which I can let you inherit. No portal to a magical world that I have been hiding. No secret society that I've been a part of. You are completely normal, you are no fairy tale hero like the one in the shows you once watched and the books me and your mother once read you; there is nothing special about you. You are just you.

But you are unbound, free of any strings of destiny. Your fate is no one but your own. There is nothing to hold you back from your greatness..."

Of course, Saiyako didn't understand what his father meant at that point, but it broke something inside of him and turned him apathetic, not even flinching as he watched his father's coffin be lowered into the earth and buried. It was as if he stopped caring about everything and it showed; he later failed out of school before he could even get into a college and barricaded himself in his room, nothing his sister or his mother did could get him out.

Faced with a dead husband and a depressed, apathetic son, Saiyako's mother died of a heart attack little over a year later and Saiyako was again silent as his mother was buried next to her lover. Realizing that there was no way that both he and his little sister could survive on government subsidies, Saiyako got a job in the only place that would accept him: the army.

After months of training, he was deployed to various rebel stations and worlds as part of the 6^th Fusan Regiment, 21^st Assault Division nicknamed the "Golden Foxes". Through many a battles and a fair bit of luck, Saiyako had been promoted to the rank of 2^nd LT after the previous one had died in battle, his apathetic nature leading him the ability to remain remarkable nonchalant even by Fusan standards. After doing his 3^rd tour, he heard wind of a portal that had opened up on the backwater desert planet of Ennedi to what the first scouts said was a "fantasy" world. Upon hearing that, something made him smile and started up his excitement, an emotion he hadn't felt in a long time. Signing up without haste, Saiyako felt like he finally understood what his father's words from all those years ago meant; he had the chance not to fulfill his destiny, but a chance to make his own.

In other news, a proper OOC should be coming later today or tomorrow depending on how much of a lazy ass I am and how much work I have once I get home. _;-;
So more hype time! :D

Clock's Clockery of Clockage for Clocky CS's

HWANGI SAIYAKO

If you look like you know what you're doing, then people will believe you do know what you're doing.
-Saiyako

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Name

Hwangi Mukuri Saiyako

Nicknames

Saiya (Nickname)
Explorer 1 Actual (Callsign)

Age

30

Gender

Male

Homeworld

Fuso

Rank

2^nd Lieutenant

Role

Unit Commander

Appearance

Judging solely from appearances, Saiyako looks nothing like what one would expect from an officer, even by Fusan standards. His brownish-redish hair is always in varying amounts of ruffled or crumpled, dark lines hung under his dark golden eyes from his many all nighters no doubt, whatever happens during these long moons is known only by Saiyako himself. With a body type between his natural skinny frame and the body mass built up by military training, the man doesn't look like one you'd immediately expect to be a soldier but more of a bookworm who spent too much time at the gym. His resting, apathetic bitch face is only broken by the occasional cocky smile that arises when he feels the rare need to outdo someone.

In terms of outfits, Saiyako generally finds himself in any number and amount of clothing; like many Fusans he has no qualms about walking around in his underwear or nightwear and has been spot on more than one occasional strolling between the showers and his quarters nude. He also has a bad habit of tramping around in his sleeping clothes until noon when he knows he has no planned assignments or tasking for that day. Surprisingly enough however, his actual officer's dress uniform is perfectly kept in pristine condition, not a speck of dust on it, not a hole anywhere, not a button loose.

Equipment

• Fusan Type 108 Automatic Carbine
• Fusan Type 0 Warblade
• ARMA Unit "Oni"
• M3P-4 10mm Pistol
• RO-3 Omni Grenade
• Officer's Regimental Guide Manual

Personality

Laid back almost to the point of apathy, Saiyako is more extreme case of the famous Fusan calmness and indifference. With and almost superhuman ability of procrastinating and extending deadlines, Saiyako rarely feels urgency with things like paper work of which he sees as his greatest foe. One could say he's a fatalist, believing that his life is already set out by some greater power who isn't the Primarch or the pantheons of Terranism causing friction between him and the Inquisition who keeps tabs on all commissioned officers, his apparent lack of zeal doesn't help.

