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Back when dinosaurs ruled the Earth, I got started with writing online on the Spore forums. Man, those were the days. We're talking like 12 years ago 2010-ish!

I've been here on and off for almost as long, and have GM'd a bunch of different things to varying success.

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@Cyclone

Just so I am clear on this one thing. The Khargats came down from the mountains, right? So that means that my Belintashians were the first "southerners" they came across and fought with, I would assume.


I take it that Belintash doesn't extend across the entire northern side of the empire and the entire mountain range (because that'd make your province pretty huge) so I didn't specifically state that they came into contact with Belintash first. The first people that they came into contact with were conquered rapidly and essentially wiped off the map. Whether that would be some other state(s) further along the mountains or a former part of Belintash can be decided by you, but note that many of the Khargats remain in that hilly territory that they first conquered. While various groups move around because those foothills can't sustain all the nomads and their herds indefinitely, that land is sort of their stronghold and where they'd fall back to if they were pushed out of other regions.

So ultimately it makes sense to say that the Khargats came down and sacked a bunch of your cities and stole your land (and furthermore, that many of them remain on that conquered land in the modern day!) but I left it intentionally vague so as to not force that history upon you. But if you're fine with it, then that's cool and I can edit my sheet to be more specific regarding that initial invasion of the south.
@Buddha

I'm caught red-handed, Khargit is indeed just a bastardized derivation of Khergit. My creativity has its limits. It would seem that my consistency does too, as there I spelled it Khargit but in my actual sheet it was Khargat. I guess I'll say that Khargat is the way I'll roll with now on.

I like your little story on the history and will see about implementing it into my sheet.

Do keep in mind that the Khargats are not the best of vassals by any measure. No largescale sacking of Dieuporteille would be going on in peacetime, but small bands might still roam about unwanted and the occasional skirmish or looting of a hamlet might happen. The Khan can't control all his fractious people even if he deigned to, and like the real Cossacks some of them are little more than glorified bandits or vagabonds that roam the realm. And I'm thinking that the Khargats would have been subjugated by Dieuporteille and the empire at most a hundred years ago, so I imagine that resentment might very well live on between the two peoples.

So all that being said, option B is far more likely. I'd imagine that Dieuporteille might really hate the pagan Khargats yet still tolerate them for the wealth that their traders bring across the Empire* and for the military support and profits that they can offer in war. I'd imagine that our two dignitaries would have that bitter rivalry, mistrust, and general loathing of one another that one would expect, though perhaps they'd keep reasonably good relations with one another out of mutual interests.

*It hasn't really been alluded to in my sheet yet, but Khargat merchant caravans travel throughout the empire and even beyond and have essentially monopolized the spice and slave trades. They also probably have a big stake in the salt and silk trades, so staying on their good side does bring some profit. But then again, profit would also come from being a jerk and just taxing the hell out of any Khargat trade routes that go through your province...

[@Everyone else]

I finished Chugo Bey's sheet, by the way. Now I just have the more daunting task of finishing the Khanate's sheet.
@Cyclone Perhaps you could've raided Dieuporteille once, and met their match against some of the finest knights? Especially given the religious ferocity of the Dieuporteillean knights, it's likely they would've done their best to drive back these heathens.

Could be even that they were the ones that pushed them away from the southern provinces -- explaining why they didn't venture too far down.

Of course it'd be weird if I only said how I beat you, so if you have suggestions for things your people could've done to mine, I'm open to that.


When I see your country, I basically read *insert medieval France here*

I imagine that Dieuporteille is forested and swampy in many parts like France was. It makes sense for them to have historically inflicted a crushing defeat upon the Khargats, who would be used to battle on the open plains or foothills and wholly unprepared for fighting in the forests and swamps. Perhaps after the failed invasion of their lands, Dieuporteille was somehow involved in the eventual subjugation of the Khanate?

But anyways, I had in mind an intense rivalry as the knights of Dieuporteille compete with the Khargat warbands for the honor of fighting as the Empire's cavalry. The disciplined and pious knights with their heavy cavalry would stand in pretty stark contrast to the lighter horse archers and the Khargit's hit and run tactics.

Seeing as Dieuporteille is on the frontier of the other nations ripe for conquering, that opens up more room for interesting interaction. Because the Khargit's are slavers and have a warlike culture that would profit form pillaging and conquering, they'll push for the empire to expand. This obviously has some implications for your province since it's on the border and their knights would fight alongside the hordes and see firsthand how savage they still are.
Pretty heavy work in progress here, but it's a start at least. Normally I'd PM myself the sheets and fill them out on my own time, but this time I figured that I'd post here and just edit and update it as usual while allowing you all to get a sneak peak of sorts and see what I've got so far. Feel free to look for ways to integrate your provinces' history and such with what I'm working on here; maybe the Pagan hordes sacked your cities back in grandma's day?



@Flynn
I actually wasn't thinking along the lines of sending a representative uninvited and forcing a position at court if something implied that, but now that you sparked the idea I think that's exactly what I'd do. Most fantasy tropes seem to have already been filled by one representative or another, so I suppose mine will be some sort of corrupt slaver/merchant that just wants to make money.

I'll get started on my sheets!

I think having a unified religion would be more interesting. (Bar maybe the cossacks..?) Because then we can argue about semantics in religion, and it creates a basis for my country to have some value at least (because we produce pious knights) rather than being your run of the mill stupid province that doesn't offer much.


What, did you really think the vicious Horde of steppe nomads might be good little monks? No, I had intended to make them filthy pagans from the start!
Though it has little bearing on me (well, rather than causing the stock market to crash and in doing so making my parents rant about those nasty Brits) I must say that I stand by Brexit and view its success as...inspirational. From what I have seen the 'stay' camp had nothing to argue but pragmatism, and while many of their points were true and valid, the 'leave' camp saw the far future and how the EU likely would've swallowed the UK and taken away all sovereignty. The idea only sounds absurd until you realize the the EU has incessantly tried to centralize power and increase their own authority. Brexit spat in the face of globalism, a giant that I had always thought to be too big to stop.

This guy on Youtube was a big proponent of leave and I think his arguments are well articulated.

youtube.com/watch?v=RRPmXbksPgQ

youtube.com/watch?v=5vpo9qzsfL4
@Kho@Double Capybara

>looks longingly down at his crown, reminiscing of his short-lived reign as King of Maps
>shrugs
>chucks the crown at Capybara

Screw maps and shiz! That's it! You're now Le Cartographer!

As motivation dictates i may finally update what I had before, but if Capy volunteers to make something nice I'm all for it.

Yeah, @Vec told @Kho who then told this guy called @Cyclone. Funny how quickly word of mouth can travel.
@Cyclone That is separate. The horde Ventus and Teknall and co are fighting is a separate horde to the Grot horde.

Of course, there is some possibility that during the Avatar battle royale that this horde will be destroyed, but I think we'll try and avoid that so we can have the other battle too.


Right then, that's what I thought.

You and Rtron seem to have this all figured out so I'll leave it to one of you two to initiate this eventual collab. Just send the PM whenever
@Flynn

I'm intrigued by this roleplay!

I had the idea to represent a group of subjugated nomads rather than an actual province; think something along the lines of the Cossacks. They'd have a nasty history of warring and raiding so I imagine everybody would hate them, but they'd also be powerful militarily and provide good horsemen for the kingdom. Mainly they'd want free passage and grazing rights (though this might get mistranslated into pillaging rights), and since no vassal would ever allow this in their own territory they'd be trying to get the king to override the other provinces.

Before I commit to making an actual sheet, does this idea sound acceptable to you?
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