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@Enkryption

Changed Rose's Title to "The Canary", her Name to "One Wilted Rose", and edited her section on how she gained it.

ATTN: @PaulHaynek & @Rezod92 (Kerry)

@Enkryption Most of your CS looks good! I just caught the name, though. The name is alright, but the title and name are separate. I apologize because the naming conventions are WEIRD in this series. I'll look at explaining it better when I'm more awake. So your character could have the name One Poisoned Rose and the title The Poisoned. Or something of the like. I suggest you keep the name One Poisoned Rose. It's very pretty! Other than that, it looks good to me!


I see, I see. I can amend that easily enough.
Just copying my CS app over.

Curious to see more.

@Enkryption That looks good to me! Thank you very much. Apologies if this is a silly question, but I’m new here so I want to make sure I do things right. When I make this into an rp, should I @ everyone in this thread?


Not a silly request at all. Specificity helps in the long run.

And, yes. Once you make the proper RP thread, you'll link the OOC here, and ping everyone that's applied (usually with a character sheet) in that post.

So, like:

@Enkryption I adore her. The thimble was an absolutely adorable choice. Assuming you use this particular character, would you be comfortable with me giving her future effects from the illness? It would not be anything deadly but it would lean into the body horror elements. I cannot specify what without spoilers, though.

Additionally, I want to add more specificity to her ability. It’s not taking away anything. I just want to specify that her body would be more resistant to venoms, poisons, illness, and spider bites. These are all specific threats I have planned and I believe the specificity will help later.


Both of those are fine with me.

I'm assuming you are asking for:

Animalistic Ability: Immunization. Due to The Illness, Rose has developed hyper-aggressive antibodies that makes her more resistant to venom, poison, illness, and spider bites, allowing her to explore otherwise dangerous areas, but at the cost of a heightened metabolism.
@JewelSerket


@Enkryption, I actually have character sheet requirements written out! I'm new to this particular site, so I took my friend's advice to wait until I was posting the rp itself. If you would like, I'll gladly send it here!

Also both of those abilities are absolutely perfect. Slimy porcupine made me giggle!


I'd be glad to see it. I'm so used to seeing one written up in an IC post. I forget I was new once, too. XD

I might draft a handful of critters, and submit them; see what other people do, and which of mine vibe best.
@JewelSerket

I'm interest to see a CS, so I can get a general idea in my head.

Torn between a lone wolf that can harden himself spikes like a slimy porcupine or a sneaky little lady that can change her slime pattern to actively camouflage herself.

But, I wanna see exactly what works first.
Quite the interesting proposal. I'mma keep an eye on this.
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