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@Dedonus Well, what about the gang Josie is in? I don't intend for them to be a serious threat to the Shroud, and right now, they consist of mainly two-bit thugs, your typical 'gangstas', with the exception of Byron, Josie, and their driver.


Yes, if @ClocktowerEchos would like to take on Josie's gang, then that is an option, too. It is just that Josie is a metahuman, while Ryder is not.
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It's only kind of a trap. Also, that's the end of Marie's backstory and the next post will be moving into the present. Which brings me to this. @Dedonus , how do I get involved on any level with the Pax Metahumana event?


The best way to get involved is by trying to locate the "bomb" that has been planted in Lost Haven. Right now, only @FacePunch's Polemos is searching for it (although the proto-Guardians - CAH RPG's version of the Justice League/Avengers - will be looking for it soon). PM me if you want more details.

Ryder hath been moved.

Now then, can I ask for some details on all the major events that have transpired IC, who the big villain is this time, how/when should I introduce Ryder and who wants to be a friend? :3


Major Events are detailed in the OP, as others have already mentioned. Probably the best villain for your character to take on is the Cowl, who is basically the Kingpin of Crime of this game. While I would not recommend Ryder running in and taking on the Cowl from the beginning, I am sure that @NeutralNexus would allow you to take on some smaller operations.
@nitemare shapeMade added a sample, I copied it back for your convince.


@AthinarI'll keep it in mind. I've also changed the speech color.


Ryder is approved. Please post the complete Character Sheet in the character tab. :)
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Whoops, sorry about that >.<"

As for the scene where Jack's brother died, the second shot was originally from a police officer shooting at one of the kidnappers but then I decided to do some editing and somethings might have got derpy. Same with the grammatical stuff.


No problem. The sample post is kind of our fault because we did not realize that it was missing from the OP (although it is mentioned in the copy-ready template in the hider).

EDIT: Can I ask what NMS is? o.o


NMS = Nitemare Shape
Name:Jackson R. Thatch
Alias: Ryder


While I am still looking into it with NMS, I am pretty sure that we still require a sample post. I believe we changed the rule so that, when you submit your first character sheet, you have to submit a sample post (which you can use as your first post...I always do that), but you don't have to submit any more sample posts if you decide to make a second or third character.

Otherwise, the character sheet looks good. The only comment that I would have is that the scene where Jackson's brother dies in the 3rd paragraph of the origins section seems a little confusing, especially after his brother dies. What confused me was that second shot. Who fired it and who was targeted by the gunfire? After reading it a couple times, I think I understand what is going on more than when I was writing this post. Also, check your first sentence of the first paragraph in the same section. You use "and" for "an" and "was lived" instead of "was living" or "lived".
@nitemare shape: I just realized that the op no longer has a "sample post" section in the character sheet template (the one in the hider does, but not the one that explains what each section means.
I apologize for not having posted in a week. I have been busy this past week (plus my muse has been hitting full stride in the C-A-H RPG). I'll make sure I get a Hawkeye post up tonight.
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Yeah, he won't be too happy. He also won't be too happy when he finds out about what happened at the spring football game....

"see what happens when you jackasses send me out of the city?" lol


And the others will say: "Dude, you would have been among those corpses if you were there. Take a chill pill, please!"
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I'm okay with it, War-Pulse made it very clear he wasn't playing by their rules exactly, he was setting his own terms in a place he had no footing to renegotiate other than the information he had. The fact he was not assaulted and taken in on the spot is the most surprising, given his work. I'm happy the way it played out, tentative alliances are always the most interesting.


Chris did say that if they were there to force him to join them, they would have done that by now.

I'll try to have a response post up tomorrow. I'll try to fit in Chris imagining how Lyger would respond to the news that they sent War-Pulse to recruit Arachne ("What the hell were you all thinking!).
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That's not exactly what I had in mind with that....


I wouldn't say any of them "stuck it to Iron Knight". Boom probably came the closest, but I would not say that they turned on him yet. Heck, I wouldn't be surprised if Lyger would have applauded IK.

However, Iron Knight still needed to call out War-Pulse. That was War-Pulse's offer to accept, not Iron Knight's. Sure, War-Pulse said he accepted the "deal", but he made it seem like Iron Knight was the one who needed to accept. Doesn't help that he threw all the redemption stuff in his face.
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