Of course, now with the arrival of the Gate, that personal philosophy has more or less gone out the window. In its place there's a new sense of excitement which Saiyako hasn't felt in a long time as before him is a beautiful world straight from a fantasy game. He works with greater speed and efficiency now although relative to others he still works dreadfully slow. Any official papers like reports while likely be handed in a week late with crumpled corners, an improvement from when papers would go missing for months in Saiyako's hands and come out like they were in their own war in the bowls of his desk. The only type of papers which he hasn't failed to submit on time are papers relating to the well being of his unit; things such as payrolls and requisition forms have rarely failed to be handed on time and are the only things which he will rarely submit early. Perhaps this is rooted from an amicable nature that's hidden under layers of apparent boredom and snark.

In battle, his apathetic nature is incredibly apparent, Saiyako appearing to give absolutely zero shits about being shot at or yells about him getting down. Of course this doesn't mean he's slow or combat stupid, his indifference to danger and gore is one of the primary reason behind his promotions. The battlefield is also the only place where his normal expression breaks and is replaced by a slightly cocky grin and an air of confidence. Its not uncommon for him to challenge someone to see how fast they can dash into cover while under fire as although he doesn't care much for the insults people call him, he does enjoy showing people up sometimes even if he doesn't always win them.

Traits

• Seemingly apathetic to danger, blood, and insults
• Wonderful chief
• Deadlines are relative
• Something of best friends with his ARMA unit
• Fusan army training which comes with better melee skills
• Master of procrastinating
• Reliable regarding matters of his unit's well being
• Fan animated shows and has a small collection of figurines and collectables in his quarters
• Atheistic

History

Saiyako was born to a medical researcher and an animator on a space station in orbit around the Fuso. His life was normal for the most part, no sudden parental deaths or secret family wealth to be inherited; Saiyako was just a normal boy who lived life between the station and planet side. While definitely not the upper crust of society, his family was more than able to pay for their lifestyle and some of the gifts the child would want; perhaps one reason why Saiyako was even more laid back than most Fusans. The biggest change in his life up to that point would be the birth of his little sister when he was six. Things changed for Saiyako when Hwangi Tantan Mutoi came into his life but not too dramatically. Like his parents, Saiyako did his best to shower Mutoi with love and affection.

Maintain respectable grades throughout his teenaged years, the turning point of his life hit both him and his family hard, quite literally. During a family trip which Saiyako had offered to drive, his father next to him and his mother in the back with his sister, a mechanical failure cause the car to veer into oncoming traffic where a cargo transport plow right into them. Despite Saiyako, his mother and his sister all recovering, his father never did for some reason. Days turned into weeks, weeks turned into months but his father wasn't recovering for some reason, doctors attributed it to some genetic issue that was preventing his body from healing as it should and instead was actually decaying.

Life suddenly went downhill as Saiyako started failing his classes and locked himself in his room for hours at a time, feeling as if he was the one who cause his father's pain, eventually refusing to go visit him out of shame and guilt. The last time Saiyako would see his father would be on his father's death bed who told him:

"Son, there is no hidden treasure of our family for which I can pass on to you. There is no secret wealth which I can let you inherit. No portal to a magical world that I have been hiding. No secret society that I've been a part of. You are completely normal, you are no fairy tale hero like the one in the shows you once watched and the books me and your mother once read you; there is nothing special about you. You are just you.

But you are unbound, free of any strings of destiny. Your fate is no one but your own. There is nothing to hold you back from your greatness..."

Of course, Saiyako didn't understand what his father meant at that point, but it broke something inside of him and turned him apathetic, not even flinching as he watched his father's coffin be lowered into the earth and buried. It was as if he stopped caring about everything and it showed; he later failed out of school before he could even get into a college and barricaded himself in his room, nothing his sister or his mother did could get him out.

Faced with a dead husband and a depressed, apathetic son, Saiyako's mother died of a heart attack little over a year later and Saiyako was again silent as his mother was buried next to her lover. Realizing that there was no way that both he and his little sister could survive on government subsidies, Saiyako got a job in the only place that would accept him: the army.

