Dedonus

Create-A-Hero: A Superhero RPG (Closed)

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I can alter that no problem.

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Thanks.

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Very well, I'll eliminate the list then.

@Fallenreaper

re:color That was a typo. I meant note, not know...

Create-A-Hero: A Superhero RPG (Closed)

@Fallenreaper: I am currently working on some edits as we speak before I head out for lunch. Should be up in a few minutes (hopefully before the top of the hour).

Edit: Maybe hiders for lore to separate them out?

Create-A-Hero: A Superhero RPG (Closed)

Feedback:
-I don't think the "Welcome to The Create-A-Hero RPG" needs to be in that large of font. We already have a banner at the beginning. To me, it almost feels redundant.
-Here is some help for characters in the hero/villain/w-t-l examples:
Hero: Superman, Spider-Man, Iron Man.
Villain: Joker, Green Goblin, Magneto.
Walking the Line: Punisher, Deadpool.
-For character speech color, you might also want to know that the colors are also in the "Formatting Cheatsheet" below the reply box.

Create-A-Hero: A Superhero RPG (Closed)

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Come on. Nothing bad has ever come about from keeping a tentacle monster gem.. Probably.

@VATROU

Are you sure?

All-Star Marvel: Audax Mundus Novus - Season 1 (Completed)

Got a post up. I'll try to work on a Hawkeye post soon.

All-Star Marvel: Audax Mundus Novus - Season 1 (Completed)

Peter Parker | Bobby Drake | Scott Summers

“I knew that I would have some company after I captured these muties.” Herbert Landon declared calmly, even with the ground floor having been covered with the gas emitted by the smoke grenades and with a mutant wielding an automatic assault rifle. He began to walk through the fog of smoke towards a ladder that led up to a separate upper level in that room. “That’s why my, well, investors decided to provide a little help, just in case anyone decided to interfere with my experiments. Well, I guess this is my cue to exit stage right.”

“I don’t think so.” Cyclops shouted from his perch above, while he aimed his visor at the ladder so that he could wreck Landon’s means of escape before he could climb up it. Although Cyclops was successful in putting the ladder out of commission without injuring Landon, a bullet whirled right past his head, missing it by only inches. Instinctively, Cyclops hit the deck, diving for the floor of the upper deck so that he could protect himself from the marksman below.

“Quicksilver, I thought I told you to disarm everyone down here!” Cyclops shouted into the ‘x’ shaped communicator.

“You could have killed me!” Landon yelled up towards Cyclops, “By breaking into this facility, your actions only prove my point that the world needs my formula. You are a disease that is killing off humanity!”

“Funny coming from the man who would willingly use humans as Guinea pigs.” Iceman taunted back. At that moment, Bobby Drake was trying to freeze the chemicals within the vat in the center of the room. If you cannot stop the cages from being moved over to the vat of chemicals, you might as well try to prevent them from being submerged. So far, he had only managed the create a thick layer of ice (or rather a layer of the chemical in a frozen state), but there was plenty of liquid still underneath that layer of ice. Suddenly, something swung out of nowhere and knocked Iceman down onto the floor. All Bobby could discern from the situation was that he saw a red and blue blur come straight at him.

When Iceman began to pick himself off the ground, he saw someone in a red and blue costume standing before him. Confused at what he was seeing, Bobby said, “Webhead, what are you thinking? We’re on the same side!”

“What are you talking about?” Spider-Man called out to Bobby, but the X-Man realized that that voice did not come from the costumed man who was standing in front of him. Instead, it came from the guy, wearing the same exact suit, who was trying to hold back the cages containing Nightcrawler and Firestar, hoping not to electrocute himself.

“Holy cow!” Iceman exclaimed when he realized that there were two Spider-men. “Unless I have double vision, we have a shapeshifter down here!”

Create-A-Hero: A Superhero RPG (Closed)

I have the next Arachne post ready once War-Pulse comes to his senses and joins Iron Knight and friends. ;)

Create-A-Hero: A Superhero RPG (Closed)

@nitemare shape@Kalistar: Response is up, although I am still waiting on a certain man in blue and silver to meet our "Not-Iron Man". ;)

Create-A-Hero: A Superhero RPG (Closed)

Kelly Brown | Samantha "Sammy" Kadowsky | Zac Wilson

“We need to talk. I’m sure that you’ve heard about the situation in Lost Haven. We need your help to stop it.” The man sitting on the couch, who was dressed down in an entirely black costume, growled impatiently. The woman right next to him tried to provide some tact in the conversation, but Lyger continued to rush to the main point as he revealed their knowledge of Zac and Kelly being kidnapped and taken to West Virginia.

“For starters.” Zac began his response, “It sounds like you two knew an awful lot about my girlfriend and I, but we have no idea who you two are. How can we know that we can trust you two?”

Radiance continued her attempt at counterbalancing Lyger’s blunt and straightforward approach to this little recruitment mission. She even made a little dig at her associate when she claimed that at least she was sorry about breaking into their apartment. When she was about ready to finish speaking, Radiance pulled out her trump card, hoping it could alleviate Zac, Kelly, and Sammy’s concerns about the two ‘intruders’ motivations.

"Icon said that he thought you might be able to help." Radiance finally admitted.

“Well, Icon did help us out in Lost Haven that one time.” Kelly thought out loud as she considered what Radiance had said, “If Icon is involved with this, maybe would should trust them.”

“I don’t know.” Zac replied to his girlfriend, “Although we did mention that we were from Albany, we never told him where we lived exactly. Something feels a little off.”

While Zac and Kelly were having a short conversation about how they should proceed, Sammy slipped over to the side of the couch and leaned up against the arm that was closest to Lyger. “So…I can tell that you’re a cat-themed superhero from your costume. But are you a cat person?” For a moment, there was a short pause. After quickly thinking about what ‘cat person’ could mean, especially with herself in mind, Sammy immediately qualified her comment.

“Oh, I don’t mean ‘cat person’, like someone like me, but, you know, a cat person”. Sammy twirled her cat tail in her hand as she tried to avoid any confusion that she wasn’t asking him whether he was spliced with cat DNA, but rather whether he liked cats. “I mean, Bruce Wayne dressed up like a bat despite he was scared silly by them.”

“Okay. We’ll come along, but we have our own conditions. First, tell us who you two are. Second, tell us how the heck you found us. And third, our friend here is coming with us, too. If she doesn't go, we don't go.”

Create-A-Hero: A Superhero RPG (Closed)

@Fallenreaper Maybe you should post either her or in a separate thread in the character sheet forums so that we can have a better idea of what information we need to be giving you. Also, some comments about the events header that you showed us a few days ago. You had the following:

Current Month: February

C-A-H World Arcs Currently Going On

NAME~OWNER~PROGRESSION~OPEN OR PRIVATE

Fallenreaper

I think you could change it in this way:

Current Month: February

Current C-A-H World Arcs

NAME~OWNER~PROGRESSION~OPEN OR PRIVATE

It just sounds so much more like a title instead of something you might say to your buddy.