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What Are You Listening To?

A Magical World | headintheclouds & Denny

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"That's all you got?" Abram said, spitting blood towards the man before him. "When I get these things off of me, I'm going to kill you, you know that right?"

Abe was never a man for threats, but being punched and kicked while being tied up kind of pissed him off. It pissed him off enough that he was threatening the men who stood around him. The easy route would have been to use spells on Abram, but luckily he had a magic charm on him that helped protect him from out-bound spells, for a the time being.

One of the men cracked his fists, grinning ear to ear, as he stepped up, lifting the young Auror to his feet as he began leading him back into the room that Claire was left. Abe was thankful that she wasn't hurt as he entered the room, his own face smiling as blood trickled down from his lip.

"I'm right here," he said, "Fine and dandy." Abram was then tossed beside Claire, with the man quickly leaving the room, locks and bolts sounding before his heavy footsteps faded behind the wooden barrier.

"Are you alright?" Abram said, wiping the blood with his shoulder. "These guys... They were expecting us to drink the alcohol. I think they work for Khan, but no one is saying anything. If I only had my damn wand."

Fire Emblem: Lost Song

@Lord of Evil accepted!

I'll be getting my own character up within the week then starting this soon!

Log Horizon: North Wen Alliance

I'm going to have to drop out, can't do one post a day or every other day! :(

Fire Emblem: Lost Song

@Denny Posted him over, and Raven blood it shall be then, want that added into the CS as well so it doesn't get forgotten?

@Eisenhorn

Yeah, that'd be best!

edit: can you put it in a hider too? :B

Fire Emblem: Lost Song

@Eisenhorn Looks good, thanks for the clarification on learning to fly and his reasoning for the pilgrimage. And yeah, maybe Raven blood would make more sense. Dragon's seem like a bunch of stuck up assholes, so I think it'd be hard to get one to fall in love with, more so even meet one. Accepted, you can move'em over to the Character tab.

What Are You Listening To?

Honey Lake Records /dead/

@Obscene Symphony Yes, yes! Send Alicia right over!

Fire Emblem: Lost Song

@Product — Bryce Wulfblod : It's short and sweet, but for the personality, you're missing descriptions. Like I said it was my fault because in the first character sheet I didn't specify it, so apologies from me. If you could fill in a bit more with his heritage too, from when he found out the truth, that would be good, also telling us what Laguz bloodline his brand comes from. One last thing is, you mention he moves from town to town, but what is his reasoning for the pilgrimage?

@Eisenhorn — Weiland Voss : A good character overall, but there is one thing that doesn't equate for me. It is that he is proficient in mounted combat, specifically flying mounted combat, but he's only had Altena for some time, a few years or so as an adult. I can see horseback being an easier skill to acquire, but with flying-mounted combat you have a lot more physics to deal with along with experience and time. I know he is older than what he seems as he is Branded, and Branded folk age slower, so if you could fill that in, I think it should be A-OK. Two final things, the heritage of his brand, which Laguz heritage is it? And why does Weiland want to go on the pilgrimage or what is his role in it?

@Lord of Evil — Garret Kilroy : Every group needs a snarky thief, and it seems Garret will fit the bill. A scout and survivalist it seems, so he would make a good addition to the party. Though, there are a lot of holes in his short backstory. You never mention his mother's murder, just that he's always looking for her killer. Secondly, why does he want to go on the pilgrimage to Hatari? Answer those, we should be okay.

Honey Lake Records /dead/

@Obscene Symphony Alicia Nilsson — Loved her and the fact that you picked a genre that isn't always as highlighted our out there in mainstream music. It fits in well with what I envisioned for Honey Lake artists, not to mention you picked a very cute name for the band. Also want to note, if we don't find you a band, might need you to make some NPC's to fill that void up for the rest of Gramophone.

@LetMeDoStuff Owen Riley — The transitions in his life as a person and an artist is very believable. For me, that's one of the biggest things that I look for in characters, the believeability that they have to actually be a real person. To his emo songwriting, to his not wanting to change himself into a mainstream media singer, but developing into a current artist by also (what I assume) retaining his artistry as an angsty singer-songwriter.

@RavensMuse Katt Mercedes — You did what I was looking for in having the possibilities of having characters have any open role within a label. But her backstory leaves things to be desired. She is isn't interesting, but she wants to inspire others, I feel that those things are contradicting each other as people find inspiration in things that are noteworthy or interesting. Even her nickname, Muse, ties in with what she wants to accomplish but telling us that she's not interesting makes that statement kind of unbelievable. She's also very young, which isn't a bad thing, but it seems as if she's done a lot in a short amount of time. And to the mystery that someone from HLR solved, is it that they found out who she really is or is it that they found her interesting enough that they would want to hire her?

For now, unaccepted, but with the right changes you should be good.

@Metronome Kurt Moretti — First thing, if you could use the format posted for the character sheet, that'd be awesome! Now onto the review. I'm a fan of angst, as it played a pivotal role in my own life, so characters who have a lot of that, totes magotes. I can see him being that band member that no one really knows about, but you do know they are there (looking at you Howie). The thing that irks me though, is the whole not talking part, but I mean you explain it that he does know ASL, so that helps kind of relieve a bit of uneasiness with me. I do want to question what was the incident that caused him to have damaged cords? I don't believe it was ever stated and that was an important event in Kurt's life, so it'd be good to know. Also something similar that I mentioned to one of the others, if we don't find some people who'd like to join your punk-rock band I might need you to make some NPC's to fill in the voids, just for contingency sake. So right now, after a few of the changes I believe you should be good, but until then not accepted.