After months of training, he was deployed to various rebel stations and worlds as part of the 6^th Fusan Regiment, 21^st Assault Division nicknamed the "Golden Foxes". Through many a battles and a fair bit of luck, Saiyako had been promoted to the rank of 2^nd LT after the previous one had died in battle, his apathetic nature leading him the ability to remain remarkable nonchalant even by Fusan standards. After doing his 3^rd tour, he heard wind of a portal that had opened up on the backwater desert planet of Ennedi to what the first scouts said was a "fantasy" world. Upon hearing that, something made him smile and started up his excitement, an emotion he hadn't felt in a long time. Signing up without haste, Saiyako felt like he finally understood what his father's words from all those years ago meant; he had the chance not to fulfill his destiny, but a chance to make his own.

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@Damiann47I was talking about what you have but then again I wrote that before I had coffee.

Also, the insults will only be once you move the character into the Char tab of the OOC that's coming soon™

PS: Your insult sucks. Like yo mama.
#GetRektM8
*makes stupid hand signs and dances around the room*

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@The SurvivorLooking good, I would have preferred that you used an anime/art picture instead of something real but since I failed to mention that, you can keep it
You do have a bit of derp in the equipment section tho.

@SukuSo you are saying you're finding hard to put her into the over lore of Deaus? Just PM me and hopefully we can work something out/explain somethings.

@Evil SnowmanI will admit I didn't expect someone Egyptian descent on a not-Asia planet. xD
If you want, you can either change her entire name or just her last name, or keep it, all up to you.
As for the sheet itself, I like it; laughed a bit at the traits section

@Dead CruiserI like it. Although Imperia is not a vassal city-state of anyone; its the capital of the Empire.
The only other minor issue I have with your sheet is that I thought your guy was dripping blood everywhere he walked which was a very interesting aesthetic I will admit xD
Don't worry about actually having to change it though, I was just doing a double-take.

@Damiann47Accepted, have a gift:

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　　　/ ･ิω･ิ ヽ
　＿ノ ヽ　ノ ＼＿
/　`/ ⌒Ｙ⌒ Ｙ　ヽ
( 　(三ヽ人　 /　 　|
|　ﾉ⌒＼ ￣￣ヽ　 ノ
ヽ＿＿＿＞､＿＿_／
　　 ｜( 王 ﾉ〈
　　 /ﾐ`ー―彡ヽ
　　/　ヽ_／　 |
　 ｜

Also @All, slight modification to the scifi CS. "Race" has been removed since I will admit I was trying to be a smartass and test people with that one, one of the first things in the OP said that the Primarch had removed the concept of religion and ethnicity/race. My bad >.>

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@ClocktowerEchosgot a idea but I do not know how to do it can you help? its a female songtress who controls water but Idk if it would fit what is there for the fantasy part.

@Suku

Could you restate that? I'm not sure if I get what you mean.

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<Snipped quote by ClocktowerEchos>

Okay, I think I'm forming a more coherent idea here.

Perhaps he's quite an old vampire who's already come to terms with his place in the world. I can see him having served his kingdom for a number of centuries, and holding a position of high leadership in its military ("Lord-Commander" has such a nice ring to it). An extremely experienced warrior and leader, and the veteran of hundreds of campaigns. Book of Blessing magic is a good idea, and I was already going with the idea that his armor conceals his true nature (I'm thinking a golden mask, sort of Kingdom of Heaven-esque). Among the high nobles and military officials of his kingdom his nature would be known, but a well-kept secret from the majority of the populace. His dark nature is kept well at hand, but it's still a constant battle that tests his willpower even to this day.

What do you think of this?

@Dead Cruiser

I like it. Although you might want to change the or come up with an explanation that the higher ups would give to people when asked how one seemingly mortal man could stay so young for seemingly ever.

One idea I had is that it could pretend to be a zealous devotee of some "good" god like the god of life or sun or something like that when in reality its a "dark" god that's keeping him alive through almost-force worship. Part of his development could be choosing wether or not to stay with the dark god or put his faith in the good gods. It would also be interesting since you'd have all the younger, novice squires and knights looking up to this guy who they hear is such a zealot and never misses a worship or prayer mass or something like that while still being an excellent warrior.

Anyways, Imma about to pass out so bed time for me