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2 yrs ago
Current I do not "brainrot". I brainferment so my brain will become even smoother and even more potent than before in its smoothness.
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2 yrs ago
I live. I die. I live again!
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4 yrs ago
I was gone for a lot longer than I thought >.>"
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4 yrs ago
Sorry for my absence! A Volunteering position suddenly turned into a Volunteer Leadership position I was not expecting at all so things have been hectic.
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4 yrs ago
Look at you posers, having to bang dragons or sell your soul for magic when you could just play a lute for some. Anyways, here's Wonderwall. - Bards
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For the Xim, I'm going for a dictatorship where the leader was genetically engineered for that role, then raised and educated to be a leader, and had their personality shaped (through a process I'll describe in the NS) to be the perfect leader. This person has nearly absolute control, and the people have absolute faith in their leader's abilities. It would even be considered unscientific to question the leader's power, as they are literally designed, breed, born, and shaped for that role.

I'm unable to decide a name, however. "Xim-Speaker" might be a good one, or maybe "Conjoiner".


The word "Primarch" comes to mind

You could also mess with the spelling of words like Divinitus from Divine

Sounds like the word "Gospel" or "Prophet" or "Messiah" rings to me even tho they aren't religious.
EDORIC



Edoric jolted awake, something had stirred him from his deathly slumber. He went to take his first breath, only to be met with a lung full of... blood?

After suffocating on his own vomit as he violetnly wriggled like a fish on land, he managed to maneuver himself onto his knees where he could properly clear his lungs. He stared at the pool of red that had formed under him, how his salvia had mixed with the crimson liquid to form blood trails that still hung on his cracked lips like red spider webs.

He could feel his eyes dialting in and out as they got used to being of use once more and slowly brought the man into the persepctive of his world. And boy was it not pretty.

First thing Edoric noticed was the pile of bodies laying before him, all hallowed and emanciated with faces carved of suffering and agony. Edoric wanted to vomit it again, but this time only a thin trickle of blood dribbled out, followed by bitter bile that he forced himself to swallow.

As his breathing increased and his heart began to kickstart itself, he could feel him hands grasping at the cold, hard stone floor to try and pull his legs free from the mount of pained corpses whose outstretched, boney arms begged for Edoric's assistance. Giving in, he pulled his leg free and reflectively kicked one of the arms he thought was still moving towards him; a sickening crunch followed as the marrow and bone broke and toppled over in a way that no arm should, the sinew to weak to hold on to the broken limb.

He wanted to scream.

He wanted to cry.

He wanted to curl up and bawl empty tears like he was a child again.

But yet, he didn't. He held on to his mind (and probably his sanity) with all dear hope he could muster out, shutting his eyes as to try and end this horrid vision of death and decay as if it was all some bad dream and he'd wake up on a nice comfy bed soon enough.

But there was no bed, for twas no dream.

Twas a nightmare.

O-o-oh ka-ka-kayyy... ju-just ke-e-epppp k-kk-kalm um-umm... e-er-er... E-Edward? N-noe... Eb-Ebadlian? N-n-no...

Edoric racked his dusty, decripet mind for his own name as the tried to shut out the sights and smells around him, but the stentch of death and rot was overbearing and caused him to gag on his own breath before coming to his name.

E-Ed-Edoric w-w-w-was itttt? Y-yes... T-twas m-my na-nam-me... I-I-I th-thinnnk?

With his namely firmly in tow, the man began to fill in some of the other holes he had.

He was Edoric of a family name he couldn't recall, a merchant of sorts from Zeal? No, Sith. Nonono, that also wans't right. It was Sikth, ahhh yes, that was the place. He had wandered from place to place to trade and deal in goods... maybe with comrades? Or was he always alone?

Clasping his hands on to his shaking head, the ringing and clinging of chains heralded his hearing back into the world. Slowly, he lowered his hand unto his vision.

Chains?

Edoric shook them once.

They jangled.

He shook them again.

They danced to a rusted tune.

The chains were real alright, a quick look down revealed that there were more chains around his ankles, or, what used to be chains. It seemed like at some point the links broke away, granting him freedom of access but Edoric couldn't remember why he had chains on him to begin with.

Then soemthind drew his hand to his neck.

