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In this case, I actually mean the plates of bone Kimmimaro had under his skin. It's never mentioned as a jutsu, so I'm unsure if it's just an innate thing which comes along with his KG.


That's definitely not a jutsu, just an innate ability.

@Masaki Haruna Let me look later, playing a game of CSGO now.
I mean, that's not how/why it was organized like that, but I guess it could look like that.
I find neither of them particularly appealing and find the clans story to be rather cliché, to be honest. If anything, I liked Madara. Mostly because he makes a lot of sense to me, and he said some sensible things.

I prefer the Hyuga.
I have to warn you that neither me nor Hillan really likes the Uchiha all that much.
@Bishop Just because you can't use them doesn't mean you don't have them. Everyone has 5 natures. But you are more inclined to 1 nature, and then a second, and then a third, and then a fourth, and then a fourth. Now consider that most people only ever unlock 3 of them during their lifetime.

Therefore, it's very impressive that Hiruzen managed to use all 5 at a master level.
@Hillan It's about mastery yes. But, also, I think Kakashi can only copy them. I.e. if he sees someone do a water jutsu, he couldn't later go 'oh I remember this' and just come up with the same jutsu somehow.
Besides, everyone has all five chakra natures, it just takes a lot of skill to use all five (i.e. to the point where someone that uses all five is revered as God Shinobi.. point in case, Hiruzen.)
This is going to be a very silly question I feel. Are all eye techniques kekkei genkai? I don't recall other eye techniques outside of that, apart form maybe senju modes if that counts. I wanted to create an eye technique with the theory of an insects compound eyes behind it, dividing the users vision into a smaller and smaller hexagonal grid with co-ordinates allowing greater accuracy.

I have been basing my character's family on the dragonfly (because why not, right?), but I felt that an eye kekkei genkai is somewhat cliche and was going to have extreme body control being it instead, hence the query :P

EDIT: Also the eyes seems to be a kind of... worse sharingan if they're a kekkei genkai


Theoretically, dojutsu are not kekkei genkai per definition. Canonically, yes they are. And because of that, if they exist as non-kekkei genkai they are almost certainly hiden techniques. But if you want to do the compound eye thing, then that's 100% certainly a kekkei genkai, even if it is limited to 1 person and not a clan.

Eye kekkei genkai are cliché though I will agree.
Review in red, you should be used to that


In short: look at the comments I made, and edit it accordingly, and then let me know when you've edited it. It's a good basis, but there are some things that need clarification (I still don't get the jasmin eagle motif thing..). Overall I'm satisfied though, just needs some more detailing imho.

I humbly present my character sheet. I aimed for a female Uchiha and I was wondering to take out or add in majority of the CS. So many questions too like Chidori. Does she qualify as Chuunin? Sure

I also made a custom clan. We may collab depending on what ideas you gained for it. I am loving the concept and belief you and Hilian made. I'm a fan of world building so yeah.. is it okay if I made a custom clan? Yeah, I'm surprised at the lack of custom clans/kekkei genkai, but yes. You can make custom clans.

Chidori have so many variations. Does that mean I will only be able to use one variant. If I can use more than one like Chidori Current, does that count as a second A rank? Does Chidori variants fall under one jutsu and not another jutsu? We have talked about it in the past and we've told you that we generally want to see it as a new jutsu.

It's fine making her two swirled right or should I go for three swirls? We won't rise above 3 tomoe for now, so it's probably best to have 1 or 2 so that you can have character progression towards 3. It's your call.

I tried making her like that. As much as possible, I am refraining from making more jutsus. The user itself is the definition, not the jutsu defines the user. We've taught you well.

Overall, I focused more on the character than the jutsus itself good and looked at Chuunin examples and the best example I got was Mū, kudos to the author who made him. I let the judgement be in your hands. I have lots of questions in the tip of my tongue too so these are what I can thinkfor now.

EDIT:

Uchiha vs "Hyuuga"

Not really a fair fight innit


Masaki, good to see your OOC commenting still makes me confused as ever.

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