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Changed Rose's Title to "The Canary", her Name to "One Wilted Rose", and edited her section on how she gained it.
Changed Rose's Title to "The Canary", her Name to "One Wilted Rose", and edited her section on how she gained it.
@Enkryption Most of your CS looks good! I just caught the name, though. The name is alright, but the title and name are separate. I apologize because the naming conventions are WEIRD in this series. I'll look at explaining it better when I'm more awake. So your character could have the name One Poisoned Rose and the title The Poisoned. Or something of the like. I suggest you keep the name One Poisoned Rose. It's very pretty! Other than that, it looks good to me!
@Enkryption That looks good to me! Thank you very much. Apologies if this is a silly question, but I’m new here so I want to make sure I do things right. When I make this into an rp, should I @ everyone in this thread?
@Enkryption I adore her. The thimble was an absolutely adorable choice. Assuming you use this particular character, would you be comfortable with me giving her future effects from the illness? It would not be anything deadly but it would lean into the body horror elements. I cannot specify what without spoilers, though.
Additionally, I want to add more specificity to her ability. It’s not taking away anything. I just want to specify that her body would be more resistant to venoms, poisons, illness, and spider bites. These are all specific threats I have planned and I believe the specificity will help later.
@Enkryption, I actually have character sheet requirements written out! I'm new to this particular site, so I took my friend's advice to wait until I was posting the rp itself. If you would like, I'll gladly send it here!
Also both of those abilities are absolutely perfect. Slimy porcupine made me giggle!