He swallowed hard as his shaky hand traced a long, wicked, gnarly scar on his neck with a horrified finger.

W-w-what the h-hell ha-happened? Wha did I dew-

...

Wh-wha? Th-th-this i-is...?


Edoric looked up.

His bleached skin went white once more as the image of... of... a thing be burned into his eyes.

It was like a giant, cancerous intestine. Its buldging mass barely contained by the chains, hooks and pipes that pierced it and held it alof. Glowing tumors on its underside seemed to... breath as if they were alive, a faint howling of some wind through the flayed flesh sounded like it was howling in pain at the many cuts, gashes and laceration all over it. Some of which had spilled... something on to Edoric.

He shivered with fear and disgust as it slide down his back, it was like blood... but ch-chuunkier... and g-g-gl-loopier... and s-s-s-s-slimierrrr... and... mon-mo-mo-m-monstrous...

*CRACK*

Edoric finally broke as his breathing of the dead air filled his undead lungs as his panicked hyperventaliation forced its way past his gag reflex.

Grabbing his head and curling up, rocking back and forth, Edoric screamed.
AAAaaAAHHHAhhhHHhhhAAaaaHhHhhaAaaAAAAAA!!!!!!!
@TheSovereignGraveUse the best title of them all:

DOGE

or you could use something like Magistrate or Chairman or High Elder.
But the meme gods would not deus vult
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Everything else is fine, and you can keep the Fyrites, just not as living sex dolls. Thankyou for being understanding.

Damnit, you're acting all nice and humble and now I feel guilty for getting mad at you!


I do my best to stand out but I also know when to stand down

I should probably be thankful for you being equally as understanding in some strange way that my sleep-deprived mind thinks is right

Anyways, here's the new version of the Fyrites, made them less like cat-eared bimbos and more... pathos-based? Tbh, the two things that inspired this new version of them was actual cats and anime tsunderes so there's that. Tell me if anything needs to be changed again:

@HaelAlrighty, I'll edit that part out and probably rethink some bits of the Fyrites. Anything else on the other two races you have a bone to pick with and I'll see what I can do. I think I might have either missed/forgotten that part in the OP or didn't understand it when I first read it. Either way, my bad >//<

In other news, I've updated my NS once again with mostly Government stuff, also finally got a name (Memoria Fleet).

@All, please do tell me if I need to change anything since I fear I might have to actually. Constructive criticism is welcomed ^^

Didn't edit the Races tho, going to do that now probably.
@Arawak@darkandstarDon't worry, the nekos are only one of three races my NS will have, here's the species bit from my NS:

Also, these are the first drafts, so do expect changes to be made and such. If people really hate my stuff, then I'll just drop it.



Happy now?

EDIT: I realize that there might be quite a bit of OP potenital, expect that to be sorted out once I have some more stuff written and have time to go back and fix stuff.
WIP OFC
I'm not sure what this thread needs more right now, Jesus, purging or radiation therapy.
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~~Ara ara clock-tan...nekomimis you say?


Most of my newer nations always have some mention of lewdness in them. Hell, I've gradually shifted away from using militaristic/industrial nations to those focused on entertainment... of all sorts~.

I'm probably one of the lewdest people you'll ever meet thb

@ClocktowerEchos Your people are ALWAYS welcome in the Federation....just the Nekos though... :P


Some of the Nekos might bring the four-armed pricks or the Not!Zerg with them, they're also like Asaris in a way that they can literally breed and reproduce with anyone. They also have quite the drive too :p




Here's what I have written for them atm since I feel like it would be easier to post this rather than explain it all

Got a solid concept nailed down for my guys, they're basically going to be a giant Quarian-styled nomad fleet, fleeing what's basically a zombie death plague that had infected many of their home systems. Of the races I have right now are*:

- Hyper-sexual, very fertile nekomimis (seriously, if I probs can't talk about them in the level of detail I want to unless I want to get banned from RPGuild )
- Arrogant but intelligent four-armed pricks with fancy masks and robes who live for hundreds of years
- The Zerg if they had only single "form", could talk somewhat and weren't driven to kill everything they see.
*These are very, very simplified/abbreviated descriptions, I will have more serious and detailed soon.



So, @Lauder@Hael, is this an acceptable lost-empire to play as?
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